MG SS: LOST RELATIONS#2 epi1/2/3pg 37/38/41 apr 23

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PROLOGUE

"Mat jaiye hame chod ke''.ruk jaiye mat jaiye hame chod kar''.hum vinti karte hai aapse mat jaiye ''''.

Ruk jaiye''.."

A girl was crying badly pleading to him to stop not to go to the battle field'''.

She will not be able to bear the distance if something happens to him''.

Suddenly maan woke up sweating he was totally drenched '''tiny pearls of sweat beads on his forehead''.he was panting heavily''he closed his eyes ''and tried to relax himself''

It was the same dream he had been seeing since he was five ''.same vague images same words '.same begging'''' a girl begging to stop''but to whom she is saying this''.this was the question that has not been answered till yet''..

Maan: damn nineteen years '.nineteen years I have been seeing this dream''but it is always like this'''. Blurred images''.faint and unclear pictures always''.

Why there is only reflection '''.why????????

Why I am not being able to see clear''.

Maan when after his self introspection and confusions '''

Yes confusion he's been puzzled since the day he came to understand these dreams''.. went for his daily physical routine'..now he couldn't sleep sleep was now far away from him''.

So he started his tai chi to get rid off the sweet voice ringing in his ears''.

Yes sweet '..her voice is indeed melodious that had been ringing in his ears since nineteen years'.but it now seems to be poisioning his ears making him vunerable '..

That he can't do do anything of this'..

He has lost his peace of mind '''

He had consulted may physiatrist but the result was same none of the medical advancements were able to tell him the answers to his unwanted questions about that blurred vision of his life'''

On the other side some where a girl was mumering in her sleep she was constantly crying and saying not to leave her''she was continuously crying '.tears were flowing unknowing to her she was shivering''.

And suddenly got up with a jerk''.

And wiped her tears'''wondering why she is going through this phase ''..it is the worst nightmare that scare her to death daily'''.

Those hazy images are making her weak'..she is helpless that she can't do anything for herself''nothing...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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congratualations on the 2nd thread 🥳
can we expect an update soon ? :)
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Originally posted by: Jeba.Rahman

congratualations on the 2nd thread 🥳
can we expect an update soon ? :)


thanksss

yes u can expect update soon
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thanksss😃
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watng hw much tym?DLAP bhi update karo na😊
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THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part









PART 13

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Maan on the other side made his assistant to immediately contact to the owners of the palace…..

The news spread like fire that some one wants to buy that cursed palace…and even uday heard but still no one knew that who is that unlucky person who wants to destroy himself….

But the truth was like that the destruction will be reduced now……

Daadima went to guruji that she probably will be visiting for the first time…. Till now no occasion came that made her go to him but here she is ought to go to him …like destiny is making her do that she wants…..

The day hectic for maan….

The owners of the fort have agreed to sell off that palace to him…and inface he was getting that place almost at no cost….

According to the owners that will get rid of that place that is just tagged with them…neither it is giving them any profit nor is of any use

So when maan directly approached them how can they deny and even just got ready to sell him at the lowest cost possible….

Well when the real owner is taking his own posession than how can his own things will not be beneficial to him….

It was even surprising for the owner that till now who so ever wanted to buy that land ..that property it nearly took them two weeks to reach india and then all the while something weird happened and the deal got cancelled but this time ….

It was within a day that the owner reached to rajasthan …it was like that the time was itself making all the things in favor of maan……

Where on the otherside daadima reached the guruji and she told him the entire problem…..

Guruji was an aged man…a glow was there on his face…..

Listening to his name itself a slight smile came on his lips……

Daadima: guruji maan is buying that palace …… he is already very tensed due to those dreams…. And now this fort…..is every thing fine ……

GURUJI: only the real owner of that place will be able to buy the palace …every time when someone tried to make the palace his…. The magic that was done on the palace does something that the buyier goes away from the palace…but its real owner will be able to get his place with ease ……………

Daadima was in awe with the revelation……

Daadima: but maan …how my maan is related in all these guruji……

Guruji: destiny is testing them savitri ji…… he is not alone…..

Guruji didn't reveal reveal who is the second soul which is being tortured…..

Daadima: maan…. Why maan is having those nightmares guruji…he is deing every day guruji…. He can't even take a peaceful sigh ….. he is disturbed guruji….

Guruji: everything is not in our hands ……. He was selected and he is suffering with her…. But the time is not o far when he will be free from all the tensions savitri ji……

Daadima: does we need to do anything …..

Guruji closed his eyes once….

Here maan signed the deal….

JALSTHAL now belongs to the great businessman MAAN SIGH KHURANA…or say MAHARAJ DIVYAM……

Guruji : your grandson is the owner of his palace savitri ji…… the real owner again took his posession……

Daadima was not able to say anything…..

Daadima: any solution to this problem guruji….

Guruji: it's still having some time……

Guruji st: you need to learn the whole truth maharaj and maharani…till then no one can lessen your pain..but you two will be each other's balm till then…..

Daadima took her leave….now she was going to meet geet…..

Here uday was not able to say anything….

When geet was literally pouting …..

Geet: bhaisaa what did you do with my I-Phone ……

She was just getting angry..when uday out of fear told her truth….

Uday: geet stay away from me…don't come close…..

Ohh she was coming close to her bhai saa to tickle him…..

Geet: why ..first you leave me alone in the room…and then you played with my I- Phone …you didn't even even cared what if I got scared……. Bhai saa you will get the punishment

Uday: ohhkkk,….. any punishment but don't come close to me…..

Here daadi who had just came was witnessing the scene…. With a smile….whereas maharaj welcomed her….. he had met her many time when she came here ….sometimes with maan's dadaji too…..

So they were knowing each other …….

Whereas geet and uday were still playing like they used in their childhood……

Uday somehow tried to escape from geet…. He actually ducked her and ran….and geet how can she left him…..

Geet : bhai saa I will not leave you…. She was running behind him…..

But her breathing got ragged…..

She sat on the nearby dining and gulped water……

This time that face to face had taken a toll on him…..

She came to her daadu ..and noticed someone there….an elderly lady may be in her seventy's…she was looking at savitri devi with great concentration….trying to recognise her…… when maharaj introduced them……

Maharaj: geet …meet her she is savitri devi….

Geet greeted her with a small smile still trying to know her…she was sure she had seen her….

Actually geet was almost in her dazed state when she was there in khurana mansion….

Though daadi very clearly know her…but still a formal introduction is must…..

Geet: namaste….

Daadima/ savitri devi: come and sit here beta….daadi very dearly called her….she was also shocked seeing geet in that deadly condition at that time….

Daadima: how are you now…..

Geet felt a little awkward…she didn't want anyone to know her condition …. An unsecurity lingers withing her…..

Geet reluctantly….

Geet: I am fine now…..

And left from there to her room……

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Next: to be continued

NOTE: hiii how all are you…..

Wanna tell you that mainly five – six parts are remaining …..

And I want to complete this story by giving regular updates now……

So need your consent…

After 4 jan I will try to give regular parts as this semester exams will be over if the response is good…..

So tell me are you all fine with this….????


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

watng hw much tym?DLAP bhi update karo na😊


updated ...
now all the updates will be after my exams sweets...
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Originally posted by: suhaaana


updated ...
now all the updates will be after my exams sweets...

ok dear bst of luck 4 exams😊,wen wil finish?

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