Maaneet os--**..Yeh Kasoor..**..EPILOGUE on page23 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
part 10
nice...
now everythings clear...
where did he go?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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EPILOGUE
AFTER 6 YEARS..
Maan sitting helplessly..luking at hs 4 years old son..PREM..who z luking another direction making a grumpy face.. maan forget to bring his toy car..but he promised hm..he ll bring that tomorrow..but prem z not listening.. maan sighd..his son just became arrogent lyk hm..bt now he z understanding how difficalt to make a arrogent man understand something..
Maan tried to talk wid hm..prem saw..before maan could say somethng..he stoppd hm..Mujhe apse koi bat nehi klna..mela apse katti hai..he said wid a cute voice.. maan sit beside hm..Beta daddy ne kaha na..woh bhul gaye the..sorry na baba..main pakka kal apko lake dunga gadi..
Prem made more grumpy face..stood up.. come in front of hm..give hm a cute angry luk..Ap kal phlse bhul jayenge..ummm..mele ko abhi chaiye cal..maan got tensed.. Now at night from where he ll get it..beta abhi to dukan bandh hogaya hai..car kaha milegi..he bgn to tap hs feet on floor..meleko cal chaiye..bass.. maan sighd..tried to stop hm..
beta ap agr aise jump karenge to main car nehi lake dunga..prem immidiately stoppd jumping..knotted hs brow..To lake dijiye abhi.. maan shaked his head in disappointment..Beta..samjho..abhi sare dukan bandh hai..main kal subah hi la dung..Prem made a face..bgn to call geet..MUMMA.. MUMMA..Geet come from kitchen hearing his nonstop calling..prem went to her..huggd hr leg..she hold hm..Ale..kya hua mere shona ko.. prem luk at her cutely..daddy mujhe tang kl lahe hai..mujhe cal lake nehi dete..
Maan rolld hs eyes ..geet hide her smile..Acha beta.. par daddy kal car lake denge na.. prem shakd hs head..nehi woh kal phl se bhul jayenge..ap daddy ko dat do..geet smild..Thk hai main daddy ko dat dungi..abhi ap jawo.. upar jawo..dudh pilo..hmm..she calld nakul..tld hm to take prem..Thn luk at maan..he too silently went upstairs..geet smiled..bap beta dono..koi kisise kam nehi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
CONTINUED..
Geet cm behind maan in bedroom..huggd hm frm back..kya bat hai..bete ki sath daddy v bacha ban gaye kya..he turned to her..hld her by waist.. uhuu..main to ye soch raha tha ki..prem kitna jiddi ban gaya hai..
Geet cutely pulld hs nose.. akher dekhna padega na beta kiska hai..he smirkd..Acha ji..to ye blna chateho..main jiddi hu.. she nodded..Hmmm..kyu apko nehi pata..in a mocking voice..maan hld hr more cls..geet..mujhe aur v ek bat pata hai..hamari bete ne sare shararat tmse sikha hai..geet gigled..maan heed to kiss her..geet made hm steady..Ye ap kya kr rahe ho..darwaja khula hai..prem ajayega..he shaked hs head.. nehi ayega abhi..agn heed to hr nck..kissing softly..she bgn to wriggle.
Maan apko to bass mauka chaiye hota hai..chodiye na..bt he didnt pay attention..suddenly heard prems voice..maan immidiatly left geet..luk at othr side.. She hide her smile..prem come thr..frst luk at geet thn at maan..went to maan..daddy ..he luk at hm..prem streachd hs hand..maan tuk hm..prem huggd hm.. Solly..apko bula laga na..Maan carressd hs hair..Nehi shona. Prem luk at hm..to kal cal leke ana..thk hai..maaneet laughd..he pulld hs cheeck..pakka launga.. prem give a toothy smile..he put hm dwn..geet kissd hs forhead..Shona abhi jake so jawo..hmm..gud nyt.. prem too bade thm gud nyt..ran to hs rum..
Geet luk at maan..coughd.. main v ati hu..But befr she can go out..he clsd the door..smirkd..bgn to cm to her..she taking bcksteps..fall on bed..he cm over her..maan ap v na..chodiye mujhe..he put hs finger on her lips..thn bgn to kiss evry bit of hr neck..she hld hm..mre cls..he luk at hr..I love u..she smild.. I love u too..he carresd hr curl.. Geet mujhe ek beti chaiye..Pyarisi. she shied..Par agr phr beta hua to..He thought fr a moment.. To phrse beti k liye try karenge.. she hit hs chest playfully..huggd each othr..feeling thr love..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SORRY FOR LATE GUYZZ...THERE Z SOME PROB OF MINE...SO I COULD NOT BE ABLE TO UPDATE...THNX WHO LYKD PART 10...here z epilogue...give lyks ND COMMENTS...I LL GIVE UPDATE..OF MY OTHER STORIES SOON...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
Awesome story...
Read in one go...
Loved it totally...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
awww it was so cute
maaneetnthr baby n thr romance wow
vd it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
superb n beautiful ending...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovelyepilogue n fr d pm also...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
An os full of mystery,love,true friendship
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
Awsome update jaanu loved cute prem and maaneet pure love for each other
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Posted: 11 years ago


read the whole story...

nice job

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