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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
Jhooti

kyun??/😲

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: palindrome

kyun??/😲

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" samajh to tumhe sab kuch aata hai...to mere saamne ye najamjhi ka natak mat karo"

Qoute Unqoute😎

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

waiting for the next part dear

and though CHOTU LADDU ko aane mein deri hai

but how abt taking some chotu steps in this direction😉😉😉

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: gudmeet
waiting for the next part dear
and though CHOTU LADDU ko aane mein deri hai
but how abt taking some chotu steps in this direction😉😉😉

Hear hear🥳

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: gudmeet
waiting for the next part dear
and though CHOTU LADDU ko aane mein deri hai
but how abt taking some chotu steps in this direction😉😉😉

tumhe pata hai gudmeet,yeh mujhse nahi hota...😕😆😭

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
Hear hear🥳

I am sorry aashu but i suck at writing romance..

Thank god,and with much effort,i have added a hug here otherwise meri stories hero heroine last chapter me ek dusre ko touch karte hain...😆

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gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: palindrome

I am sorry aashu but i suck at writing romance..
Thank god,and with much effort,i have added a hug here otherwise meri stories hero heroine last chapter me ek dusre ko touch karte hain...😆

Hey dear yes i know u r uncomfortable writing hot stuff but i cant forget ur lines from beauty

bike riding for boys gives them dash between dash

and in obsession the kisses of geet to maan where her wanted only to receive love

and if this story weird position of maan

yes u write abt closeness only in ur last chapters but then in all ur stories maan and geet were not married from the beginning or after few updates

but in this story they are married within few updates

so i think this time u cant escape writing hot ok if not hot at least luke warm intimate scenes between maan and geet ( due to heavy public demand )

and i am very sure when u pick up ur pen or laptop to do so u will create magic

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Diva7

@Diva7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: palindrome

I am sorry aashu but i suck at writing romance..
Thank god,and with much effort,i have added a hug here otherwise meri stories hero heroine last chapter me ek dusre ko touch karte hain...😆

doston humari pallu amol palekar ki bhakt hai... isse aisa kuch ummeed na hi karo 🤣

hum toh saubhagyashali hai ki 13th chapter mein ek magical hug mil gaya...varna iska bas chale toh last chapter mein hug milta hume maaneet ka😆

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gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

@diva7

amol palekar ki bhakt

oh tooo good😆😆😆😆

very very very true

now the no 13 will say see how lucky i am

it got the hug of maan and geet from our dear palindrome

but even amol palekar has a lakki side of him

( in golmaal )

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Diva7

@Diva7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: gudmeet
@diva7
amol palekar ki bhakt
oh tooo good😆
very very very true
now the no 13 will say see how lucky i am
it got the hug of maan and geet from our dear palindrome

but even amol palekar has a lakki side of him
( in golmaal )

gudmeet ab kabhi hum no.13 ko unlucky nahi kahenge 😆