NEW MG FF-DEKHA EK KHWAAB...!!! Part6/Pg24 25DEC - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part1--

I felt like reliving the Cinderalla story u know it was one of my fav sorty in childhood i use to read it again n again when others use to chit chat in lib. hehehe

aoww i hate her step mom n sisters kamini kahi ki kisi kaam ki nahi kambhakhat nikamme


aoww uske dad left her with blood sucking witched thinking they will take care of her but alas here the scene is all different

grrr i want her prince charming to arive soon

aowww kinna mazza aaye na am already swiping Cinderella and Prince Charming with Maan and Geet here

i have turned insane all over again 😆


love the part but hate the end where she will be treated badly by those useless creatures called family

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update please add me in your pm list dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Part 2

Geet reached downstairs where Nandini handed her a heap of clothes which were needed to be ironed. She had just started her work and ironed may be two suits when Preeto yelled to get something for her hungry stomach. Geet managed to make 7 aloo ke parathes for her which she swallowed in 5 mins. Geet was returning back to iron the remaining suits but a loud yelling of her Chhoti Maa made her halt her work. When she reached the drawing room she saw Romeo standing next to a broken vase and Chhoti Maa holding a stick to drive him away.

"Chhoti Maa… Kya hua…?? Aap Romeo kyon bhaga rahi hai…??"

"Iss jungle kutte ko bhagau nahi toh aur kya karoon…?? Dekha mere sone gamle ka kya haal kar diya…"

Chhoti Maa pointed at the broken vase and Romeo looked at Geet with a pouty face.

"Chhoti Maa… Romeo kabhi aisin badmaashi nahi karega… Dekhiyein na hawa kitni beh rahi hai… Shaayad hawa se khidki gamle ko lag gayyi hon aur…"

Chhoti Maa didn't let her speak.

"Geet tum bahane mat don mujhe…. Main janti hoon tumhein aur tumhare iss pagal kutte ko…"

Romeo instantly turned towards her and roared angrily, he would hear all crap for himself but Geet getting blamed for no fault of hers he would never tolerate.

"Dekha kaise badi-badi aankhein dikha raha hai humein… Aaj se… Nahi nahi… Balki abhi se woh yahaan iss Haveli mein nahi rahega…"

"Par Chhoti Maa… Romeo bachhpan se mere saath Haveli main raha hai… Aage se main aapko shikaayat ka mauka nahi dungi… Sacchi mein…"

Geet caught hold of her throat and Romeo stood behind her wagging his tail with a pouty face.

"Dekho Geet jyaada jabaan mat chala apni… Tumhare Papaji ke baad iss Haveli ki maalkin main hoon… Isski zimmedhari mujh par hai… Main chahoon toh tumhein bhi iss Haveli se nikal sakthi hoon…"

Nandini nad Preeto heard their mother yelling at Geet and they was enjoying it. But the thought of Geet being thrown out of the Haveli made them panic.

"Maa agar Geet chali gayyi toh Haveli ki saaf-safai aur kapdon ki dhulaai kaun karega…??"

"Aur Maa mere liyein khana kaun banaayega…?? Kya aap chahti hai ke hum khana banayein..??"

Both Nandini and Preeto faked tears in their eyes and caught hold of Geet's shoulder and tried manaofying and emotionally blackmailing her.

"Dekh Geet tu hamari acchi wali behen hai na… Papaji ne kaha tha na Haveli mein mil-julkar rehna… Romeo ko Haveli ke bahar hi toh rehna hai… Kaunsa woh humse door jaa raha hai… Maa ke gusse ko shant karne ke liyein tum itna nahi karogi…."

"Geet tu hamari baat nahi manegi… Humein chod ke jaayegi kya…???"

Geet self-thought getting sad and looking at the teary faces of sister's.

"Agar innhone mujhe aur Romeo ko Haveli se nikal diya toh hum kahaan jaayenge…?? Mera toh aur koi bhi nahi hai…?? Papaji aap kyon chale gayye…?? Aap jaldi se aa jayien na…"

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Geet had no other option then to put Romeo out of the Haveli. She sat in the courtyard next to a sad Romeo caressing his soft fur.

"Mujhe maaf kar dena Romeo… Main tumhare saath pakka shyaam ko khelne mein waqt nikalungi… Tum akele nahi hon…"

Geet saw Ramlal arriving with the carriage. She moved towards him and inquired about her Papaji's departure.

"Kaka… Kya Papaji ki train chhoot gayyyi…??"

"Haan Beti… Sarkar ko acche se vida kiya maine…"

At the same time Chhoti Maa arrived there all dressed ready to leave for the town.

"Memsaab… Sawaari taiyaar hai…."

"Geet hum sab bazaar jaa rahein… Ghar ko thik se saaf rakhna aur raat ka khaana taiyaar rakhna…"

"Memsaab kahaan jaana hai…??"

"Woh aaj ke samaaroh mein sundartha pratiyogita ka ailaan kiya tha na… Bas Nandini aur Preeto ke naam dakhil karwane hai aur thodi kharidaari bhi…"

Nandini and Preeto too followed their Chhoti Maa wearing heavy accessories on their sequenced suits.

"Pratiyogita toh main hi jeetungi… Sab ki nazarein sirf mujh par hongi…"

Preeto spoke putting her hand on her chubby cheeks.

"Waise bhi jab hum dono jahan maujood hon wahaan toh koi aur tik hi nahi saktha…"

Both boasted about their beauty and sat in the carriage.

"Kya main bhi chaloon aapke saath…??"

"Isski koi zaroorat nahi hai Geet… Tum Haveli ki dekh-baal karo… Aur haan jab main lautoon mujhe Haveli chamakti dikhni chaahiyein… Chalo Ramlal humein der ho rahi hai…"

"Beta… Kamzor mat mehsoos karna.."

Ramlal felt pitty on Geet and patted her hair.

"Geet mera kamra bhi thik kar dena… Aaj main chunn hi nahi paayi kaunsa suit pehnoon aur kaunsa nahi… Issilyien saare suit nikal diyein…"

"Dyaan rahein tumhara woh pagal, kutta Haveli mein bhoolkar bhi pair na rakhein…"

"Aap fikar mat kijiyein… Aap jaisa chahe waisa hoga…"

As soon as the carriage left until no sign of it could be seen Geet shrugged her shoulder and spoke out.

"Papaji ko gayye ek din nahi hua… Kaise hoga yeh sab mujhse…."

Romeo looked at her depressingly. But suddenly she twirled around and Romeo looked at her startled and barked out.

"Bow-wow… Bow-wow.."

"Ohh Romeo… Koi na… Mere paas tum toh hon na…"

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On reaching the town they saw the preparations going on. People were busy decorating the playground where the contest was supposed to be held.

"Maine suna hai iss pratiyogita mein pura raj parivaar hoga…"

"Sacchi Maa….??"

"Haan… Beti… Unnke anusaar pratiyogita mein jitnewala shaayad Kunwar Ji ke liyein yogya vadhu hon…"

"Socho na Nandu agar… Maharaj ko main pasand aayi toh…"

"Aur tum socho agar Kunwar Ji ko main pasand aayi toh… Hayye main mar jawan gud khaa ke…"

"Tum dono ke liyein yeh accha mauka hai apni sundarta se logon ka aur raj parivaar ka dil jitney ka… Yeh mauka gawana mat… Ttum dono jitna sundar aur koi hi hoga iss duniya mein…"

Sona heard whatever the mother-sis's were boasting about. She self thought and decided.

"Geet shaayad Haveli mein akeli hogi… Yehin accha mauka hai usse dekhne aur milne ka…"

On the other hand Geet managed to wash some bed sheets and was spreading it on the rope to dry when Romeo barked at her. She turned to see Romeo holding another wet bedsheet in his mouth but being heavy enough it just slipped from his jaws. Geet lifted it up and spoke.

"Koi na Romeo… Main kar lungi…"

Sona looked at them peeping from behind a near by tree.

"Bechari Geet… Chahkar bhi Romeo bhi usski madat nahi kar saktha… Lagta hai mujhe jiss kaam ke liyein bheja hai woh karna padega…"

Saying that she just closed her eyes and snapped her fingers twice.

"Kaash main usski madat kar pata…"

The same pink butterfly came and started flying around Romeo.

"Hey… Tum kaise bol sakte hon…??"

"Kya…?? Haan main bol saktha hoon… Lekin tum bhi toh bol rahein hon…"

Two squirrels too joined them.

"Sirf tum dono nahi hum dono bhi bol sakthein hai…"

"Bahot adbhoot hai na… Par iss wajah se hum Geet ki kuch madat toh kar paayenge… Chalo…"

All the jaanwar-party ran towards Geet and called out to her.

"Geeettt.. Geeettt… Geettt"

Geet turned instantly hearing unknown people calling her and got the shock of her life.

"Romeo… Tum bol sakte hon…?? Kya main sapna toh nahi dekh rahi hoon..??"

"Nahi… Geet… Hum sab bol sakte hai… Sab Babaji ki meher hai… Tumhari madad ke liyein bheja hai humein…"

Romeo looked at Sona and winked at her. Geet looked astonished at them and smiled accepting the truth, meeting her newly found friends.

"Main Tittu hoon.." Spoke the pink butterfly.

"Main Pinku aur yeh meri patni Pinky…" Spoke the squirrel couple.

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Precap : Jaanwar Party preparing Insaano ka Dinner… 😲 Socho kya hoga…?? 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awesome update
love it
geet is do innocent
geet found new friends
precap is interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
loved it dear

janwar ki party wat a name
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Nice update...
Ab sona geet ki help karegi...
Maan ki entry karado...
N next update jaldi dena
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nice part dear😊
oh god nandani n preeto so selfish
sona pari cum
precap is nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome lovely cute update yar,loved it a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Superb
fabulous dear
loved a lot
continue soon dear
waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
SO THE WITCHES HAVE SHOWN THEIR TRUE COLORS
BUT GEET HAS DIVINE HELP

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