NEW MG FF-DEKHA EK KHWAAB...!!! Part6/Pg24 25DEC - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
awesome part

now sona will help geet ..

and those witches came out with their true face
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
wow awesome
huh geet ki chooti maa nd dono behanmeri fool jasi geet se kam karwa rahi h huh
hehe geet ke new frnds interesting
precap awesome waiting for it

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43


superb updt😊

waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Awww...kitna cute update tha,saare fairytales yaad dila diye.

Aur haa saare ugly villians bhi,cant curse d mother-daughter cruella party enough for their cruelty.

Jaldi se prince charming ki entry kara do.

Waiting for dinner prepared by animal party.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
amazing. jaanwar party r geets friends hve come to help geet... wow Like is not working
Edited by ammu5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
nice ff
add me to ur pm list
pm me when u update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
so cute...it so looked like a new version of Cindrella...
so Sona is a fairy and trying to help Geet through the animals...very cute twist...
step mom is as usual bad and horrible and it was funny to think that Nandani and Preeto think no one can stand where they are...LOL...
ab prince humari princess se kab milega bas yeh dekhna hai...hai so Dreamy!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Part 3

Tittu brought along with him other butterflies and birds who helped Geet to put the clothes and linen for drying. Romeo taking help from Pinku and Pinky helped her fill buckets and rinse the remaining suits. Geet was overwhelmed looking at them never had imagined some day her pets will help her in times of distress.

"Meri madat karne ke liyein bahot shukriya… Yeh ehsaan mein kaise chukaungi..???"

Romeo whilst foaming the soap in the bucket spoke.

"Huh… Geet abhi toh bas shuruwaat hai… Aage aage dekho hum kya karte hai…!!!"

"Hum bina kissi jijak pahoch jaayenge tumhari madad ke liyein"

Spoke Tittu excitedly.

Meanwhile Chhoti Maa and the twins were returning back. Both were happy after registering their names for the beauty contest.

"Maa… Aap ko lagta hai Geet ne saara kaam khatam kar liya hoga…???"

"Preeto… Tum toh jaanthi hon… Geet kitni aalsi hai… Main toh sharth laga kar kehti hoon ke Haveli waisi ki waisi hogi…."

"Agar kaam nahi kiya toh usski sazaa bhugtne ke liyein taiyaar rehna hoga usse…"

On otherside Geet was brooming the staircase and Romeo was mopping the floor. The squirrel couple cold hold of a wet rag and skated down the staircase railings inturn cleaning it.. But in their excitement they forgot to see the soap filled bucket in front. Geet yelled for them to watch out but the mess was already done. The floor in the drawing room was all wet and water logged.

"Nahiii…… Ab kya hoga…???"

Romeo glared at the squirrel couple and they just pointed at each other.

"Maine kuch nahi kiya…Saari galti iss Pinky ki hai… Issne dhakka diya mujhe…"

"Awww…. Kya maine dhakka diya tumhe aur joh tumne mujhe pakad ke rakha tha woh kya tha…???"

Both started blaming each other when Geet pushed them away to stop their unnecessary argument.

"Yeh tum log baad mein bhi teiy kar sakte hon… Pehle yeh paani jaldi saaf karne mein meri madat karo…"

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Outside Tittu his friends and other birds had trimmed the bushes in the garden and also watered the plants. They were doing the last work of disposing the weeds and the dried leaves when Tittu spotted the carriage arriving back.

"Aa gayyi Chudellon ki sawaari…"

He flew swiftly inside the Haveli and informed Geet.

"Kya woh log aa gayye… Babaji… Abhi toh bahot kuch baaki reh gayya hai…"

She and the pets started to panic not knowing what to do, when a idea struck Romeo's mind. He layed flat on the floor and mopped all the water in his fur sliding on the floor 2-3 times.

"Waah re mere sher… Kya tarikka apnaaya hai…"

"Geeettt… Kaam hua ya nahi…???"

Geet who was smiling heartidly stifled on hearing her Chhoti Maa's voice.

"Aayi Chhoti Maa…"

She answered her back and pushed Romeo and all the pets outside the Haveli through the back door.

"Romeo jab tak main na bulau Haveli ke andar bilkul mat aana… Samjhe…"

Giving her final word she skipped to the drawing room. Preeto spoke angrily looking at Geet.

"Dekha Maa… Maine kaha tha ab tak Geet ne koi kaam kiya nahi hoga…"

"Nahi… Nahi… Maine sab kaam waqt pe khatam kar diye hai…"

"Accha… Lekin jaldbaazi mein chamak-dhamak ke bare mein kahaan socha hoga… Bas aivanyi ki hogi safaai, uppar se, humein dikhane ke liyein…"

"Nahi sach mein… Mere se jitna ho saka maine kiya…"

Chhoti Maa and the two chudels entered inside to see the Haveli sparkling. The tiled floor looked like mirrors, one could see his/her image in it. All corner of the Haveli were cleant properly, no sign of dirt and cob-webs. All the three chudels gaped at the Haveli like looking at it for the 1st time.

"Itna saaf-sudra… Tumne itna sab kuch kam waqt mein kaise kiya… Hun…???"

"Haan… Bahot acche se kaam kiya hai tumne…"

Geet and the pets who were watching all this from outside the window left a sigh of relief. Romeo had spread himself on the grass inorder to dry himself gave a triumphant smile after looking at the thumps-up sign from the other jaanwar party. Chhoti Maa touched the furniture to check for some traces of dust but couldn't see any. This didn't mean she will let Geet take rest for some time.

"Geet… Saaf-safaai toh acchi hai par raat ke khaane ka kya haal hai…??"

"Haan… Mujhe toh bahot bhukh lagi hai…"

"Main abhi chhole-bature banakar laati hoon…"

"Geet… Kuch bhi laa do par ek baat ka dhyaan rakhna… Joh bhi bana rahi hon woh bahot banana… Samjh gayyi…"

Geet looked at Preeto shockingly and spoke.

"Thik hai… Main abhi laati hoon…"

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Geet was peeling potatoes to make Aloo ke Parathe. Wiping off the precious beads of sweat from her forhead. She looked at the remaining heap of potatoes.

"Babaji… Lagta hai raat ka khana nahi honewala… Chhoti Maa iss baar sacchi mein mujhe ghar se bahar nikal dengi… Unnko kissi cheez ke liyein intezaar karna bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai… Khaas kar ke Preeto ko… "

"Geet… Tum chinta mat karo… Main dekhta hoon khaana kaise nahi banta…"

Pinku spoke determingly and caught hold of the peeler. Pinky on the other side twirled the potato on its sharp end. Within 5mins all the potatoes were peeled. Romeo caught hold of the knife's handle in his jaws and pressed the sharp end on to the potatoes and cut them into pieces. Geet looked at them gratefully.

"Jaante hon… Tum log duniya ke sabse acche dost hon…"

Almost all work was done and the chhole's were steaming. Romeo blew the fire to increase it.

"Khushboo toh acchi aa rahi hai…"

"Geet khaana ban gaya…??? Hum bhook se mar rahein hai…"

"Aayi… Bas ho gaya…"

She answered them back and told Pinku and Pinky to hurry up whilst she clean the plates and saucers.. The squirrel couple stood on the counter to add the masalas and salt. They were carefully dusting it in the vessel. Unfortunately the lid of the container having salt got loosened and all the salt got emptied in the vessel. All let out a gasp and looked each other shockingly. Geet just emptied the dish hurriedly in the saucers nad dashed to the dining area.

"Geet… Ruko… Khaane mein namak…."

She didn't hear what Pinky had to say. Chhoti Maa and looked with their salivating mouths at the food.

"Geet… Khaana toh lajhiz lag raha hai… Par phir bhi humein tum par shaq aa raha hai… Issiliyein pehle hamari billi yeh khaana chakegi…"

The Haveli's cat was fed the food and she just moved away having a bite of the dish. All the three chudels tasted it a bit after the scene and sensed the saltiness in it.

"Yeh kaisa khaana hai Geet…??? Tumhein kya lagta hai hum itna khara khaana khayenge…??"

Geet looked at them scaringly and shockingly.

"Lo… Tum bhi chak kar dekh lo… Apne aap pata chal jaayega… Pura khalo…"

Preeto forwarded her the plate and Geet just stared it helplessly.

"Maine kaha… Khao isse Geet…"

Chhoti Maa ordered her to have the salty dish. The pets felt guilty looking whatever Geet had to go through because of them. Sona peeped through the window and felt pitty on her too.

"Tum daro mat Geet… Main hoon na, main sab thik kar dungi…"

Geet took a spoonful of the dish and brought close to her lips. Sona at that instant closed her eyes and snapped her fingers twice. Geet closed her eyes and took the salty dish in her mouth but it was no longer salty. Chhoti Maa smirked looking at her helpless form.

"Ummm… Itna accha khaana maine banaya… Mujhe toh yaqin hi nahi ho raha hai…"

"Kyaaa…???"

Screamed both Nandini and Preeto. Both took a taste of the same dish from their same plates and where surprised to sense it was tasty, out of this world taste indeed. The Haveli's cat too came back and licked the last of the remains of the food from his plate.

"Hmmm… Bahot accha… Isska matlab humein dusri khaana bananewali nahi rakhni padegi… Aaj se khaana bhi tum banaogi…"

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Late at night Geet lay in her room with her doll kept hugging close to her chest. Romeo sat next to her bed on the floor, Tittu rested on her bedsheet, Pinku and Pinky sat on the sides of her pillow.

"Aaj ka din bahot bura gaya hota agar tum log meri madat nahi karte toh…"

"Issmein kehnewali kya baat hai Geet… Aaj bahot maza aaya tumhari madat karne mein… Tum chaho toh hum roz karenge tumhari madat…"

"Haan… Pinky thik keh rahi hai…"

"Hmm… Pata hai… Ab se main kamzor nahi padungi… Tum log joh ho mere saath… Babaji bhi hai humare saath…"

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Precap : "Ruko Hey… Ruko… Tum… Ruko…"

He caught hold of her shoulders to make her stop. She stopped sensing his touch and pushed his hands away from her. 😲

"Dur raho mujhse… Maine kaha tha… Woh bas ek galti thi… Maine jaan-buchkar aapko dhakka nahi maara tha…" 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
awesome update dear janwar party helping our poor geet
kitna kaam karwati h yeh chudails

nd yeh sona ke pass koi magic power h kya

waiting for maaneet

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