The Palace of secrets Last part MG SS

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Dolly

@kptl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Awww so finally maan won his geet back...:)
that was awesome prt...
nd read that it's da end..:(

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#422

LOVED THE STORY

SO GET GOT CURED FINALLY

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#423

lovely ending yar.

sorry for late cmmnt,i was not feeling well.

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Daayan Bai

@KunwaariDaayan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#424

It was a nice ending but quite short and would have loved it to be longer.I was just glad that Dev wasn't really hurt and so pleased that Maan got his Geet back.True love always prevails!I cnt choose any fav scene as such as I really liked each and every chapter but the chapter that is still etched in my memory still is the 1st chapter as it was introducing us to this story which to me was really different in such a haunting kind of way with high suspense factor and it just wasn't the run of the mill stuff that we get to read in most ff's or ss's.The other thing that really struck me ina good way was the two in one character that you did of Geet and Madhubala...very smart of you giving us double dosage of two tele character's played by DD that alot of us love alot.