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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 111priyan

I am not the only one waiting

yep ur not the only one...this time..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
any chances of update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lehr

any chances of update dear

first of all congo for being IF-ROCKERZ...dear..
well i am writing...if i finish tonight then will post it...otherwise 2morrow...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Thesaurus

first of all congo for being IF-ROCKERZ...dear..

well i am writing...if i finish tonight then will post it...otherwise 2morrow...

thank u so much dear 🤗
will wait for update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
me too
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Posted: 12 years ago




Thanky frds for loving the previous upd.
Enjoy this part...


Chap~17


Walking down the lane geet went numb...tears gradually made their way and filled her eyes...swallowing her inner pain...she made her way to the mansion...climbing the stairs she entered her room...not her...but mishty's room...closing the door behind she made her way towards her...at last finally facing her...

'so u did it finally huh?'

'yes'

'grt to know that geet bcoz if u would have got a bit more late then maan would not have been in this world u know'

'i can't believe u...ur such a disgusting person'

An evil laugh echoed the whole mansion...

'sorry darling but i am evil...what to do?'

'Don't u have any feelings...or emotions?'

'nah..there is no place of these pathetic human emotions in my world...'

That broke the last thread of patience for Geet...

'damn u mishty for God's sake he is ur husband the love of ur life how could u do this to him?'

'Of course darling he is..my beloved maan...only mine...' with that she gripped her throat ...

'ahhh leave me mishty ur hurting me'

'i was just reminding u dear..he is mine' with that she left her...

and caressed her face ...neck and hair lovingly...

'ur so beautiful geet...never ever hurt urself dear...never ever...for that u should never make me angry...got it...i want u beautiful...and young...am i clear...?'

'am i clear geet?' she snapped at her...

'yes mishty'

'gud girl...now smile and be happy...dear...after all aj humari suhaag raat hai geet...oops...i mean meri...mere maan ke saath...i had to wait so long...to get here..geet...but now this wait is killing me...even after my death...i am here still waiting for my maan...my body is no more..but my soul is still burning and yearning for him...i was silently waiting and watching him...for so long...but damn him...he lost his memory he forgot me...his mishty...how could he forgot me? he never grieved for me...but its ok...now i am here for him..back to him...and i want him all for myself...physically...i don't care about emotions anymore now...i just wanna touch him and make love to him...non-stop...and for that i need u geet...my soul needs ur body to fulfill my bodily desires...and u will do it for me...geet'

'u know mishty i had wished to get my maan...my novel's maan for whom i was insanely in love with..but i had never thought in my wildest dreams...that my one wish from a falling star...would be fulfilled in this way...'

'so u should be happy geet ur wish got fulfilled but for my sake...ya i had to do lot of hard work too...for getting two of u married...i had to mix ur drinks...and all...usually which happens in telly dramas...and i knew it maan will marry u out of guilty...and so he did...but a deal was made...omggg...poor him never want to get close to u neither he did anything with u at that night too and u just passed out...but i love it...ur marriage brought me back in this world...actually ur curiosity to know more about maan's past...i must rather say this...brought me back to this attic room...and in my maan's life'

'yes and it was my biggest mistake...for which i can't even regret...unknowingly i doomed maan's fate...but i am happy he has never touched me in these past months...not even tonight i will let him touch me...at any cost mishty...tonight is karwachauth...and i will make a wish once again...for him...for his well being...to vanish this evil shadow from his life...i will make a wish again...'

'ohh baby...don't u know wishes are for one time only...and u will never risk maan's life...he has still not reached home...yet...'

'u can't do it mishty...u can't...'

'of course i can...what is the use...if i can't get him physically...i will for sure kill him...'

'then why u never did it before...?'geet questioned her...

'simple bcoz he forgot me...ab kaunsa upar jaake ek ho hi jaate...'she replied in a smirking manner...

'and if ever we would have become one...that would not have been a pleasurable experience u see...soul to soul connection is just not my taste...i want to have him physically...i want to feel him...touch him...carnally...in flesh and blood...' licking her lips she answered...

geet just closed her eyes...

'ur a disgusting...ur just...sick...'

'i am EVIL...' with that her laugh filled the room...

closing her ears...geet screamed loudly...

'Leave me alone...just go away...leave my maan alone...leave...plzzz'

and with that she broke into sobs...

'common get and get ready fast...i have had enough of ur nonsense emotional drama...maan is on his way...'

and with that she just vanished in thin air...leaving geet alone...with her misery...

'Oh god plzzz help plzzz...i can't even share my fear and pain...otherwise she will kill my maan...oh God i am feeling so helpless...plzzz show me some light..plzzz...'

A sudden thought strike her...

'She had said that her body is not here...but if its being burned or disposed off...how could her soul can be here...its simply impossible...this much knowledge i have...'

The horn of maan's car..broke her trance...and she immediately rushed downstairs...closing the room...

But her breath got stuck in her throat..seeing him in a disheveled state...his clothes were torn...and there was a band aid on his forehead...

She panicked and rushed towards him...

'maan what happened how...omg...'

'i am f9 geet it was just a small accident...u don't have to worry...'

She tried to hold him...but he declined her help...

' i said na i am f9 geet...just stay away...i neither need ur concern nor ur help...and i am perfectly f9...'

and with that he made his way towards his room...

'adi yeh sab kaise hua..?'

'woh maan sir gaadi chala rhe they pata nhi kaha se ek billi beech raste mein aa gai...use bachane ke chakkar mein...bal. bigad gya...but i had taken him to the doctor...toh chinta ki koi baat nhi hai...ok mam toh main chalta hoon...'

'thanky adi...'

Biding him gud bye..she turned around...only to face her...once again...with a look...'i told u so...'

' so hurry up geet...i can't wait more...otherwise beware of the results..for which only u will be responsible...'

Geet glared at her...but she vanished once again in thin air...leaving her with no choice...but to seduce maan...


Precap- Raat ka nasha abhi aankh se gya nhi...


So frds..plzzz do LIKE AND COMMENT...
I am eager to know ur views...
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Edited by Thesaurus - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
want to know what actually happened
Edited by lehr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what
seriously
mishty is ghost
she has control over geet nd maan 4got abt mishty after accident nd now mishty's ghost is so damn disgusting and cruel
I hope this is one of geet's dream or something like that
will b waiting for next part
thanks for the update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
That's so scary... God... What will Geet do now?? Mujhe sach mein dar laga.. (there was some serial i had seen same during my school days.. it reminds me that serial)
Nice part.. waiting for next...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
misty is a ghost and has control over geet
what will geet do?

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