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Posted: 12 years ago
poem no : 19
for same ff hamarri prem kahaani

few line from geet point of view

kyu hua yeh saath mere
kyu tut gaye sapne mere
bina hue pure


kyu koi laut aaya
agar aana hi tha usse
toh gaya hi kyu tha

jab gaya tha woh zindagi se
toh har sapna le gaya tha
aur mujhe un apno ko dekhne ki sazaa de gaya tha

phir zindagi mein kya hua
kyu hua
kis liye hua
yeh sab baate yaad nahi
na todo mujhe iss kadar ke jud bhi na saku
nahi suni kissi ne meri faryaad bhi
toh ab uske aane se ,kuch aur jyaada apne rab se ruth gayi hu mein
ke kyu bheja ab usse ,jab itni tut gayi hu mein

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Posted: 12 years ago
poem :20
it for DANGEROUS LOVE
ff by sdlife 19



aaj jaana hai
aur dil ne yeh maana
hai

sirf khoon se jude rishto ko hii
gahra hone ka toh
haq nahi
jo rishte bane pyaar se
aur aapsi samman se
unnse gahra
toh ,koi rishta hi nahi

koi mar jaata hai pyaar ke liye
toh koi maar deta hai pyaar ke liye
toh koi sab kuch kho bhi deta hai
iss pyaar ke liye
par aaj yeh jaana
ki koi in sabse bad kar
bhul sakta hai apni har hud
aur umar bhar ka farz
sirf iss pyaar ke liye


yeh pyaar hi toh hai ,
jo har rihte ko jodta hai
kahi yeh pyaar ,har rishte ko
ek rihte ke liye todta hai
toh kahi yeh pyaar
khoon se gahra rishta bhi
kisi ke saath jodta hai


baap hi bete ke liye ,de qurbaani
yeh baat to sabne hai maani
par kabhi kabhi
pyaar paalne waale ka
har kissi ke haq ko ,picche chodta hai
jaisa aaj hamne dekha
yeh paalne waala hi hai
jo aati hui har takleef hi nahi
balki tyaar hai modne ko maut ka bhi rukh wahi


tell me guys
poem kaisi hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
all r awesome yaar
just love them

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Nishu!!!

How come I didn't know about this thread?

I looved each and every poems
what's amazing is that you wrote poems for each story and each character. You expressed their inner turmoils, their feeligns, emotions everything..

Girl you are amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

Keep them coming!!!

Love you for this!!!!⭐️❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no:

it for kashmakash by muskan
me here with my few lines😆😆
sorry for mistake😉(spelling mistake dear)


yeh kaisi tukado mein
zindagi jee rahe the hum
hai hum ,
ek dusre kee
yeh kyu nahi ,
ek dusre se kahe rahe the hum

apne aap banaye gaye
mere niyamo ke alawa
kabhi bhi , haan
kabhi bhi ,toh kuch maine kiya nahi
aur kya woh
badalna chahegi mujhe
iska bhi toh mokka ,
maine hame diya nahi

kya mera
hammare is rishte mein ,
khush na rahna
yu ghutna
aur
chupchap ,sab sehna
kya kasoor tha bas unhi ka
kya mera
kabhi bhi ,
kuch na kah paana hi
mera bhi kasoor tha hi
kyoki
woh meri baat sune
meri har chooti zid ke aage jhuke
mere nakhre uttae
mujhe apni palko par bethaiye
is sab ka mokka bhi toh
maine hame diya nahi

aaj jab woh aayi
mere yu saamne
tham gayi yeh zami
ruk gaya aasma
par
mujhe mein naaye ahsaas the jagne laage
aur khud ka hi ,
naya pahlu
tha nazar aaya
mujhe mere hi saamne
jo chah raha tha
ke chum lu usse
chu lu aise usse ,
ke jaise chua na ho pahle usse
yeh kasak si mujhme jaagne lagi

kyu apne in hasin palo ko bhi
aur hasin banna sake hum
is baat ka bhi mokka ,
maine hame diye nahi

nishu i loved this poem a lot yar.
it suited a lot.
kamina budhu maan of "kashmakash"...hehehehehe.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it so much dear..all are ossum n apt 4 all ffs..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no :17

for ff life partnerby palindrome
from geet point of view
(spelling mistake count karna is not allowed)


rishto ka kaisa yeh pahlou
hai aaj nazar aaya
ke ab toh
ajnabi sa lag raha hai
mujhe mera hi saaya


kehna aasan hai ki
bada gaya hai woh
par woh to badala hi nahi
jo badle hai
woh to mere hi ahsaas hai
mein jaanti thi
ki woh rishte unke liye khaas hai
par kyu
par kyu aaj mujhe
unke liye sabse khaas hone ki
lagi yeh nayi aas hai
yeh sab to mere liye
ajnabi se ahsaas hai

kyu mein itna badal gayi
kya mein sach mein itni nazuk thi ki
rishto ki thodi si tapan se hi pighal gayi

aaj to mujhe
aarav bhi rishto mein mujh se pakka laga
kyoki uss masoom ne
khushi khushi de diya
apne khaas hone ka ahsaa
is nanhi pari ko
jis se bhi jyaada khaas hone ki
abhi hui thi mujhe aas

hey my dear mami
chillexxx
now you have to listen
so please relaxxx

mami batata hu mein
aapko ek sachai
jo yeh rishto mein jalan
aur sabse khaas hone hi aas ki havaa
abhi aap se hai takrai
yeh mujhse ho kar hai aaie
aur
rishto mein sabse khaas hone ki chah
yahi hai rishto ki sachai
yeh baat aur hai ke
aap khud kuud gai iss aag mein
aur mere charo aur
yeh meri pyaari dadi ne hai lagayi


please tell me guys
lines are good aur not
me waiting for your reply

omg its AWESOME&AMAZING yar...
i think THE BESTEST in all ur BEST POEMS.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no : 18 and 19


this two are written for hamari prem kahaani
ff by heytal

this one i write after reading the pologue
kyu hua yeh saath mere
jab kuch bhi to tay karna
nahi tha haath mein mere


mein aayi hi kyu ,is duniya mein
agar mujhe aana hi tha ,toh
aisa to koi saath diya hota
jo mere hone ko sarthak ker deta


aisa nahi hai ke ,koi aaya nahi tha
sang apne jo sapne laaya nahi tha
jisne bin kuch kahe ,sab vaade kar diye the
bin mujhe chue ,mere har zakham bhar diye the
jab usse ,rahna nahi tha saath mere
to kyu bhar diye the ,aankhon mein naye sapne mere

woh chaa gaya
sab kuch hi to chut gaya
har sapna mera tut gaya
kuch bhi nahi tha haath mein mere
na tutna mere adure sapne ka
na woh unchahe saath phere

kyu hua yeh sath mere

not reading this FF yar,but ur words make me SPEECHLESS nishu👏.
lovely poem dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem no : 19

for same ff hamarri prem kahaani

few line from geet point of view

kyu hua yeh saath mere
kyu tut gaye sapne mere
bina hue pure


kyu koi laut aaya
agar aana hi tha usse
toh gaya hi kyu tha

jab gaya tha woh zindagi se
toh har sapna le gaya tha
aur mujhe un apno ko dekhne ki sazaa de gaya tha

phir zindagi mein kya hua
kyu hua
kis liye hua
yeh sab baate yaad nahi
na todo mujhe iss kadar ke jud bhi na saku
nahi suni kissi ne meri faryaad bhi
toh ab uske aane se ,kuch aur jyaada apne rab se ruth gayi hu mein
ke kyu bheja ab usse ,jab itni tut gayi hu mein

awww poor geet.
awesome touchy words nishu...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem :20

it for DANGEROUS LOVE
ff by sdlife 19



aaj jaana hai
aur dil ne yeh maana
hai

sirf khoon se jude rishto ko hii
gahra hone ka toh
haq nahi
jo rishte bane pyaar se
aur aapsi samman se
unnse gahra
toh ,koi rishta hi nahi

koi mar jaata hai pyaar ke liye
toh koi maar deta hai pyaar ke liye
toh koi sab kuch kho bhi deta hai
iss pyaar ke liye
par aaj yeh jaana
ki koi in sabse bad kar
bhul sakta hai apni har hud
aur umar bhar ka farz
sirf iss pyaar ke liye


yeh pyaar hi toh hai ,
jo har rihte ko jodta hai
kahi yeh pyaar ,har rishte ko
ek rihte ke liye todta hai
toh kahi yeh pyaar
khoon se gahra rishta bhi
kisi ke saath jodta hai


baap hi bete ke liye ,de qurbaani
yeh baat to sabne hai maani
par kabhi kabhi
pyaar paalne waale ka
har kissi ke haq ko ,picche chodta hai
jaisa aaj hamne dekha
yeh paalne waala hi hai
jo aati hui har takleef hi nahi
balki tyaar hai modne ko maut ka bhi rukh wahi


tell me guys
poem kaisi hai

👏no words NISHU,ME DEAD🤢👏
specially these words make me "THUD"🤢

koi mar jaata hai pyaar ke liye
toh koi maar deta hai pyaar ke liye
toh koi sab kuch kho bhi deta hai
iss pyaar ke liye
par aaj yeh jaana
ki koi in sabse bad kar
bhul sakta hai apni har hud
aur umar bhar ka farz
sirf iss pyaar ke liye

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