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Posted: 12 years ago
thanky so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx for loving the upd. yep maan is scary i know & his scaryness is limitless. u will see his extent in the coming upd.

Originally posted by: punam2712

THIS MAAN IS SCARING ME ALSO

HE IS SO POSSESSED AND OBSESSED

HOW CAN ANYONE LIVE WITH HIM

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dona86

awesome update

geet maan se bhagne k liye maan ka sahara lena chahti hai
lets see kya hota hai
loved it

thanky so much yep ab bechari aur kar bhi kya sakti hai.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanky so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanky very much.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lehr

lovely update dear.

maan is really crazy for geet.
waiting to know more about thier past.
continue soon.

thanky so much for loving the upd. yep maan is just mad about geet.past will be revealed gradually. will upd. soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

The Glass company owner had to destroy his company wid his own hands.And even after that he may killed by MSK's men.Thats why maan said abt kriyakarm.

And d first meeting of Maaneet was quite interesting.Both in mud!!!


Wanna Know Maan's fixation wid red saari.And even curious to know geet's plan to elope.

Loved d update.

thanky so much. for loving the upd. so much.well yep u never know this maan is mad just mad.gradually past will be revealed.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanky friends for loving the previous chapter.

Here is the next chapter for you all Darr begins now.

chapter-6

'Raat ka nasha abhi ankh se gaya nahin'.

As the destination is coming closer & closer maan is just drowning more & more in the past , his first meeting with his mishty.

'Tera nasheela badan bahon ne choda nahin'.

The rain, the mud, all were making him groan with desire, just the images of his mishty in wet mud was making him hard.

'Ankhein toh kholi magar, sapna woh toda nhi'

His mind was just filling with erotic & lustful images of his mishty in a muddy & wet manner hugging him tightly, shivering slightly in his tight embrace.

'Haan wahi, woh wahi, saanson pe rakha hua tere hoton ka sapna abhi hai wahin'

That night was now an essential part of his life. It makes him complete that the dream of that wet night is now the reality of his life which makes his heart & soul filled with divine ecstasy.

'Tera khayal aye toh balkha ke pal jaata hai,

paani ke chadar tale tan mera jal jaata hai'

Just the mere thought of his mishty literally puts his entire body on fire, a fire which can never be cooled down.

'Lambi si ek raat ho, lamba sa ek din mile, bas itna sa jeena ho, milan ki ghadi jab mile'

bcoz her touch only burns him with desire, an unknown craving , an unsatisfied desire.

He is still waiting for that night of passion with his mishty when he will fill her entire being with himself & will mark her as his forever & ever & ever till eternity.

At KM.

geet is getting ready as the way maan has always desired him.

Thinking about her life her eyes are filled with tears.

'Kahan se kahan pahunch gai hai meri zindagi'

'kya socha tha aur kya paya'

'aisa kyun hua mere saath babaji, kyun , kis gunaah ki sazaa mil rahi hai mujhe'

Before meeting him , she was a girl full of life but after meeting him she has turned into a woman whose each & every sec. of life is filled with fear.

Before he came into her life she was naive & innocent , but his entry in her life turned her life upside down, so much so that now she is forced to turn herself into a cold & manipulative woman who is plotting against her so called would be husband.

MAAN, this name is just the synonym of FEAR for her.

But tonight she has to overcome this FEAR at any cost.

she has to win this time at any cost.

yeh DARR ab aur bardasht nhi hota.

with these thoughts she gets ready for him.

Though her heart is sinking , her hands are shivering, her whole body is having shivers with the mere thought of maan touching him intimately in those virgin places.

No she is not loathing his touch neither she is disgusted at herself for letting him touch her like this way tonight.

She does not know why ?

The only feeling lingering on her mind is just FEAR.

will his touch also do the same with her.

will it evoke only DARR in her body also.

As his mere sight, his mere gesture evokes in her heart & soul.

well for that she will have to wait for that moment which will change her destiny forever.

Or her life?

Only time will tell.

Her thoughts are broken with a sudden sound of steps.

MAAN.

precap-Raat toh abhi shuru hi hui hai.

please do tell me guys how you like this upd.

Edited by Thesaurus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a very well written chp. Really looking forward to know more about how they came across each other in the past. Waiting to read the next chp. Thanks for the PM and update soon😊

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