maneet with difference(poem)new poem pg 134 4/5/13

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Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Poem 8

Once again haven't read the ff, but from the feel of the poem it seems that Geet is very naive and innocent. Infact the whole poem reminded me of the movie ,"Balika Badhu".

The realization of an innocent soul to the amazing feelings of Love.

She is overwhelmed by her feelings and completely restless. Her feelings are like a dam waiting to burst inside her.

And perhaps the knowledge that her feelings are reciprocated is what is making her feel so impatient to share her feelings.

I loved it yaar. Just superb.

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CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

awesome one der
loved it
u described Geet feeling in this poem so well
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: sona-rai

😲hawww OMG OMG🤢

😡😡😡

nazar mat laga

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: sona-rai

nishuuu I HATE U🤢

i knew😉😉😉

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

lovely cute dear

happy new year

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

hey nishu

yaar valli dii all ff is favourite and u me tu best

and u write for this love it

and poem is also awesome

u describe geet pov very cutely

i love it

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: angelic_princes
Hiii nishu di
maine innocent love ff toh padha nai hai bt woh poem mindblowing hai sachi mein..
and ye poem padhne ke baad i want to knw wats the story y maan wants to stay away frm geet
aap toh bahut achi poet ho..apne poems publish karwa lo 😊😛

thaxxx dear

about ff

let me tell few things to you

maan and geet married for more than one ad half year

but they still not start their life as married couple

becose ,first geet being naive and still child from heart

second she lost her family

the day after er marriage

so maan wait for her

to be ready physically ad mantelly for their relation

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Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A
hey nishu

yaar valli dii all ff is favourite and u me tu best
and u write for this love it
and poem is also awesome
u describe geet pov very cutely
i love it

thaxxx dear

yes this is her best ff from my point of view also

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: angelic_princes
Awesome di awesome last poem bhi awesome hai
sab ff padhke apke poems padh rahe hai aur main apke poems padhke ff padhne ke liye inspire ho rahi hun

chalo mai kuch to accha kaam kari hu

free publicity of other's ff😉😆😆