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"Touched"
An Autumn Bliss
Teach not thy lip such scorn, for it was made for kissing, lady, not for such contempt. (William Shakespeare)

Her life changed

Her heart changed

And so did her mind

When she was touched by him

It was his dream to love her

To worship her

To touch her

And one day discovered his bliss amidst autumn

When she was touched by him

Touched
When I touch you...

There's starlight in your eyes

I hear the music in your sighs

When I touch you...

There's a tingle in the air

My fingers brushing through your hair

Moments pause and time stands still

Moving closer is such a thrill

Let me drink you till my fill

You're my drug my magic pill

(By Mohan Kumar)
Table of Contents

Chapter 1 First Touch

Chapter 2 Predicament

Chapter3 Lost

Chapter 4 Desiring Imperfection

Chapter 5 Reason

Chapter 6

chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter9

Chapter 10

Chapter11(Last part)

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I know I have other work pending but couldn't stop myself form typing this. it is a passionate short story.. will finish it in one week..
Really need ur love and support once again
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Plzzz I need comments from silent readers as well for this bonus SS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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"Touched"
An Autumn Bliss..
Chapter 1
"First Touch"
She closed her eyes and inhaled the fresh air, before opening her eyes to glance at the beauty of nature in front of her. She twirled around, to get a proper view of the exquisite scenery that surrounded her. Dry leaves rustling beneath her feet, felt like a celestial melody. The Air blew, ruffling her long black hair and the swish sound of the air while she twirled around, felt like a heart touching lyrics.

It all felt like a dream - a beautiful dream. She hadn't seen anything more breathtaking than this. It was autumn and right now she was in the countryside, standing amidst the raw and unspoiled magnificence of the nature.

A few drops of the autumn rain fell on her skin. It created a weird frenzy in her. She was lost and her body moved at its own accord as she started dancing, on the lyrics of the dry leaves, rustling under her feet and the air that swirled around her.

Geet, a 21 years old girl, a free soul who always listened to her heart and luckily, her heart was always in sync with her brain. She had never encountered a situation where her heart and mind had contradicted each other.

She twirled and danced freely because she knew that she was alone here until she was panting breathlessly and until she could no longer move. Finally, she fell on her knees to catch her breath.

She was trying to ease her breathing but her heart felt an unknown happiness and there was a serene smile on her face. Leaves rustled at some distance and there was some noise, indicating that she was not alone there. Alarmed, she raised her head and found someone standing there, totally mesmerized by her beauty.

Maan had come there to search for her when he couldn't find her at home. He knew her obsession with this little forest and he was sure that she would be somewhere here but never had he expected to find her in this condition.

When Maan reached there, she was already dancing. He couldn't tear his gaze from her. She was dressed in white, like an autumn fairy, dancing in the forest, in autumn season. When she danced, her skirt was lifted and he could clearly see her exposed legs. She lifted her hands and he could also see her tiny waist from where the blouse that had been unintentionally lifted. He kept gaping at her, until she sat on her knees with her head dipped down, to calm her ragged breath.

He walked towards her, in a trance, and as soon as she lifted her head, their eyes were locked.Her cheeks were flushed and her dress was barely wet. Her chest was heaving up and down as she was still breathing rapidly. Her partially parted lips were trembling and there was a strange type of madness in her eyes. She looked divine, more beautiful than a fairy indeed.

He had known her since their childhood. He had loved her ever since he came to know that such feeling existed and he had worshiped her since he had known the actual meaning of love.

The pull towards her was so strong that he couldn't hold back, or even think about it. He just wanted to trace those plum and pink trembling lips.

"Look away, please. Don't look at me like that," He prayed for both of them but to his luck, she didn't avert her gaze. She kept staring at him with the same raw madness in her eyes.

Their eyes were caught and the shared voltage couldn't be ignored. She was flushed and strangely she could feel heat, gathering beneath her clothes, inside the place that she hadn't expected.

Gauging her expressions, he sat in front of her, on his knees, in the same position as hers. His hand moved to touch her parting lips with his index finger.

Autumn fall colors

Orange, red and gold

So bright and vibrant

Your love so bold

Geet kept staring him when he traced her lips with his finger. Her whole body trembled at his innocent touch. Dazzled, Geet lifted her hand to touch his lips, mimicking his moves.
She traced her hand all over his handsome face, his rough stubble and his strong jaw, his broad forehead, his straight nose, just like he was tracing on hers.
He was exceptionally handsome and every feature of his seemed to be carved from stone. It was like both of them were discovering each other or memorizing every feature with their fingers.

Unable to control, he groaned and the next moment, he lowered his head to capture her lips into a soul searing kiss. She was taken by surprise when his tongue plunged into her mouth, going deeper and deeper.

Autumn's cool breeze

Flows all around

Your lips on mine

Happiness found

But then he slowed down. He was not sure if he should continue this or stop it right here. He wasn't sure if she would want this or would push him away or blame him for crossing his limits, without her permission.

He was still in fight with himself when he felt her fingers on his nape, pulling him closer. She was way too lost to hear her mind; rather she acted purely on her heart's will. For the first time, there was a contradiction in her heart and mind, where her heart urged to go with the flow and her mind warned to stop before it was too late. She hadn't felt anything so powerful and insidious.

He was more confident now as he took her mouth with increased fervor, longer, deeper, while she tried to catch his tongue. She wanted him to continue this kiss forever and he had no intention to stop either. Madly and passionately, they both relished each other.

Something had been cut loose in her. She was saturated with these new feeling. His breath came in ragged puffs, his hands gripping her body.

She felt him removing her shirt from her shoulders and then everything became vague and unclear. Only the feel of his lips on her skin was what she could concentrate on. He trailed his lips downward, to her neck where he drew patterns, very slowly and gently. He kissed her throat where her pulse throbbed. Then as he moved to her collar bones, he grew more passionate and less gentle. Finally, he trailed his lips to her exposed shoulders.

"Maan," she moaned as he continued to torture her and his one hand encircled her waist to bring her closer. She could barely string a few coherent syllables together.

"Hold me tighter," She purred and his grip on her waist got stronger and she knew this was exactly what she needed.

Autumn leaves falling

Caressing the ground

You holding me tightly

A love so sound

He knew for the first time, there was acceptance, there was no resistance from her side and she wanted this to happen as much as he did. He had waited for years, for her submission. And right now this was a heavenly dream where he could do anything he wished and he wanted this dream to go on and on, even if it meant that he would be sleeping forever.

"Ahh" She moaned as he violently sucked the bulge right above her cleavage. She dug her nails into his nape, holding him tightly. Her breast felt heavy and she wanted him to squeeze her there, or hold her, or maybe do something else until it felt better.

"Geet," He said as he continued to kiss her and his hands went to open the buttons on her front. She could barely hear him over the rampaging pulse in her ears.

"I love you," He said as he opened the first button.

Autumn night sunset

The sky all aglow

Your loving arms around me

Loves harmonious tempo

"I love you too," she said and then her own words vibrated in her ears. What did she just say? She said that she loved him. Her body stiffened and he stopped knowing that she had again drawn a line in their relationship and no way was he going to cross any line that she had drawn.

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"Touched"
An Autumn Bliss..
Chapter 2
"Predicament"

He was still grasping her waist in his strong hands. His eyes were still fixed on her but he had lifted his mouth away from her. He tried to survey her expressions. She had lowered her eyes and red color had adorned her cheeks. He had no clue about her reaction because he was unable to glance into her eyes.

Is she going to blame me for crossing my limits? He questioned himself but even if she was going to blame him, he was more than happy to take that blame.

Is she going to get angry? Is there going to be anger, rage or something else?He thought looking at her crimson red cheeks and bewildered face. In any case, he would have been more than happy to be a part of any emotion she would have offered, even it was her anger.

I know there is nothing wrong to get close to each other like this. I have every right over her. We know each other since childhood. We are best friends. And we have been married for almost a month now. He thought and then he saw her chewing her lower lip nervously.

No, even then it's wrong. Yes, we are married but that doesn't give a right to touch her, without her will. She has already told me that she doesn't love me and she will never go for the physical intimacy in this relationship. Even then, she trusted me to sleep with me in the same room and come to this place, away from everyone. He ran a frustrated hand through the thick mass of his hair. He was guilty but not for loving her but for breaking that trust because she had clearly told him that she didn't want to be touched by him.

Maan was born in the Melbourne city but Geet's family moved there when she was a child. They families were well acquainted and they both spend their child hoods together as they went to the same school and lived in the same area.

Their engagement was fixed when they were children and at that time they were not aware of it. Even then, he madly fell in love with her. But his feelings remained one sided because Geet never reciprocated.

Since the time they got married, He never touched her, and kept his distance. They lived and acted like friends because there was always a lot to talk about when they were together. To escape from the curious eyes of their families, before they could see through their lies, he had brought her to Dandenong, it was only a few miles away from Melbourne.

From the past seven days, they were living in a small cottage that had been gifted by Maan's Dad as their wedding gift. This place was perfect, away from the main city, with the wide spaces and a forest right at the rear end of the cottage. This place was a dream location for any couple but for them, it didn't serve the desired purpose. But he was happy because Geet who treasured nature, was madly in love with this place and this forest and this season autumn.

Today, after one month of our marriage, my control faltered and I crossed the limits set by her. He cursed himself even more when he saw her mercilessly chewing off her lower lip.

But the site brought back the memories of what they had just shared. He had tasted those lips and that taste still lingered in his mouth. The feel of those soft lips was still fresh against his lips. The way she was chewing off her lip, only tempted him. It was a crime, and contempt to bother those lips in that way.

Teach not thy lip such scorn, for it was made for kissing, lady, not for such contempt (Shakespeare)

Unsure of his own intentions and not to cause more distress to her, he left her waist and moved back. The leaves rustled and he felt her getting tensed. Then his eyes fell on her clenched fists. She had firmly closed her fists and her long nails were almost digging into the skin of her palms. It must have been painful. He knew it and it pained him as well.

Is she regretting those moments? Does she think it was a mistake? He tried to guess from her clenched fists. And this was one thing he couldn't live with. He would have taken her anger, her accusations or anything. But whatever they had shared, if she named it as a mistake, it would kill him.

"Oh," she managed to say.

"Hmm, I am sorry," She finally managed to say and he was surprised to hear that. She was sorry, but why? This girl never failed to surprise him. She had refused to marry him, when he was 100% sure that her answer would be yes.

"Let's not discuss it and assume it never happened. I mean you love me and got carried away and I don't love you but still I got carried away. I mean I am pretty and you are also handsome and it's natural to be physically attracted. Hmm, I know, I am not making any sense here but this is the wisest option we have or.." She said in a single breath and he placed his finger on her lip to stop her. With his other hand, he opened her fist so that she couldn't hurt her skin.

"Am I right?" she asked but avoided to look at him.

"If you remember, today is your turn to cook," He said with a grin, trying to change the subject.

"Alright, but only pasta then, I am not going to cook Indian food. It takes a lot of time." She chuckled to pretend that everything was still the same but the air around them was still thick and tensed with the raw passion and desire. She could still feel him all over her burning skin.

"Let's go,"

He said as he rose to stand and then his eyes fell on her cleavage, her first button was open, giving a view of her lacy inners. He gulped to ease his parched throat.

She is so soft, she was melting against me. How it would have been to touch her curves.He wondered and then tried to distract himself.

"Geet, let's go," He repeated.

"Maan, my knees are shot. I mean.." She hesitated before completing her sentence.

"I feel my bones have turned into liquid. I mean.." She stammered because she was still in the same trance. Her knees were lifeless because of the intense moments they shared together.

A ripple of desire shot through his body upon realizing that how badly his first touch had affected her. He wanted to lay her on her back, right over those autumn leaves, and show her how beautiful it could have been between them and how she would have felt when he would have traced his tongue all over her naked skin. Suppressing those untamed desires, he sat on his knees again.

Geet's face went brighter since it was she who had given the suggestion to pretend that nothing had happened and she herself had admitted the raw affect his proximity had left on her.

He sat beside her and the leaves rustled again. This sound vibrated around her until it reached inside her, affecting her lower abdomen most.

"Geet, hmm, your button is open." He said but she was concentrating so hard, not to lose herself again in this autumn bliss that she failed to hear him. He was waiting for her reply but found her baffled and lost.

"Should I?" He asked again and this time she heard him but failed to comprehend what he was actually asking.

May be, he was offering to pick me in his arms? She assumed and nodded slightly.

But to her surprise, his hand moved and touched her right above her cleavage. She glanced down and found him buttoning her. The tips of his fingers touched her skin as he struggled to close those buttons.

She never realized when he had opened them. It had been so smooth but now, it was taking him so long to perform this simple task. Least did she know that he was fighting to find a self-restraint within him.

The temptation was stimulating him to open the rest of buttons and taste her soft flesh and devour it. He wanted to feel her curves in his hands, where they would have been molded perfectly. His thoughts were scattered and her pulse went crazy. From the look on her face, he knew that she wouldn't stop him, even if he did. But he had pushed his luck enough for one day.

After completing the task, he picked her in his arms and started to walk, towards their cottage, unaware of what may follow after this first touch.

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"Touched"
An Autumn Bliss..
Chapter 3
"Lost"
Please Check the website for the update and leave your comments there.
Chapter 4 Desiring Imperfection
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Aaha aaha ahaa
Aaj mein oopar Aasman neechay
aaj mein aagay zamana hy pichy
chaloon seedhi k ulti chaloon

ooye Stop I am not drunk qasam se
I am happy because Aniee wrote new SS but I am more than Happy Because MY CURSE is WORKING
ooye mein Vidya tu nai ho gaye Haila.
my curse Worked. ooye my curse Worked.
So a special invitation to all those who want to fall in love that too without a delay
Send me a PM or contact me on Face book. My facebook ID is...
Oops sorry sorry Stop advertising ur business Fai
no one here wanna A Curse. Hain na???
so stop all this and go to ur comment just like a gud gal.
so I am closing my newly opened business and back to my comment
By the way my offer is still ther so if u want to be cursed...
oops no joties plzzz me back to comment

wow what a beautiful Banner. me dead believe me Aniee. I was staring at my computer screen and was imagining wohaa what is this.
OMG this is out of the world. amazing very refreshing and a very new concept to IF.
I am speechless seriously just ur banner of this took my heart away.
you know what when u first send me this pic I was like Mujhy yahan rehna hy
and Najiha Guru ji u are Awesome. Most talented person I have ever met.
I love ur creativity and patience.
luv u

and after drooling a lot on the banner I jumped to the update and first paragraph was enough to tell me Aniee has something totally different in her bag. the way it started.
The way She was dancing on the music of dry leaves.
The way she was swirling her body.
The way she was enjoying the AUTUMN season that contained a strange sadness in it
The way she was enjoying herself was a scene to be watched.
and one thing Autumn is said to be saddest season and she was feeling strange happiness.
so it is proved that seasons belongs to your heart. If u r happy then Autumn can give u immense pleasure and it proved in her case but question is why she is happy???
Is she happy because She is with Maan
Maan??? but what he is doing there??
Is he with her???
oh so they know each other since childhood.
I loved it when he was saying her not to see at him but she did
I was speechless after witnessing the way they were feeling each other.
Why I felt like its the first time they touched each other.
Is it the first time they are feeling each other in that way??
Is it the first time their souls are touching each other???
I love the way he was holding back himself and she pulled him to her world of Passion
They confessed their love but then why she drew a line???
I am confused and to end my confusion give me another update as soon as possible

by the way I am ready to curse you again and again if u promise to give us new homes 😆


Edited by PariNain - 12 years ago
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wow a new ishtory
sounds romantic
me thud
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hiii Aniee
me dancingg yapieee😆
The Intro was Fabulous👏👏
me sooo happy one more new concept
A short SS full of passion and romancee *sara on 9th cloud*😳
in Love wid the name n banner 😉😉
luv u Aniee n Najiah😳😳
Well Donee...😃😃
so mesmerising geet danced in her trance n enjoying the autumn bliss...
soo unique...
Maan kinnaa romantic haiii😳😳😳
haiyeee they Kissed *blushing*
surely they vl cross all lines...😳😳
what a romantic n passionate start...
mere name change honay ka gift 😆😆😆
shameless sara khud hi tag karliya khud koo😃


u rocked my Unpredictable Queen
waiting eagerly for the next part winks*
hugssee
Edited by Blushingqueen - 12 years ago
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hiii Anieee
maii agyii...
gana suning
Saans mai Teri saans mili
too mujhe saans ayii
mujhe saans ayii


Oyee teri itni tempting update
bachii ki jaan legi kyaa😆😆😆
haiyee me still mai lala land
surely ye autumn wala theme
i m going to apply in my life stop stop ye idea Aniee nay diya hai mera nahi hai *shameless Sara*😃😃😃
acha now apni ramkatha band karti hoon*blushing furiously*

back to comment😳😳😳
PREDICAMENTS...MEANS dilemma 😕😕😕
u defined it soo well aniee...rendered me speechless as alwayz.😲
ye kya hua??
kyoon hua??
kaise hua??
ho hi gaya 😆😆😆
woww maan bechara fighting wid his heart n mind...yet dun want to cross all the limits becoz he dun want to hurt his love Awww
oyee huyee naughty maan checking her out haiyee geet red red
hahahahahaha me dead laughing itnay sensual scene pe meko hasi agyi jab geet said
my knees are shot
i feel my bones have turned into liquid laughing n blushing too
oyee huyee see how innocently she is admitting how badly his first touch affected her😉😉😉
Haiyeee loved the way she covers that intimacy moment by saying
he is handsome n she is pretty heheheheheehee
not again in her lost state she allowed him to hookup jab ke she was expecting him to lift her is his arms and alwayz maan kaise apni geet ko kisi prblem mai rahnay dee 😳😳😳


very happy Najiah Aniee ko orr bannar bana ke doo
phrr orr mazay mazay ke romantic n hot hot and and ssshhh shutup sara* FF milengay😆
luved each n every word n line u potrait


luv u lotss my devil😲😲
hugsss
oyee teriii inna lambaa comment ssara tu pagal hogayi hai😆😆
waiting for the next part😉😉


Edited by Blushingqueen - 12 years ago
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part 3 ...LOST 😳
haiyeee fabulous
breathtaking
me sweating in winter weather😲

commented on blog
luv yaaa😳😳😳

Edited by Blushingqueen - 12 years ago
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Thanks for the new ss...
Continue soon...Waiting...

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