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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hii guys here is my first FF on maaneet.

Hope you all will like it.

Prologue

maan-come here mishty, mere paas aao.

geet-nhi please, mujhe nhi aana leave me alone.

maan-i am warning u mishty , first & last time mere paas aao.

geet-no-no never, main nhi ayungi.

maan-kyu mishty ?

geet-kk-kyunki Darr lagta hai mujhe .

maan-kisse?

geet-aapse.

maan-thik hai mishty tum na sahi magar main toh tumhare paas aa sakta hoon na.

hearing this geet panicks.

geet-nnnhiin please nhiiin.

maan-i am coming mishty , mera intezaar krna. warna.

and with this maan cuts d call with a devilish smirk on his face. 'tum chaho ya na chaho mishty,ab main tumhe apna banake rahunga, kisi bhi kimat par, bahut intezaar kia hai maine, bas ab aur nhi, PYAAR se nhi toh DARR se hi sahi'.

geet-babaji please save me from MAAN. is DARR se bachalo mujhe babaji.

while thinking about MAAN , geet's body shivers with fear ,her breathing gets heavy, and sweat covers her whole face.

Precap-geet's DARR-entry of maan.


INDEX~

Prologue

Chap~1

Chap~2

Chap~3

Chap~4

Chap~5

Chap~6

Chap~7

Chap~8

Chap~9

Chap~10

Chap~11

Chap~12

Chap~13

Chap~14

Chap~15

Chap~16

Chap~17

Chap~18

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsum intro
do continue
looking forward 4 this story
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Nice !! :) !!

Cont Soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sparkling-eyes5

Awsum intro
do continue
looking forward 4 this story

thanky so much i am so happy to cont. it. thanky for commenting and liking.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lehr

hi dear.

awesome concept.
continue soon.

hii thanky so much for liking & commenting .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .AmeenaForEva

Nice !! :) !!

Cont Soon !!

thanky very much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: amreenshameem

Hey
Do cont soon
Waiting waiting

thanky will upd. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanky so much.
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Hey there!
Welcome to the forum🤗
Just read the prologue of your FF. I must say,it was impressive👍🏼 Looking forward to the first chp. Update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanky to all of u for liking & commenting on d FF. Hoping of getting more comments & likes. Here is the next chapter-

chapter-1

khurana mansion-

geet is madly searching here & there , but she is unable to find her red saree. & because of this she panicks badly.

'hey babaji yeh maine meri laal saari kaha rakh di, kahin mil hi nhi rhi hai, agar maan ko pata chal gya toh?'

At khurana constructions-

maan- adi that's it for today.

adi-but sssir aapki meeting?

maan-cancel kar do.

adi-but sirr---

maan angrily glares at him.

'mujhe duhrane ki aadat nhi hai aur yeh tum achi tarah se jante ho'.

adi-ji sir

& with this adi leaves.

maan puts his head back & relaxes thinking about his mishty.

'mishty bas kuch aur pal phir main tumhare paas bahut paas aur aj tum mujhe rok nhi paogi'

at the mansion-

geet is crying madly , she has searched everywhere but she is unable to find her red saree.

'babaji please help me, madad kijiye meri , aap toh jaante ho na agar woh saree nhi mili toh maan - pata nhi mere saath----

thinking about the consequence she panicks severely.

at the khurana construction-

maan is leaving with his bodyguards , a devilish & dangerous aura is surrounding him.

a dark evil atmosphere covers his every feature.

entering his mercedes he gestures the driver to drive.

His guards following him in other cars.

a long trail of cars leaves the premises of KC.

at KM-

geet is now in hysterics , suddenly her mob. rings 'mishty loves maan'-----'mishty loves maan'---

hearing the tone the glass of water falls from her hand & she rushes to pick it up , but in this process she hurts her feet which makes her wince in pain but she ignores it & picks the phone-

geet- hhhelloo----

no sound from the other side---

geet-hheelloo---

again no sound---

geet-Maan.

but instead of any reply someone pulls her around & picks her up in his arms.

Precap-maaneet & red saree.

please do like & comment tell me how u all like it.




Edited by Thesaurus - 11 years ago

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