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Posted: 12 years ago
poem no : 15
its for Captured Love (ff) by mrs.msk

few lines for geet from maan side



meri chahto ko toh mein bhul hi gaya hu
khud ko bhi bhul jauga , agar tu chahe
par tujhe bhul jaau
yh to kabhi na hoga mujhe se
yeh chahe tu yah khud bhi chahe
tu ban ke laahu bah rahi hai mujhe mein
minn chir kar apna dil tujhe yeh dikha du
agar tu chahe

mein to saaya bhi tera ban jaau ,
yeh dil mera chahe
par je raha hu aise ke mera chehra bhi tujhe nazar na aaye ,
aakhir yahi to tu chahe
mein to chahu ke saari duniya se kahu ,
ke tu hai meri khuda
par guzar rahi hai zindagi chupchap ,gumshuda
jaise ke tu chahe


tujh se milne par bhi teri pabandi hai
teri yaad se mil lu ,
yeh bhi tujhe pasand na aaye
dil chahe pukaaru sare aam ke ,
tu meri hai
par jee raha hu ajnabi ki tarah ,
jaise tu chahe

ek teri khushi ke liye
sah raha hu duniya ki nazaro ko mein
agar tu saath ho toh ,
yeh duniya kya mere saamne ,
jo mujhse nazar milaaye


badal de maine mri zindagi
jee raha hu aise ,
thi jaise teri khawahishe
agar mera yah sab bhi karna kafi nahi tere liye
to kah de ek baar ,
mar jaauga abhi ,kyoki jaana tujhse dur ,
mere bas mai nahi
merna tere bin hai aasan
kar duga mein yeh kaam ,agar tu chahe


aur ab de ek moka mujhe
taki chum lu
meri zindagi mein je bhar ke tujhe
aur
zindagi kitni hogi hasseen saath mere
aa tujhe mere kwaabo se milya du
agar tu chahe



me done with my thoughts dear
please tell me about your view
me waiting for your reply dear
sorry for spelling mistake

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

sona dear

ready to pm
about this poem to all from my side
as my net is dead

so please do this for me
and next post poem hogi

pakka

yar i love to do so,but i have very less ppl in my PM list +i'm not so regular in cmng OL b'cause of net&powercut,u know na tera mera net same hai😆😆😆still i'll try my best.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai


dear mee done with poem
now waiting for your reply😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

yar i love to do so,but i have very less ppl in my PM list +i'm not so regular in cmng OL b'cause of net&powercut,u know na tera mera net same hai😆😆😆still i'll try my best.


oyye see above post
poem paste ki hai
new one
tere liye itni zaldi darling😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg omg MINDBLOWING POEM nishu,
totaly suitable for amazing ff of simi.
loved it a lot dear.
thanks muahhh...
i'll PM my buddies tmmrww insha-allah.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

omg omg MINDBLOWING POEM nishu,

totaly suitable for amazing ff of simi.
loved it a lot dear.
thanks muahhh...
i'll PM my buddies tmmrww insha-allah.


you really like it this much
you know what
i m hell nervous after writing this poem
sona-rai thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


oyye see above post
poem paste ki hai
new one
tere liye itni zaldi darling😉

awww muahhh u make me feel so special nishu,love u muahhh.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved it so much nishu,
specially this part make me cry for maan...
badal de maine mri zindagi
jee raha hu aise ,
thi jaise teri khawahishe
agar mera yah sab bhi karna kafi nahi tere liye
to kah de ek baar ,
mar jaauga abhi ,kyoki jaana tujhse dur ,
mere bas mai nahi
merna tere bin hai aasan
kar duga mein yeh kaam ,agar tu chahe

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Posted: 12 years ago
yayyy 100 PAGES nishu"dhinka chika"
abb main chali POWER CUT grrr...
bye muahhh see u.
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Posted: 12 years ago
sona need not to worry

me thinking to write
one awsome poem for
rashmi ff perfect saviur

but baat nahi ban rahi yaar
poem uss level ki ho hi nahi rahi jo ff ko suit kare

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