MG SS: LOST RELATIONS#2 epi1/2/3pg 37/38/41 apr 23 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
BOTH THE UPDATES WERE GOOD
LOVED VICKY'S MASTI AND TEASING NMAAN
AND MAAN LOST IN HIS PRINCESS
BOTH ARE DREAMING ABOUT THE PAST
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates
my hearts going dhak dhak
after reading both the chaps.
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan achchhe bachche aise sapne nehi dekhte...buri aat hai...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb updates.maan seeing geet in meenakshi.lovely sr
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved maan n vicky hug...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part. Purnjanam wala pyar.
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Posted: 12 years ago




ek ajnabee sa ehsas dil ko sataye, shayad yahi toh pyar hai

betabiyo me dhadkan meree chal paye, shayad yahi toh pyar hai

kutch bhee kaha naa, kutch bhee suna naa

phir bhee, bechain dil hai humara




behke kadam hai, mushkil mai ham hai

dekho sambhle bhala kaise yara

chahe bina bhee, najdik ham chale aaye

shayad yahi toh pyar hai




najare bichade pehare laga de dil pe

par dil kisiki naa mane

kaanto pe chalke sholo me jalake roke

milake rahenge divane

o o o



chahat kee lau toh, aandhi me bhee jilmilaye

shayad yahi toh pyar hai

ek ajnabee sa ehsas dil ko sataye

shayad yahi toh pyar hai






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Posted: 12 years ago
THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part









PART 17
me cleared my 3rd sem with 83% so no restrictions on my ffs ...



hum aapse bahut pyar karte hai rajkumar….

The declaration of her love ..

Maan abruptly opened his eyes only to see himself sweating…. His breathing was uneven .. vision seems to be lost in that moment of love only… he couldn't relate anything… was it his past and future.. and moreover seeing something like this was purely a thing that he was totally unaware he himself found his being in the sudden embarresment of what he saw.. how he can see like this.. this was more than what he thought about his dreams … they were actually related to some princess and prince and

GEET…

WAS HE THE PRINCE ???

HOW IS GEETANSHI IN HIS DREAMS..???

WHY IS SHE IN HIS NIGHTMARE THAT NO MATTER HOW MUCH HE TRY TO FORGET BUT LIKE IT IS INSTILLED IN HIS SOUL ..EVERYTIME HE TRIES TO GAIN SOME PEACE THOSE MEMORIES CAME RUSHING TO HIM…..

He needed his answers .. he needed to talk to geet..what if she was seeing the same dream and him in her thoughts that could create problems and it will be certainly outrageous moreover now he has seen her that means something is there which is still needed to be discovered..

Maan looked at himself his body was fully drenched in sweat inspite off his room having very less temperature because of air conditioner….

Maan: I need to talk to her right now.. he was desperate with his questions that needed to be answered…. Suddenly he looked outside it was pitch dark .. cold freezing winds were blowing his mind and senses were betraying him.. the fade pictures of that girl in the royal rajasthani attire than the prince… maan tried to remove all those pictures from his mind but nothing seems to get vanish … it was actually getting deep and dark like his senses knew significance of those dreams…

He knew he cant meet her at this time… maan glanced at the full moon inspite hidden between the dark clouds it was trying to come out and illuminate the darkness with its light ..though the shadow was prominent but the small amount of that intense light was enough to glow the lifeless souls…

Seeing no improvement in his wandering thoughts… maan decided to divert his mind he knew that by doing his martial arts he can easily get away from the deep recesses of the past…..

His moves were furious.. eyes were dark with the pain of loosing himself the ache the gush of anger that was taking toll on him.. maan kicked and punched the mirror that was there .. mirror was like long lost shattered love for him… his knuckles were bleeding .. he was having pain but nothing seems to satisfy him…

It was six when he actually found himself slight withdrawn with tiredness….. while geet found herself all fresh that night with a new jest like something in her life is provoking her to find her lost self… like something is making her to come out of the darkness that was not for her.. but her love had indeed made her to get herself lost in that life which was so scary and vulnerable at times….

It was just few minutes when geet had finally decided that she will not let her past come in her life… when suddenly maan called…

Maan didn't slept even for a second after that dream… or say the picture of his love… he was determined to face her to ask her how can she be connected to him .. does she is also subjected to the kind of life he is living.. does she is having a constant fear in her life of loosing someone very precious….

The feelings the emotions the words that were coming out in the form of words were actually the past incidents that had made him to live like this….

Geet was not annoyed by his morning call and even he wished to meet her at an early instant.. he was not demanding but requesting .. though at first place geet wanted to say a NO but something in her snapped and he immediately agreed like she herself wanted to see him but was not getting how to say him ….

Geet: fine Mr Khurana I will meet you after an hour .. at the university sight… I hope you dont mind…

Maan: fine.. I will meet you there geet….

For the fisrt time he called het geet .. there was nothing like what she can call arrogance….

Exactly after an hour… geet was there at the project site.. there was no worker.. the project seems to be at halt… maan looked at her..not only he was feeling miserable by his love making dream that she was looking just like the baby princess he saw in his dream… strangely geet thought to dress up in a pure rajasthani style.. so she was there with a anarkali in pure rajasthani prints…everything in her from the glass bangles in her wrist to the eyes having a thick layer of kohl.. her baby pink lip gloss… everything was just like MEENAKSHI..

Maan turned his back.. he couldn't fathom the fact that she was actually the kind of girl he was looking and searching in his dreams all these years.. no she was actually the same gal….

Geet tapped his shoulder… maan composed himself and turned… she didn't believe he was looking lost ..his eyes were slightly red .there was visible dark circles…. She directly questioned him….

Geet: you didn't slept maan…..

Maan who was in his own world of confusion and conflicts… didn't hear her question….

Maan: do you know who is meenakshi and divyam geet.. do you know ??? … are you also having some night mares …

Geet took two steps backward..how did he knew ..and Meenakshi and divyam she never ever told anyone who were they then.. how did he know…

Geer: no I don't know..and why do you want to know… you don't have any right to know my personal life…

She snapped back…

Maan sighed in frustration she was really a fiery and scary at times…

Maan again asked in a composed tone….

Maan: do you know them geet.. please don't lie to me… I need to know….

Geet didn't said any single word.. but she started going back.. now maan couldn't hold

her indifference to something that was making him to force her..

maan grabbed her wrist… he dint want to listen to her now….

Maan: fine then come with me….

Geet wriggled.. but maan just scooped her in his arms….

Maan: believe me geet I am just tired now of all this.. I need my answers… and if you don't cooperate then I know how to make you understand .. I cant handle this torture any more….

Geet slapped his arms… and he glared at her.. her eyes were not having any kind of resitance but she was certainly having an urge to just remain like she is in his arms.. instead of telling him to put her down she snuggled closed to him…. Her breathe was falling on his neck…. Maan was not having any clue that he will be subjected to her sweet torture…

Maan: stop doing that … he asked her in certain irritation…

Geet who has started to play with his shirt buttons unknowingly snapped him…

Geet: you had forcefully took me in your arms and don't you dare to shout at me… I will do what I want….

There was nothing like strangers or mere acquaintance between them… but they were just like two souls who knew each other very deeply and indeed they were lovers from last birth so they were bound to know…

Maan placed her on the passenger seat…. .. geet was so much annoyed with his behavior.. that she didn't even put on seat belt..

Maan: geet tie your seat belt..

Geet just didn't listened…

Geet: I am hungry lets have breakfast…. You didn't even let me have my breakfast… now come on take me some dhaba.. you know its been long I had something from outside ….

Maan: did I tell you to come without having anything.and I am not your driver so stop ordering…

Geet pouted…

Geet: wait and watch till I make you mine….

Saying so she averted her eyes.. her face was red with anger… but she didn't even know what she said..whether it was in the respect of her driver but the actual meaning was making him to hide those emotions that she had waken up in him….

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Next: past and present meets…

More two parts to end this ss

Leave your comments…..


NOTE : next week i will be completing my SS PARALLEL LIFE by giving its summary... and LOST RELATIONS TOO SO next updates will be of these two only... in march will try to complete commitment too

then will switch to other ffs




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Posted: 12 years ago
congrates dear for scoring good percentage
superb update
loved it
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
plz dont wrap up ur works so soon
u r an awesome writer
want to read more and more updates

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

congrates dear for scoring good percentage

superb update
loved it
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
plz dont wrap up ur works so soon
u r an awesome writer
want to read more and more updates



dear it was planned like this only thats why i am completing them.. moreover there r many more to come so i need to end these ones

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