Originally posted by: Maaneet099
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Finally, finally I got around to answering to your comment. Besharmi ki wajah se soory bhi nahi bolungi😆
to be honest this chapter was such a jhatka. i expected something and i get something better... best deal i have found i must say. 😉
the day started off as usual with Pari dropping off Miri and of course them meeting Maan and Dev was coincidental. Varna kya guarantee hai ki Maan would drop off Dev and that too at the exact time when Pari arrived with miri. writer ban-ne ka koi toh faida honi chahiye nahi 😆
School timing same hain na yaar and coincidences such as these are the staple fodder for stupis writers like me😆
pari and miri conversation was absolutely amazing! it was hilarious with a drop of innocence on it... it reminded me of my cutie little cousins and their friends accepting everything i said. nahi nahi i never took advantage of it magar u know sometimes when i wanted to have a little fun 😆 (shh kisko mat batayiyega) i wondered how the glasses part was going to take place and i was in for a laughter shot (i meant as a vaccine here :p) "Mission invisible tail" was a tale of its own! the cherry on the cake was when miri sang that song. i literally fell off my bed reading it. Nishaji aap please ek warning likh deejiye before your update: Laughter riot at work. Read at your risk!
The song selection humare miyaji ka tha. He found the perfect song and I was laughing too as I was writing it.😆
Innocent fun with cousins can back fire though. They will open their little mouth at little inappropriate times aur humari band baja dete hain.😉
maan pari initial encounter while she faked innocence was right on! yeh lo maan babu. kya hua agar geet cannot give back a tit for a tat humari pari hai na 😉
the sudden shift in narration with the girl in tight skirt on train had me scratching my head. i thought you were introducing a new character magar viola it was Pari! i did frown along with maan when he saw her walk with her back towards the station. i do understand cheapo men like those pari arrested but sometimes i feel the western culture among women does have a share in it too. (i wont say more and stir unnecessary attention) i was proud you were able to send a message through this. not everyday we find stories with actual purpose 😊
Hmm that debate will open a can of worms I don't want to deal with right now. But I think I understand what you are trying to say. But then again, it's all about our perspective. 😊
anyways back to the story. i was really proud of pari to go out daringly and catch those cheap men out to shame mankind! but i was way more proud when she stood up once again for geet. finding a reliable and loyal friend is difficult in aaj kal ke zamaane and to find a woman like pari, it is amazing. geet is the one who is lucky i must say. LURVED colorful gaaliyas she gave back and forth to maan.. you deserve it maan babu for all the things you said to geet. you have no right to judge her especially when you feel so insecure of yourself 😡
I am glad you loved Pari's character. I always worry when writing strong side characters, People don't always want to read about them, no matter how wonderful they are. But I had to write about Pari. Hers was the only character which was very clear in my mind from day one. So I love it when somebody says that they love Pari. I feel like all my efforts in writing about her have paid off.
if the cherry on the cake was miri singing the song the whole cake along with cherry was the fact that maan and pari are going to work together! *rubbing my hands gleefully* cannot seriously wait to see what other bombs are going to go off between the two 🤣
thank you sooo much Nishaji for this wonderful update! kudos to the things you bring to this story. i am going to force my best friend to read this story by using the marathi trump card 😆 she is not story types person. in fact we are best friends but she is literally a complete opposite of me...
hehe anyways i cannot let her miss this wonderful story by a fellow maharashtrian. 😉
Do tell me if you ever get her to read it.
haan haan mujhe pata hai aap pure maharashtrian nahi hain. i remember reading you are from Goa side (so much for peeking into your convo while talking to Mayyo and Onir 😆) well so is my friend. her paternal ancestors trace back to goa and they even have some relatives still living there. anyways after all my bak bak hope you aren't bored 😳
You never know who is peeping in on our conversations.😲
Bak bak is the food for my soul. The day I get bored of it samajh lena main sathiya gayi hoon or I am no longer alive😆
Thanks Madhu for ths fantastic in-depth comment and I really am extremely sorry for the delay in replying. Agle comment pe aapko turant jawab milega(Hint..Hint😉)
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