Maaneet os--**..Yeh Kasoor..**..EPILOGUE on page23 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Maan remain silent in anger..Geet agn hm the q..maan..ap mere sawalon k jawab nehi dia..aisa kya bat hai jis vajese apke bst frnd apke dushman ban gaye..kya hua jo ap 12 sal ki dsti ko bhula dia..he give hr a fiery glance..Dosti?..huhh..jo vick ne kia woh koi lakh dushmani me v nehi krta..geet agn askd hm impatiently..woh hi to mujhe janna hai..ki bat kya hai..he nw throw another q on hers..Agr kaha v to kya tm yakeen karoge..Aur vaise v tm kch v nehi janteho woh main kaise manlu..
Geet luk at hm straightly..i swear by god..Main kch nehi janta..he luk at hr fr 2 min..he knew hr..she never say lie taking vow of god..yehi ruko tm.. main ata hu..he went to hz rum..geet wonderd..
He came aftr sme min..ye lo,dekho tmhare bhaika kia pap ka savut..he gave hr the locket..she saw..itz belong to hr bro..bt she didnt get..wht z relation of it with the current incidents..
ye to bhai ka hai..Ye apke pass? Aur..maan inturrapted..sab to ye janta hai ki meri family ghr me aag lagneki vajese mare hai..par ye koi accident nehi..tmhare bhai k saajesh tha..
Geet eyes poppd out hearing it..ye ap kya kehrahe hai..He lukd at hr..hs face get changed wid pain..tm puch rahe the na..mujhe ye kaha mila..us hadse k bad sirf mera dad 2 din jinda the..jab main hospital me gaya doctor ne mujhe ye dia..kaha ye unke k hat me tha..
Hearing it geet felt lyk..the world get crashd in frnt of hr..she bcm dumb..got full cnfused.. Ye kya horaha hai babaji..Bhai aisa nehi kr sakte..par ye locket..ye kaisa kashmakash hai..nehi..jarur aur v koi bat hai.. she thought..he still talking..aur main tmhe yaha laya..bas vic ko taqleef dene..Usse ye samjhane apnose dur jana kya dard deta hai..she lukd at hm..main kch nehi samaj parahi hu maan..sab kch pehlia lag rahi mere pass..he smild indifferently..main janta tha ..tm ye sab yakeen nehi karoge..she sighd..she cant able to deny neithr hs talk nor the belive fr hr bro..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
CONTINUED..
She luk at hm..maan..main apko ek req karu..ap ek bar mere sath chaliye..ekbr bhai k samne khare hojayie..he luk at hr wid surprise.. a thought cm in hs mind..thz girl nw may be tring to get hm into a trap beleiving hr bro..geet tmhe kya main itna beukuf lagta hu..ki tmhare sath main jaunga..fr tm mujhe apne bhai k hath me chod doge..she felt so hurt hearing ths..Agr mujhe aisa krna hota to main kal hi kia hota..maan..thodi varosa ap v mujhpe kr k dekhiye.. bass ekbr bhaise amne samne bat kijiye..he turnd hs bck..geet knw he still nt beleiving hr.. agr bhai apko mujhe yaha lane k liye koi saza v dena chahe to..main samvalunga unhe..
he luk at hr..thr eyeslockd..he brk it..thk hai..main jaunga..he went frm thr ..she saw hm going silently..thn just prayd..Bass babaji sab thk rakhna.. sab ap pe hai..
AT EVENING..vicrant sitting at home worriedly..thnking abt hr sis.. Just thn maaneet entrd..maan fumd more seeing vickram in frnt of hm.. vic saw thm..surprised..ran to thm.. huggd geet..geet..tujhe pata hai.. main kitna pareshan tha..jaan me jaan nehi tha..she cried..vic luk at hr..hld hr face farmly..thn luk at hm.. maan..tu..he turned hs face.. Hs inside z burning..
Vic sighd..hs eyes went to geets hand..he knotted hs brow seeing red marks..hld hr hand..She felt so awkard..nw vic too bcm angry..Maan ye kya hai.. he showd hm hr hand..maan luk at hr hand..thn at hm..Rassise bandha tha to marks agaye..he tld straightly..giving hm pain..vic leave hr hand..hld hs collar..Maan..tera himmat kaise hua ki..maan got mre angry..kyu dard horaha hai.. khd kya kia tha woh yad kr..samaj me arahe tujhe ki apnose dur hona.. unke dard kya hota hai..vic hld hs coller mre tightly..
Geet just fear thz..she went thm..tried to manage the situation..bhai chodiye unhe.. maan mera pati hai..ap unpe aise hat nehi utha sakte..vic got surprisd.. maan luk at hr in awe hearing hr lie to save hm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Thnx who lyk part 5...nw press lyk and comment here
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
awesome

geet made maan understand n tell him to meet her brother face to face

n rescuing maan by saying he is my husband

thanks for pm

continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
AWSOME UPDATE JAANU. GEET KO MAAN NE SAB BATAYA. ABHI WO CONFUSE HAI BUT STILL SHE MANAGE TO COMPELL HIM TO TALK TO HER BRO FACE TO FACE NICE. BUT MAAN IS VERY MUCH ANGRY WITH HIM SO SEEMS LESS CHANCE. AND IN LAST YOU DO BLAST. MY ANGEL INTRODUCED HIM AS HER HUSBAND 😛 NOW YE KYA PANGA HAI 😉 WAITING FOR NEXT BABY MUUUHHH
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
read pt 5 n6 together
so maan came back along with geet
n what did geet say husband
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
ye kya hua????
kis ne maara maan ke parents..
i don't think its vicky..
waiting for next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
me 😕 waho killed maanu's parents
chlo geet ne mna liya maanu ko to meet vvic
n she lied also
nice waiting 4 more

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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
part 6
nice part...
why doesnt he give them a chance to speak?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
simply brilliant loved it
keep writing,,

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