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Infinity.

@Infinity.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#701

superb update. 😊

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#702

Loved it nisha...very beautifully written

At last dev convienced her to come to KM...oh...dev is sweet...understand better than his arrogent bro...

Ufff...maan ka gussa...itna ke geet ke baare kuch aur samajhna nahi chahta...bechara maan kitan hurt ho gaya hai...

Loved shy brij here and opposite pari...ekdam sherni...almost going to deal with maan

Loved pari & geet's convo

Cont soon

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Ash1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#703

amazing update...

poor geet maan insulted her alot...bt glad she will keep on treating dev...

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Diva7

@Diva7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#704

🤣 🤣 🤣ohhh miri miri miri i love her❤️

read back to back two chapters😛 ...dats d only advantage when u come back aftr a weak or two on IF...u'll get lots of updates 😆...

bt really missed u n ur chatpati baatein🤗

chapters were absolute roller coaster ride of emotions ...Mr. Khadoos ka gussa😡, geet's patience, miri's cuteness, dev's mature behavior dan his age n of course more sensible dan his idiot bro, dadi's perfect timing n song selection... btw luvd d song... sooo peeerrrfffeeecccttct 😆...brij's shyness... gosh it's difficult to digest him like dat bt m luving his naya sharmila avatar 😆

oh jst out of curiosity m asking is he haan haan Mr. khadoos suffering frm multiple personality disorder😆 coz he was thinking something else n speaking opposite of it .."he instinctively took a step towards her, intent on putting his thoughts into action."...n jab muhn khola toh jwalamukhi phat pada ...

now m imagining miri wearing those glasses n checking maan's invisible tail 🤣 🤣...ye scene action mein kab aa raha hai nishu di...me intazaar karing😆

n i guess Pari is a reporter?????...

liked ur mama ji's ishhtyle of dhamki 😆😆

awesome chapters di luved it😊

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-gurtimaniac-

@-gurtimaniac-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#705

for not commenting for a long time

now back to reading from Part 8

will comment later in a day time...

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#706

thanks dear for such a long update

loved it

poor geet doesnt know any bad words just like me

and dev ...oh he is really smart . at last he convinced geet

loved brij and pari

and brij's stameering

and hot chocoloate instead of tea ...so caring

and geet tasting the hot choco and then saying that it will turn into poison by brij's staring was too good

pari and miri's convo was also good

one thing i noticed that u haqve given a positive and strong character to dev and brij ( which were negative in the show )

dev and brij may over power our dear maan

he he he

maan sing and paan singh tomar was also good one

and devolution was qutie innovaive dear

and abt pari's profession

the obvious one is working as assistant to some detective ( as kitty to karamchand or watson to sherlock holmes )

or may be she is trainer for tai chi or some other art like this

so always ready to pounce on somebody

and hey even i wonder what if pari forcibly hugs brij

it will be too funny if u write such things

waitng for pari and miri mission

and when will our dear maan and geet 's maahi maahi start

and loved ur narrative

ur mom and mama both are briliant

what a way to teach children not to use bad words

and sorry for the late comment dear

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Originally posted by: had2bu
Beautiful update

I think for all the characters and action today, Brij stole my hear with that hot choc... sweet guy

I love thinking up sweet scenarios for this guy. 😆

Aiii... Maan the prejudiced

Chaddo usse for now. Pari's revenge for him is perfect.😆

Geet even hurt herself, poor dear

The part with Dev and Geet was wonderful..

These two definitely share a special bond. I guess they don't pity each other is the first thing. They understand each other.

Dev is a little big man.. loved his dialogue to his brother...

Daadi rules again, getting her way and making Geet come back...

Pari has a nice protective streak in her...

Tune uska profession guess nahi kiya Avi. Give me a wild guess na.😉

Nisha your writing is wonderful, scenes are done very well.

The best part is the characterization of each one, like you are looking at a person and writing about them..

I am enjoying this story a lot.

Thanks Avi. When people whose works I love, say that to me, I feel humbled.😳

Thanks for all your support during my short stint at writing... It meant a lot to me.

No, no don't say that. No short stint for you. I'll keep bugging you for that SS.😆

Thanks for such a nice satisfying, long update...

Thanks for the wonderful comment.🤗

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#708

Originally posted by: shah10
Amazing
Love it

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: goldenmoon
awesome update
finally dev dadi ne geet ko rok hi liya...
n maan uff maan n usska gussa bina soche kuchh bhi bolta hai...

Thanks for the sunehri shabd goldenmoon😆

Rokna hi tha. Varna kahani kaise aage badhegi😉

Don't worry about his gussa. His time of reckoning is coming.😉

Originally posted by: anupm04
Amazing update
How can maan judge people on first meet
Dadi n dev rocked
Loved the way dev was giving ans to maan
Pls continue soon

Thanks Anu😃

Don't worry. I'll make him regret every word he's ever said. After all uski dor mere haath mein hain

Originally posted by: shalini_s
loved how Pari is teaching naughty things to Miri... very nice update..

Thanks Shalini.😃

I promise you are going to love Pari more and more😉

Originally posted by: ushankitvc
awesum updt...loved it...waiting to read more of the"Mission Invisible Tail"...continue sooon...

Thanks Usha😉

I am racking my brain for some good mission ideas. 😆

Originally posted by: alekhika20
Nice update,cnt soon.

Thanks Alekhika😃

Originally posted by: sanjukta19
Awsme update.geets dialogs r too good and cute.loved it

Thanks Sanjukta, I'm glad you enjoyed the update😉

Originally posted by: kiran_rati
awesome update
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

Thanks Kiran😃

Originally posted by: maansi25
interesting episode

Thanks Maansi.😊

Originally posted by: prerna1
awesome update
liked 1st post
full of emotions and drama
continue soon

Thanks Prerna

I'm glad you enjoyed the whole drama .😉

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#709

Amazing update Nisha...I totally loved. There were so manys hades to it that sometimes I was angry, sometime dejected and sometime I had a braod smile on my face...

Loved whole confrontation scene and finally Maan Singh Khurana had to bow down in front of his sherni...but this time it was more because of emotional blackmail which Dev heraped on him...first by apologising for hima nd then by refusing to see another physiotherapist...

Pari is trully part of Handa family...uski shaadi jaldi se kara do Brij ke saath so that she can hug him without thinking so much. But why was she sad and what is her profession...no idea. Lekin Geet ko puchna tha na us se ki woh pareshaan kyon hai or just she was tired from a long day?

Miri's explanantion of sher was awesome and I was still laughing thnking of the whole incident. Ab Pari is gonna give her some special glasses and MSK ki lag gayi watt

Precap is very interesting...Pari aayi...jhagarne ko MSK se...bring it on...

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crazydream

@crazydream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#710

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Read this chapter at one go. Must say
Its amazing.
Maan aur Geet me takraar. Love the
Character of Dadima. Bonaparte chup
Gayi Maan ko dekhkar. Lol.

Loved the face off part. Geet stood
Determined. N Dev also handled well.
Miri checking Maan's tail. Lol. That
Part was dam hilarious

Hmm Ab yeh Pari kya karne wali
Hai. Y is she woen out. Is sumthing
Fishy. She listening to everything.
Ya I wonder wat Pari's proffesion
Is??? U haven't mentioned anything
Abt her other than she bringing
Wings. Is she a designer???

Continue soon.

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