maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 75

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka

you write very good poems yaar... maine almost saari pdi hai... superb poems... if you get time ... so mere ff ke liye bhi likhongi poem... mujhe btana di...

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

POEM NO :1

this is the poem

i write for muskaan's new ff

like to share

i knew

me gone mad

kya kya likhne lahi hu

to much emotional

what to do

yeh din hi aise hai

you understand na

hi hi hiii

na hum bewafa the

na tum bewafa the

kasoor tha to,bas tha uss faasale ka

jo pahle pal se hi

hum dono ke darmiyaan the

tum ne kabhi kuch bhi to mujh se kaha nahi

aur agar kabhi kuch kaha hoga toh

un faasalo ke kaaran maine kabhi kuch bhi sunna nahi

aur kua sunti,

kyu sunti,

mai uss kahi gayi baat ko

kyoki jab maine huch sun na chaaha aapse

tab to kabhi ,aap ne kuch kaha nahi

aur ab

jab aap ne kaha ki

hum aapke hai

jism se rooh tak

din se raat tak

dil ki aakhiri saas tak

dhadkan ki aakhri aawaz tak

to mai chah kar bhi ,sun na saki

saare sapne dobaara dekhu

aisi himmat,khud mai bun na saki

ab

yeh sab jaan kar

teri har baat maan kar

ek ajeeb si kashmakash mai phas gayi hu ki

na tum bewafaa the

na hum bewafaa the

kasoor tha to tha

bas uss faasale ka

jo hameesha se,hum dono ke darmiyyan the

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

haaayyyeee it was so emotional😭
Surely it was the distance the silence between them... which didnt allow him to understand her... his preconceived notions about her... It was always expectations from her side which he never fulfilled...He was still so busy in his own principles he actually forgot that his life wasnt his own but connected with someone else🥱 and when he realized and wanted to say she was gone far away... It wasnt any faultfrom either side... Just being introvert about their feelings landed them in their own suffocating world of Kashmakash😉
Awesome one dear👏 Amazing loved it a lot😃

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

finally aap aa gaye

paro

aa gayi

😆😆😆

arre waah👏👏👏

start from start

with long comment

mera dil garden garden ho gaya😉😆

waiting for your reply on next 19 poem👏

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

@ anu darling aapki study kaisi chal rahi hai

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how are you