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Posted: 12 years ago
so sweet poem dear 👏 i loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely poems
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
love both the poems

P.S from now onward my comment will be of one or two words
as i will be busy in cousins marraige then my tests will start nd after that in march my exams will start
so plz cooperate with 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

love both the poems


P.S from now onward my comment will be of one or two words
as i will be busy in cousins marraige then my tests will start nd after that in march my exams will start
so plz cooperate with 😊

your wish my command 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

hy sona

job hunt kaisi chal rahi hai

yar waiting for interview call.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

yar waiting for interview call.


saachi
abhi tak koi interview nahi

kya hoga iss duniya ka
itne talented log ghar par bethe hai
aur kisi ko koi kadar hi nahi
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Posted: 12 years ago
did i tell you
maine ek poem aur write ki hai
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


saachi
abhi tak koi interview nahi

kya hoga iss duniya ka
itne talented log ghar par bethe hai
aur kisi ko koi kadar hi nahi
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yar actually thanks to our system and gov,kya ker saktay hain.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poem:12

for escort business (FF)by tanya/ ananya
hello dear
me back with few lines😆😆😆
don't know,how bad they are
as my net is doing hide ad seek with me
so write it ,without further reading


maan and geet
with their view and problems

mai ek sukhi patti
tu ek surakh gulaab
hum dono ka ek hona
jo na pura ho sake,hai woh ek khawaab

tu nahi hai sukhi patti
tu hai ek gahari chaav,jiske nicche do zindagi
falaa rahi hai,apne paav
aur agar
hu mai gulaab ,to jaan le
mere paas bhi hai ,kaate be hisaab

nahi de sakti mai tujhe mera saath
thak chuki hu mai ab itna
ke nahi kar sakti,thamne ke liya khushiyaan
aage apna haath

ateet se hum chup nahi sakte
jo beet gayi hum pe,usse hum muker nahi sakte
jo hona tha woh ho gaya,maanta hu
issme hum dono ka kuch hissa kho gaya
chahe kuch bhi karle ussko to hum badal nahi sakte

janti hu mein ,ku chahiye tujhe mera saath
hai mere paas tera kuch aisa
jo lauta dega waapis khusiyaan tere haath
par tu kyu nahi dekh sakta
un khushiyoon mai bhi hogi mere beete kal ki parchaaiyan
jo degi har pal tujhe mere saath na chalne ki duhaaiya

jo pal kal aayega
woh na tune dekha hai na mene
saath woh kya laayega
yeh na tu jaanti hai na mein
isliye
haamare liye jo pal hai
woh bas yahi ek pal hai

jo beet gaya woh bhi ik kal hai
aur jo aayega woh bhi ik kal hai
aur woh kya laayega,yeh soch kar is pal ko na jeena
jo aisa karre ,woh insaan toh mein nahi na

ok
me done with my thoughts
please forgive me for my spelling mistake.
me waiting for your reply




dear u r an excellent poet dear.wow it was superb poem on our maneet😳.loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

did i tell you

maine ek poem aur write ki hai

really,wooowww,waiting yar.😃

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