MG Waiting For You Thread 1 - Page 25

loved the concept. very unique one

still geet is fearing that he will leave her at any time

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome update poor geet did not know her husband name loved how she was blushing when what the lady told her awesome update thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

great updates dear sorry for gettig late...I hav broken leg bear my short comment ll giv detail remarks next time

Originally posted by: Sheen-Coolkiwi

Waiting

Part 5

The lift carried them to their destination, the seventh floor of building. They came out, Geet followed by Maan.. The little bells of Geet Lahanga was making jingle sound in the quietness of corridor, giving the feel of her presence behind him. he was taking glimpse of her bride, turning again n again back

The door of their room was standing in front of two jittery souls. With little slide of digital key, it moved aside giving the space to enter, to the new couple, inside. They stepped indoor making the door shut. They were alone with each other, quite and very silent. The tone of nervousness was filling its way all over, making both the persons extreme uneasy. Maan stared Geet, found same shaky as him though her was very visible from outward unlike his. He gave a look to room. It was dark with curtains covered on windows, not letting the air of nature come inside. He went and opened all windows along with a balcony. Wind run inside to witness the most strange couple of the moment excitedly.

Maan did the last curtain aside , turned and became rooted. He witnessed the most amazing sight of his life. The girl, the unknown girl of hardly in age of seventeen , was standing near a open window. Decorated in red heavy bridal dress she was looking breathtaking. The white light of moon was facing his emit on her , enhancing her glow numerous times more. Her hair was waving & flying escaping from her veil, like was trying to cover the Moon, stopping it to stare her beauty. The shimmer on edge of her Dupatta was moving up and down like a fair, slim finger moves on piano,do it up n down bringing out the sweet harmony of heart. The combination of the black dancing long hair and song of shimmering harmony took, his heart away form where, Maan used to keep it. In trance without his know, his legs moves toward her, stopped near, in fact' very near, behind her. The smell of her hair was natural, he was surprised to know. How could it yet smell this much fresh when they had been traveling almost entire day!! some strands of her hair fell on his face, caressed. His hand lifted to remove it. His finger found it so soft , silk like smooth. He closed his eyes to grab the newest feel, amazingly pleasurable it was for him. He smiled with closed eyes. His heart was jumping in joy. He kept his hand on heart, stopping it. What if she hears. He opened his eyes-- " was I dreaming of her??'' Ohh!!!

He looked his heart, amazed it was not there. '' where the hell it gone!!!'' he got irritated with the speed, his insane heart was running away, far from him. it was with her, near her, showing its tongue to Maan. No, !! it shouldn't be happened, its not fair... not any ways!!!'' He had to compose, control his-self. He turned, back from her who was lost sighting the beautiful view of city in night, still & steady, Unknowing with the fact what was happening to Maan. He calmed himself, at least tried to. "What the hell I was thinking!!!'' ' he hastes to Intercom phone. Picked it up and ordered for dinner, intentionally with loud voice. Perhaps to hide the sound of his drumming heartbeats.

Geet startled with his almost shout. She came back in sense where she was and with whom!!.. She straightened her dress and again became stood like statue, with head down. She heard he was ordering Punjabi food for her and continental for him. "How did he know I like Punjabi food??'' She thought.

Maan guessed her liking about food and so he ordered, without asking her. His work finished and now again, he had nothing to divert his mind. He saw, she was still standing at same place. "Geet baith jaao'' he spoke, making him firm how much was possible. She came and sat at the most far edge of bed.

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"Dadimaa kaisi hai?''

Maan looked her. After ten minutes, she broke the silence of between them. "Wo she was your Dadi, I had guessed when saw her in hospital with you. Kaisi hai wo ab?''

"Geet I have to tell you something. Actually Dadi had minor heart-attack and so I could not tell her anything about this marriage. For some day you--''

He did not complete when Door had been knocked. Their dinner had arrived. Maan took it inside and settled on table. Both sat on chair at opposite sides. Maan Started his Pasta when found, her eyes on his plate. He looked her, she looked down, pretended to eat her Chole-Bhatoore. Maan again brought spoon to his mouth when found her gaze again, on his spoon. He kept it down. "Tumhe chahiye?'' He asked.

Geet was embarrassed, nodded no and had bit of her food. She was very eager to taste pasta. Maan guessed it with the expression she was giving while eating her food. He gave two spoons from his plate, to her.

"Nahi nahi.. rahne dijiye'' She was shocked ..

"Khalo Geet.. I know you want this'' He started again with his plate. Geet kept pasta in her mouth and found, it was so tasty. Her heart felt joy. She remembered how mush she wanted to eat this continental foods but never, her Brij Veerji gave her any chance to fulfill even her smallest dreams. She finished it before he could have another bite of his spoon and now again, her heart, started dancing like baby-desire. But how could she voice it out. She pouted looking Maan plate. Maan stared her, again let her be wet in shower of embarrassment. Maan shook his head, removed half of his plate into hers. Geet was nervous but the smell of Pasta dint let her stop relishing its taste. They finished their food.

Maan had to talk her, inform her that he, had to leave. His heart gone heavy. Had no straight to sound it out. He turned, she was resting on bed, was feeling very sleepy. Maan was standing in balcony, finding words to tell her. Finally his time got over when he got call from Dev. Dadi was asking for him.

He came inside saw, she had slept. Maan didnt find good to wake her up. He wrote a note for her saying he will be back tomorrow morning and also wrote his number, along with name. After placing it on side table, he proceeded to door. His heart was not at all liking to leave her like this but, he had no options anymore. He turned back , looked her. She was totally unaware of any happening. He twisted knob..

"Aap kaha jaa rahe hai!!!'' her shaky voice stopped his move...

Precap : Geet is missing...😲

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Wowww amazing part bechara Maan could't tell Dadi Maa about truth or Geet ko hotel me rahkna para but thank God he axcept her as his Mrs eagerly waiting