maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13

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Jyotika95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#581

Aur apne bataya nahi maine jo story guess kiya woh wrong hai ya right???

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Posted: 12 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: angelic_princes
Aur apne bataya nahi maine jo story guess kiya woh wrong hai ya right???

arre sweety aap kabhi wrong nahi ho sakti.you pick thre right story line

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Noor Fatima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#583

amzingly writen sweetheart *claps* u always leave me dumbfoud by ur writing.. excellent work.

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Jyotika95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
arre sweety aap kabhi wrong nahi ho sakti.you pick thre right story line

yaaay😊

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#585

11 th poem

1st sorry for the late reply

laptop nahi tha so cant comment here...

now back to the poem

loved it

awesome poems...

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---nishu---

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Posted: 12 years ago

#586

poem:12

for escort business (FF)by tanya/ ananya

hello dear

me back with few lines😆😆😆

don't know,how bad they are

as my net is doing hide ad seek with me

so write it ,without further reading

maan and geet

with their view and problems

mai ek sukhi patti

tu ek surakh gulaab

hum dono ka ek hona

jo na pura ho sake,hai woh ek khawaab

tu nahi hai sukhi patti

tu hai ek gahari chaav,jiske nicche do zindagi

falaa rahi hai,apne paav

aur agar

hu mai gulaab ,to jaan le

mere paas bhi hai ,kaate be hisaab

nahi de sakti mai tujhe mera saath

thak chuki hu mai ab itna

ke nahi kar sakti,thamne ke liya khushiyaan

aage apna haath

ateet se hum chup nahi sakte

jo beet gayi hum pe,usse hum muker nahi sakte

jo hona tha woh ho gaya,maanta hu

issme hum dono ka kuch hissa kho gaya

chahe kuch bhi karle ussko to hum badal nahi sakte

janti hu mein ,ku chahiye tujhe mera saath

hai mere paas tera kuch aisa

jo lauta dega waapis khusiyaan tere haath

par tu kyu nahi dekh sakta

un khushiyoon mai bhi hogi mere beete kal ki parchaaiyan

jo degi har pal tujhe mere saath na chalne ki duhaaiya

jo pal kal aayega

woh na tune dekha hai na mene

saath woh kya laayega

yeh na tu jaanti hai na mein

isliye

haamare liye jo pal hai

woh bas yahi ek pal hai

jo beet gaya woh bhi ik kal hai

aur jo aayega woh bhi ik kal hai

aur woh kya laayega,yeh soch kar is pal ko na jeena

jo aisa karre ,woh insaan toh mein nahi na

me done with my thoughts

please forgive me for my spelling mistake.

me waiting for your reply

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago

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maaniqra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#587

the poems are really good dear

plz cont with more and pm me

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#588

...😛

4 PMing me ...😃

ur all updates r dear...😳

ur update .....

really ...😃

u really done dear..👏👏..

dear...4 ur hard work...👍🏼

lots of 4 u dear...

lov,❤️

Tama

NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM..don't know when it'll be fixed & also MY EXAM..

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..

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sona rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#589

OMG nishuuu muahhh.

this1 is amazing yar,loved it a lot.

haamare liye jo pal hai

woh bas yahi ek pal hai

jo beet gaya woh bhi ik kal hai

aur jo aayega woh bhi ik kal hai

i'm totaly agreed with ur these lines yar muahhh.

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

OK GUYS
POEM: 9
its a poem for our saddu ,buddu
maan in PARINEETA by Kawaii_geet

Here i sit,thinking about you
not able to figure out whats wrong
trying to understand
you have been through for me

its nothing in front of my love for you
becose, i am ready to leave all that
in the hope,to get your trust
my heart only aches for you
to see you there for me

don't know why
but these days,you amaze me
your smile,is like shining sun
your mind, don't know what more you have hidden
your voice,like temple bell music
your eyes, see through me

you are here really for me
are you ready to try
to see you happy
and ready to be back
make me so happy
that i have tears of joy

your ability to cheer me up
and make me ready to face again the life
when you know,i already put myself way behind
after seeing all this
my feelings for you go beyond words

at first
being you in my life
didn't seem real
but than,you again taught me a lesson daily
now,i m able to understand
the reason of my stare
THE BLUEST SKY
THE DEEPEST SEA
its not fair
if i do compare
just like them
you are so so very special in every single way

Maine yeh wali bhi nahi padhi. Par main kahani jaanti hoon.

Par Anisha ko man hazam nahi kar pa rahi hoon

Par suna hai Anishaji kahani ko sayonara bol chuki hai.😆 To shayad I can start reading it now.

By the way I love Fairy Tail.

Anyway back to your poem.

Geet toh Deewani hain Maan ki, yeh tumhare in chand labzon ne sabit kar diya hai.

its nothing in front of my love for you

becose, i am ready to leave all that

in the hope,to get your trust

my heart only aches for you

to see you there for me

Par jo asli badlav aa raha hain jinka tapman badal raha hain aur jo pighal rahe hain woh hain saddu buddhu(bilkul sahi words hain iss Maan ke liye) Maan babu. Your words below perfectly depict his confusin and his attraction.

don't know why

but these days,you amaze me

your smile,is like shining sun

your mind, don't know what more you have hidden

your voice,like temple bell music

your eyes, see through me

How can he resist her love.

When you are loved just for yourself, and dont demand anything in exchange how can anybody resist that kind of love.

Perfect song for Maan's feelings towards Geet would be,

Yuh pyaar se meri taraf na dekho, pyaar ho jayega.

As with all the other poems awesome job Nishu 😃