maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 58

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Posted: 12 years ago
really awesome one dear
rocking superb
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

for winter sonata

few lines from maan point of view

her smile as bright as the sun
never fails to make my day
every time
i lose my self,when i look in her way
world seems to vanish, as i look in her way
need to stop my self,before i start move towards her way


i can't stand to see her down
her tears destroy me from in
i do my best to make her smile
and remove every reason from earth
which can try to make her fail


to see her happy,is all i want
nothing more
and nothing less
but still i can't have her
and allow to her to change me

Jo halbali Maan ke andar machi hai uske liye bilkul perfect words hai.👏
He won't allow himself to be with her yet he can't stay away from her.
Par Maan Babu you can run but you can't hide,love what Ritzy wrote.
"As much as one run away from love, it engulfs you with that much speed. As much as you deny your love, that much it deepen its roots."
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9



OK GUYS
POEM: 9
its a poem for our saddu ,buddu
maan in PARINEETA by Kawaii_geet

Here i sit,thinking about you
not able to figure out whats wrong
trying to understand
you have been through for me

its nothing in front of my love for you
becose, i am ready to leave all that
in the hope,to get your trust
my heart only aches for you
to see you there for me


don't know why
but these days,you amaze me
your smile,is like shining sun
your mind, don't know what more you have hidden
your voice,like temple bell music
your eyes, see through me

you are here really for me
are you ready to try
to see you happy
and ready to be back
make me so happy
that i have tears of joy


your ability to cheer me up
and make me ready to face again the life
when you know,i already put myself way behind
after seeing all this
my feelings for you go beyond words

at first
being you in my life
didn't seem real
but than,you again taught me a lesson daily
now,i m able to understand
the reason of my stare
THE BLUEST SKY
THE DEEPEST SEA
its not fair
if i do compare
just like them
you are so so very special in every single way



awesomee dii👍🏼
mere toh words hi khatam ho gaye hai aapke liye 😉
let me guess the story maan is sloof sloof and doesnot want to live his life and gget gave him the ray of light...she has become his reason for happiness...and he wants to live for..to make her happy???😕
is it??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

my this comment is for'

in love with my jiju
ve cried tears for you,
I've kept my mouth shut tight in order to save myself.
I've imagined a life with you in hope it would come true,
But I don't think it's supposed to be that way...

But you like her while I love you and the problem is I love her too.

It seems a little cliche to me,
But somehow that doesn't make a difference.
I still love you and. And I feel so incredibly pathetic.
for holding the feeling still for you
as i ready to admit
you belong to her
and for me,you are the flower
which is never for me,even to touch


amazing di..
i felt very sad on reading this 😔😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

for winter sonata

few lines from maan point of view

her smile as bright as the sun
never fails to make my day
every time
i lose my self,when i look in her way
world seems to vanish, as i look in her way
need to stop my self,before i start move towards her way


i can't stand to see her down
her tears destroy me from in
i do my best to make her smile
and remove every reason from earth
which can try to make her fail


to see her happy,is all i want
nothing more
and nothing less
but still i can't have her
and allow to her to change me


yaar di mindblowing 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nishu di aapke liye kuch lines :
MAIN POET TOH NAHII,
PAR JABSE DEKHA HAI MAANEET KO
MUJKO POETRY AA GAYI
😉😉😆😆
HOPE U LIKED IT 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angelic_princes

nishu di aapke liye kuch lines :
MAIN POET TOH NAHII,
PAR JABSE DEKHA HAI MAANEET KO
MUJKO POETRY AA GAYI
😆
HOPE U LIKED IT 😛


arre tune to mere dil ki baat hi sun li😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome work
amazing poems
loved them
😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Awesome work

amazing poems
loved them
😃

👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nishu di inborn quality hai 😉
main sabki dil ki baat jaan leti hun 😛😆

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