maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13 - Page 47

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

this is also

for me

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

wow really beautiful dear😊...u have expressed the emotions so well...awesome work👏

Originally posted by: Susegad

Chikni Soorat tu kaha tha ab talak ye bata.

Bohot zyada chamak raha hain yaar I need one of these 😎 to look at him.

Originally posted by: Susegad

Tauba Tumhare Yeh Nazare,

Hum to Deewane Hai Tumhare.😃

Originally posted by: ...Tanya-K...

Absolutely beautiful.. Honestly my words of appreciation will b less , the way u described Geet's emotions is too too good. You've portrayed her feelings so well...Haven't read ff bt reading poem gives an insight to the story.. Thanks for pm dear

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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thaxxx dear

about ff

let me tell few things to you

maan and geet married for more than one ad half year

but they still not start their life as married couple

becose ,first geet being naive and still child from heart

second she lost her family

the day after er marriage

so maan wait for her

to be ready physically ad mantelly for their relation

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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chalo mai kuch to accha kaam kari hu

free publicity of other's ff😉😆😆

Originally posted by: Susegad

Poem 8

Once again haven't read the ff, but from the feel of the poem it seems that Geet is very naive and innocent. Infact the whole poem reminded me of the movie ,"Balika Badhu".

The realization of an innocent soul to the amazing feelings of Love.

She is overwhelmed by her feelings and completely restless. Her feelings are like a dam waiting to burst inside her.

And perhaps the knowledge that her feelings are reciprocated is what is making her feel so impatient to share her feelings.

I loved it yaar. Just superb.

Originally posted by: angelic_princes

Ur welcum di 😊
oh toh yeh story..but i l sure read it..but after march i wil start new ffs..kyunki mere board exams hai..
aur han di mere prologue ko ek bar try do please 😊

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

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yaar munda hamesha

black white combination shirt mai maar kar jaata hai😉