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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

I've already read d first part dear.But still thanx for d PM.

Well i loved d first part.Geet seems really terrified fm Maan.That red Saari must have been a gift fm Maan,may be thats why geet is so scared not finding it.

Waiting eagerly for d next part.

thanky for commenting & Ur most welcome yup she is d title says it all. well u will find out why is she afraid bcoz of this.maan is a devil here real devil but a bit different.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: zariya123

awesome i think maan is obsessive lover or husband like srk in darr
actually i associate darr with obsessive srk with whom i am in love

thanky so much for loving & commenting on the upd.i agree darr is associated with srk only he was awesoome. & here maan is the real devil but a bit different. hope u will like it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
thanky so much.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Sparkling-eyes5

Nice but tooo short
make it long next time
waiting for maan reaction on red saree n geet injury
thanks for pm

thanky for commenting & liking d upd. k i will make it a bit longer next time. ur welcome.actually i think on d spot so i just write what comes in my mind. at that moment. but i will take care if the length.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35


Thanky very much friends for such a warm response. love u all. Here is the next chapter for u all.

chapter-2

someone jerks geet back & pulls her around picking her up in his strong arms & cocooning her tightly in the warmth of his muscles.

geet-maan?

maan- (huskily)-say it again mishty.

geet- (shivering & gulping her saliva says)-maan.

maan-u know na mishty i love it when you say my name from ur lips.

geet silently nods her head.

maan kisses her on the forehead & takes her up the stairs.

geet-maan aap mujhe kaha le ja rhe hain?

maan-mishty tumhe toh pata hai tumhare maan ko bhookh lagi hai.

geet-haan toh hum upar kyun jaa rhe hain khana toh niche dining table par rakha hua hai.

maan-ufff ho mishty tum bhi na kitni bholi ho.kuch bhi nhi samajhti.

unable to understand the meaning of the hidden intentions of maan she innocently looks at him.

maan-mujhe aise mat dekho mishty. otherwise i will eat u here only.

hearing this geet gasps in shock.

geet- Maan----

maan- i want to here this only from ur lips tonight when i will eat you up.

this line sends shiver down her spine.

maan - oops my mistake sorry mishty mere kehne ka matlab tha when i will make love to you.

geet-par maan aap pehle khana toh khalo please.

maan- mishty tum bhi na kitni fikar krti ho meri. Don't worry hum dono saath mein khayenge.

'here comes our destination'

& both of them enters the bedroom.

maan shuts the door with his leg & takes geet with him on the bed making her sit on his lap.

maan-(in a serious tone)- show me ur feet mishty.

geet suddenly realises that her feet has been hurted badly.

The fear of maan was so high on her mind that she forgot about her pain.

her feet was covered with blood & now after realising it her eyes got filled with tears as the sudden pain hitted her like a volcano.

a drop of tear falls on maans hand which makes him look into her eyes.

she looks back into his red anger filled eyes which makes a chill ran down her spine.

maan -yeh kaise hua geet?

geet-woh-woh maan.

maan pulls her more closer gripping her hands tightly .

'kaise geet?'

geet-woh glass se.

maan makes her lie down on the bed & without saying a word brings back the first -aid box. softly cleans her wounds & puts bandage on it.

& again without saying a word makes her lie down & covers her up with a blanket.

for few minutes he sits besides her & keeps on caressing her face till she falls asleep. Then he quietly makes his way outside the room & makes an urgent call to Adi.

maan-adi pata lagao yeh glass wali company ka malik kaun hai ?& bring him here immediately.

Adi-ji sir.

suddenly his eyes falls on the drops of blood on the floor. making his anger reach at its peak.

maan-meri mishty ka khoon jisne bahaya hai use uski kimat chukani padegi sood samet.

In the bedroom geet who was acting of being in sleep gets up suddenly.

'babaji thanky so much aj aapne mujhe bacha liya - chahe mera khoon hi kyun na baha ho- bas us dard se yeh dard laakh guna acha hai-ab kam se kam maan kuch pal ke liye hi sahi par us laal saari ko bhul jayenge- aage ka pata nhi- par mujhe babaji par pura yakeen hai -woh koi na koi raasta zaroor dikhayenge'

suddenly the door clicks & geet hastily gets back to sleep.

enters maan & sits near her.

'mishty jisne tumhe dard dia hai , main use sazaa dene jaa rha hoon -wish me luck'

with this he softly kisses her cheeks .

'par jab main wapas ayunga toh khana zaroor khayunga don't worry mujhe abhi bhi bahut bhookh lagi hai'

& with this he leaves.

making geet restless.

Precap-maan's sazaa & dinner 😉

plz do tell me how u like it? sorry its a bit short but i will try to make it long from next time.




Edited by Thesaurus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Just read chp two. It was very interesting. Oh God! Maan is actually going to punish the owner of the company that manufactured that glass!😲 He really is crazy!Looking forward to the next chp.Update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
woww
awesome update
maan is going to punish the owner of glass company that manufactured the table glass😲
he is crazy or obsessed????
loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Your Maan is really a different kind of devil,i mean he is really gonna punish the company owner who made that glass.This is insane,but guess what,I jst love d insane Maan.The second part is really interesting and i loved d update .Thanx for d PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
IS MAAN CRAZY
HE IS GOING TO PUNISH THE GUY WHO MANUFACTURES THE GLASSES
WHAT IS HIS FAULT IF GEET BROKE THE GLASS
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: chinni10

Hii dear, just came across your FF. Prologue and first chapter very interesting. So maan is a devil type here and geet is so scared of maan. Omg.. she is crying of not getting her saree. God why she is so scared of maan, continue soon dear. add me to your pm list, do pm me pls.
Congrats on your first FF and welcome to MANEET world. 😊

hii dear...thanky so much for commenting and liking my story. yup maan is the real devil here but a different one. that u will come to know in future story. sure.😊

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