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Posted: 12 years ago
A MESSAGE FOR MOHITA DII(BULBUL)

RIGHT NOW SHE IS NOT AT HER HOME
WHEN SHE WILL BE BACK(SOON WALA BACK H)
SHE WILL UPDATE DULHAN
Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsmile

A MESSAGE FOR MOHITA DII(BULBUL)


RIGHT NOW SHE IS NOT AT HER HOME
WHEN SHE WILL BE BACK(SOON WALA BACK H)
SHE WILL UPDATE DULHAN


hai geet smile
how do u know exactaly
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab tho wait karna padth hai
chalo

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovebirdsmaneet


hai geet smile
how do u know exactaly


dear mohita dii ne fb pe dala h yeh status na kaha if me daal de soo
maine yeh subh kam kar dia
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: BULBUL.A




u know naa sona dii how much i m nikami

😡u NIKAMI ,still not updated grrr😡
😆love u muahhh.me waiting😃
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Posted: 12 years ago






CHAPTER 9

RECAP: MAANEET MARRIAGE IS FIXED THEY ALL R GOING TO DELHI SOON.

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In night geet and maan r busy in their thought, both r feeling something different.

"why m I feeling odd even I can feel something moving in my stomach also. I m scared no no why m I scared, and maan ji is nice and baba also said naa, maan is best for me he never leave me alone in any circumstances and see how he handle everything like teacher for school and my friends in my marriage but I don't know nothing about his world, what if I do something wrong but I have my Krishna ji with me and maan ji also" geet thought, and blush and hide her face in pillow in shyness like maan is watching her.

Other side in MAAN room

"Why m I smiling like that, well at last I find a perfect daughter in law for my family. I know she will think my family as her, but how I handled her innocence, what will happen if I shouted on her in anger and my anger grr (turn on stomach) hmm but I give her all love which she missed here, hmm Naina and Pari don't think I left u welcome to delhi my so called sister-in-laws" maan thought, and sleep with a smile and welcome to a new morning in his life.

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Rano , Naina and Pari is fuming in anger

" u both r useless what u said u both r very intelligent and beautiful but see what that girl do she impress MSK in two days I really shame on u it's not like that I don't love geet but I want best for u both" rano said in frustration.

"What will I do maa if that MSK choose that gawar not me" Naina said, and made a yucky face.

"just shut up I want to see u both in that house now behave like a well mannered girl, we have chance now also I want Naina as maan dulhan and pari as sid dulhan now u both complete my dream, tomorrow we r going delhi and u have to win heart of khurana brothers ok" rano said, but a unknown shine in her eyes, a greedy shine.

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A beautiful morning comes and two souls are having different feeling with their own reason. Geet knows today whole village come to know about her and maan marriage and this feeling are giving her a jittery feeling in her stomach.

"uff aise koi karta hai kya, I have to pack all thing how I supposed to finish all this in two hours and then we have to go rajji house also to take permission sachi he is such a my monkey" geet talked to herself with a pout unaware that maan is listening her all bak bak.

"ohh so u r saying ur would be husband monkey" maan asked, with faked anger.

Geet bite her tongue and widen her eye but compose herself and said " wo I am not talking about u and this is wrong to listen other talks secretly" geet said with fake anger.

Maan hold geet waist and pull her to himself geet is completely plastered to his chest and his chest is bare he is just come after finish his work out and listen her cribbing. Geet breathe become heavy to see maan like this and she is feeling butterflies in her stomach. Maan tuck her strands behind her ear very slowly and cresses his finger tips to geet red rosy cheek which make geet moan unknowingly and maan smile to see geet all lost in his passion.

Maan smile mischievously and go near geet ear and said huskily "what happen ms.radio bolti kyu band hu gayi". But geet lost totally in maan and his hot breath not helping which is giving geet tickle session.

"maan ji plz" geet moaned.

"what plzz candy hmm" maan said more passionately and send a shiver in geet spine but their little romantic moment is broke by dadi who come in geet room for some work and see maan mischievous and disturbing her bahu and other thing how can dadi left her favourite chance to tease maan.

"umm..umm maan beta" dadi said with serious expression. Maan left geet instantly and see dadi in shocked expression on other side geet turn in a red cherry to see dadi caught them like that.

"what r u doing maan u r not married to my bahu yet" dadi said with faked anger and hide her smile.

"vo dadi'.i '.mai.." maan stammered in front of dadi.

"what.. ye ..mai ..vo haa go and get ready fast and dare u touch my bahu again" dadi said in faked anger.

Maan went from there as soon as possible he knows dadi teasing session and smile like a teenager.

"geet what is happening here hmm" dadi asked to a red geet.

Geet who is red turn in redder and run from there to save herself. she is having a shy smile on her face and her eye saying she is happy by heart. She bangs in Naina by mistake.

"what the hell geet" naina shouted ,but stop in mid and see priya is watching her with folded hand on her chest and naina changed her colour instantly and said politely "arre geet samahal ke what if u hurt herself" naina said sweetly and geet mouth open automatically to see naina changing behaviour.Geet didn't notice priya.

Naina go from there. Geet come to garden and take a long breath her cheeks are red and hot bcoz of shyness. She didn't forget yesterday incident till now and maan once again made her blush in front of dadi. A small smile comes to her lips to think about yesterday incident somewhere she starts to feel a authority on maan and she doesn't know why? May be she know now maan is her would be husband her mind differed to yesterday.

FLASH BACK AFTER MAAN DECLARE HIS MARRIAGE WITH GEET OFFICALLY

Maan scooped geet in his arms in front of all family. First geet is shocked after realisation, what happen suddenly, a sudden blush come on her face which turn her red. Maan smile to see geet red and shook his head. Karan, Yash, Sid and Annie starts to whistling and hooting to see Maan. Maan glare them but they all smile mischievously and dadi also with them.

"plzz maan ji let me stand on my feet" geet said in so much low voice.

Maan ignore geet and said "well if ur drama is over can I go I have to bandage on geet toe".

Geet instantly see maan with shocked expression and thought "that why he scoop me in his arm, how much care he does for me, how m I able to give same love to him" and watching maan with moist eye.

Maan saw geet changing expression and lift one eyebrow to ask her what happen but geet shook her head in no.

"if ur silent movie is end than go in the room" dadi said with a teasing smile.

Maan and geet became red with embarrass and maan took geet in room. He laid geet on bed and went in washroom for first aid kid and sit near geet legs.

"maan ji why u take this time me in ur arm I mean when we come in room for talk that time also my toe is bleeding so why this time u take me in ur arm" geet asked out of blue.

Maan smile at geet question and said "hmm that time I don't have any right on u but now you are my would be wife".

Geet lower her eye to listen wife word from maan. Maan take geet foot in his hand and start to move her salwar upward but geet hand stops him "maan ji".

"mujhe haq hai geet (I have right geet)" maan said with bedroom eye.

Geet remove her hand and give a silent permission to maan for go ahead. Maan slowly clean her wound with detole and geet moan in pain "ahh..hhh".

Maan saw geet is moaning in pain he replace detole cotton with his lips and kissed softly on geet toe which send a shiver in geet spine. Geet lower her eye to see maan passionate eye but maan comes to naughty mood and called

"geet"

"hmm" said geet in trance.

"don't worry u will not be pregnant with my this kiss" said maan and smile mischievously.

"huh" said geet in confusion.

Then reality strikes her what maan saying and she throws a pillow on maan in anger.

Maan ducked that pillow susses fully and laugh loudly. Geet turn her face and pout cutely. Maan come near geet' cover her with sheet. Geet watching maan from corner of her eye for this maan shook his head to see his child wife. Maan kiss her cheek and said

"good night geet" and go from there with a smile. Geet first see maan in confusion and thought "he left my bandage in mid" and saw her foot which is securely banded by maan, geet shocked to see how she not realise anything.

FLASH BACK END

Geet trance broke by Sid voice who is calling her.

"uff u r here bhabi all r searching u come breakfast is ready" sid said.

"ohh sorry Sid bhai I just come here and" geet said but sid cut her.

"don't say sorry bhabi and I m small from u in relation so call me Sid" sid said with a charming smile.

"but u r elder and I want a bhai also, cant u become my bhai" geet asked from sid with so much hope.

Sid take geet in side hug and said "ohh my bro's sweet candy ok from today I m ur bhai ok".

Geet gave a sweet smile to sid and nod her head in yes.

Geet and sid went in for breakfast but someone is watching them and had tears in his eye which is none other maan to see bond geet having with his family.

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In after noon maan geet went to rajji house for permission to take rajji Delhi with them.

"arre geet beta or u r savtri devi grand son naa come beta come in" rajji father said.

"namste kaka" geet said.

Rajji father and maan also said namste to each other and maan take blessing of them also they r also maan's dada ji friend.

"vo uncle I want permission to take rajji to Delhi with us" maan said.

"Delhi rajji why beta" rajji father asked.

"vo I m going to marry geet soon and marriage is held in delhi so u all also come there" maan said.

"whattt really our geet is going to marry u I m so happy beta, arre jara kuch meetha lao humre damad (son in law) come first time here" rajji father said in happiness.

Geet is blush to listen the word damad.

"beta we cant leave our work and come with u for so many days" rajji father said.

"ok but I want rajji come with geet as she is her best friend and I send someone to take u all delhi in marriage" maan said.

"and rajji is my responsibility u don't have to worry for her I promise" maan said when he saw rajji father is not convinced.

"k beta I believe u, rajji come with all when u r going" rajji father said with a smile.

"Tonight so rajji pack ur bag I will send someone to pick up u in evening" maan said.

"ji jiju I will start my packing" rajji said in over excitement she just want to talk with geet alone.

"Ok uncle now our many works is remaining so we have to go now" maan said.

"k beta umm plz take care of ur geet she is gem beta" rajji father said and hug geet in affection he has tears in his eye.

Maan nod his head with a smile and maneet go from there.

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Precap: SORRY FOR SAME PRECAP THIS IS BECOME A FF NOW SO STORY MOVE WITH A SLOW PACE I WILL TRY ADD PRECAP IN NEXT CHAPTER. HOPE U DON'T MIND BCOZ U CAN READ MORE PART NAA.

************thud**************

geet just touch her cheek where maan slape her a minute ago and see him with her teary doe shape eyes. like her eyes asking him u also dont believe in me naa. but maan is blind in rage and concern.

Maan : what the hell this is geet? u know what have u done in ur stubbornness?

geet just sob silently and head her head down

maan feeling frustrated: bas u have to bear punishment, in MAAN SINGH KHURANA dictionary everyone is same. samjhi.

now ur punishment is ...

SURPRISE

IN LAST CHAPTER MY DULHAN FF CROSS 250 LIKES SO I M PLANINNG TO GIVE U ONE NEW FF I WILL POST THAT FF WHEN HAQ AND WQAT IS FINISHED.

AS DULHAN CROSS 250 LIKE

HERE IS FIRST GILMPSE OF MY NEW FF

MY INNOCENT DOLL

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3314757/my-innocent-doll-mg-threa-2-added

TELL ME HOW IT IS

IF U DON'T READ HAQ UPDATE GO AND READ AND COMLETE QUETA SOON

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NOW GOIG TO WRITE WQAT

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Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
me first yipppeee
loved it
its too good update
geet feeling shy when maan carries her
nd how he bandaged her wounds
truely magical nd pure love
seriously
pari nd naina becoming soo sweet wid geet
pathetic dey r sooo cheap...want to more in maan house maan nai sahi toh maan ka bhai hi sahi...
marne ka mann karta hai..
but maan hai na mera kaam karne ke liye
nd dadi ka fake anger wid maan lolozzz
nd now rajji going wid geet
waiting for the precap from soo long
Edited by uteem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it👍🏼
waitin for d precap to happen😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
so naina and company is planning to ruin their marriage
hope nothing happens
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Posted: 12 years ago
me aa gae bak bak karne
pahle toh dii app apne thank pe control
karo
bacha ke rakho "sasural" me kam
aaega😆😉

ab upadte ki bari
mast upadte😃
geet ko toh maan ne tamatar bana dia h
candy se😳
ab itna blush karegi toh☺️
tamator hi kahugi na😉

geet nd sid bhai
ko bonding maan ke sath
mujhe v
aachi lagi😊

nd woh 3 chudail ka paln 😡
pitne ka plan bana rahi h kya theeno maa beti
maan plzz h aacha sabak sikhana😉

nd iss precap ne toh ab jaan le rakhi h
jaldi se batao maan ne ku maara geetu ko😡

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