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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
this update shows vic did nothing haina
n maanu ko aiwe hi koi badkane ke liye did this haina
n maanu wt he did to geet oops
bt thax to babaji he realized soon wt he was doing
n geet do she have any feelings 4 maanu
hopeso
lvd ot

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
part 3
nice part...
why this misunderstanding?
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 4
Geet cuddled hrself..she bgn to sob nw..rememberd what was just maan going to do..Babaji ye kya horahe mere sath..maan kyu aisa kr..rahe.. ..woh kyu bhai pe itna naraj hai..aur in sab me meri kya galti hai..kyu meri sab se khubsurat sapna..sabse vayanak sapne banke mere samne aye..kyu..she clsd hr eyes..hr trs are flowing dwn lyk rain..she bcm exhusted..sleep dwn slowly..cuddling lyk a ball..
Here in another rum.. Maan z pacing around..feeling more restless..more pain..he punchd hs fist on wall..what was he going to do..hw could he even thnk of doing such cheap thng..Hw could he stoop so low..he brushd hs hair wid hand in frustaration..ye main kya krne jarahatha..mujhe to bas geet ko vic se dur rakhna hai..apne parivar ki log se dur hona kitna dard deta hai..bas usse woh mahsoos krwani hai..aur main..He z feeling horrible..he could just clsd hr in a rum aftr he found hr..bt he approchd lyk thz way!!His heart remind hm the feelings for geet..That feelings z pure..bt hs hate, rage,anger has insulted those feelings ..he sighd..removd all thinking from hz mind..he slowly peepd in geets rum..she z sleeping being lyk a ball..hr cheeks are soakd wid tears..in her sleep she z still sobbing..hs heart bleeded..why he couldnt be able to cntrol his anger..he hate vicky for wht he had done..he want to see hm in pain..bt tht nt means he could do such cheap thng..he lukd at her..hr shirt z torn..she sleeping hlding it cls..he tuk the duvet..tuckd it till hr nck..carefully he dont want her to get up..went out wid heavy heart..
Coming in hs rum..he bgn to drink to frget abt the pain..he rememberd geets word.. YEH KASOOR NEHI..VAROSA HAI..she trust him..hr trust over hm make hm feel more miserable..he z cursing hzself..U..na apne family ko..bacha paya..ab khd pe kabu rakh paya..dur reh use..bht dur..kabhi mat jana..uske pass..he put dwn his glass wid shaky hand..just lied dwn thr..sleep dwn..
CONT BELOW..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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CONTINUED..
geet wake up whn it almost noon..she get dwn went to washrum..splashd water on face..her eyes went to the mirror..saw the marks over hr nck, upper chest..all turnd blue nw..she turnd hr gaze..agn rememberd last nyt incident..tears forms in her eyes.. she wiped thm..cm bck to the rum.. thn saw sme cloths on side of bed.. she didnt noticed thm bfr..she tuk thm.. understood maan placed thm here..dard v woh deta hai..fr care v krte hai..par mujhe ye pata lagana padega..akher kya kia bhaine..jo maan aise kr rahe..she sighd.. went out..she chckd each rum..he z nt here..bt he lockd evry door carefully.. she cm to dining..found sme food on table..bt didnt feel lyk eat..just drink water..cm bck to hr rum..sat on bed.. thnk abt hr bro..he must be so tensed ..she bgn to cry reminding hm..
There..vick get cnfused wht to do.. how to get hs sis bck..how to make maan understand everythng..he tried so much to call maan bt no use.. kya karu main..police bataunga to... Misunderstanding aur bar jayegi.. babaji..ab ap hi sab dekh na..Sab bas ap pe hai..he clsd hs eyes fr pray..
At evening maan came bck to hme..enterd in dining..noticed foods remain same as he placed thm..he understood she didnt eat anythng..he felt so angry..bt he cntrolld it..went to geets rum..She startld seeing hm cm lyk tht..tmne khaya kyu nehi.. he askd..she luk at hm..thn trnd gaze ..mujhe bhook nehi thi..aur main khau na khau apko kya..hr words pierced hm..hlding her hand made hr stand..Ye tevar mujhe mat dhikhao..varna..she lukd at hm wid fearfull eyes..he saw thm..he just hate tht fear in hr eyes..bt he z the reson fr this fear..he left hr hand.. went out..she just saw hz going with tension..
After sometym..geet hear a sound of breking smthng.she wonderd ..hesitatly went to the direction of sound..and wht she saw,she shrickd.. maan z fully drunk..hs bth hands are bleeding so much as he hlding broken glass piece of bottle in hs fists..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnx who lyk and comnt on part 3...nd let me know should i continue MERE AJNABEE aur not...coz i m getting totall confusd..seeing low response..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh god me loving this cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
maan is feeling guilty for being hurting geet

hoping geet and vic will get to know the hatred behind maan

geet will help maan in getting hurt himself

continue soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
my maanu guilty
well he did wrong na so he should b guilty
bt geet do she lv him
thoda doubt huia isliye😆😆
vic is really innocent??? chodo
lvd it
waiting 4 more

m lv ur all works dare u think to discnt them😡😡😡

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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
awesome part

geet's barosa won over maan's anger
but poor she is feeling so distraught

n even maan is in danger

waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
maan will be punishing himself for hurting geet hain na
soon geet will be in love with him

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