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Posted: 12 years ago

The Palace of secrets Part 11

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Thx a lot 4 reading this SS.Since this is the last part plz give a detailed comment.Plz write ur fav charac & fav scene & y u liked it


Everyone was shocked to see Maan stabbing Dev.Dev fell down.He closed his eyes.Naintara cried loudly.
Rano:What is this?
Aloknath:Be calm.
Geet laughed loudly like a mad lady.Suddenly she fainted.Maan was upset.
M:Geet'wake up.
The others came inside.
A:Don't worry'there is nothing wrong with her.She is just exausted. Mohindar'Sahil'.take Geet to her bedroom.Let her sleep peacefully.
Maan tried to help Mohindar and Sahil to lift up Geet.
A:No Maan.Let them go with Geet.You should be here.
Mohindar and Sahil took Geet to her bedroom.
Naintara stared at Maan.
NT:What did you do Maan jeeju?Dev was here to help you.But you made the drama real?You stabbed my Dev?
M:You think I can hurt Dev who helped me to save our lives?Look at his abdomen.Is blood coming?
Naintara looked at his abdomen properly.There was no blood.Naintara was confused as well as Ganga and Rano.
Dev opened his eyes and got up.
Everyone was surprised.
D:I am alright Naintara.
NT:Dev'but'
A: I knew that Geet would try to kill Dev.I gave a hint to damadji.
M: So I bought an artificial knife.I stabbed him with the artificial knife.If I had'nt stabbed Dev,Geet would have stabbed him with the real knife.
D:Maan had told me to get prepared to die in this drama.
NT:I am sorry jeeju'
M:It's ok'.Thanks a lot Dev and Naintara.I am really grateful to you both.I don't know how to thank you both.
NT:Geet's life is safe now.That's more than enough for us.

Morning'.
Geet woke up.She was shocked to see her dance costume and ornaments.All other family members came there.
Geet was in shock:What is this?I can't understand anything.I can't recall anything.
Aloknath:I will tell you Geet.
M:But dadu'
A:It's ok Maan.Now there is no harm in telling her the truth.
He told her everything.
Geet was shocked.Her tears drops rolled down her cheeks.
A:Don't be upset Geet.Madhubala has left you completely.Though you are her reincarnation,you will not be haunted by your previous life anymore.
G:Sure?
A:Sure.
Maan stood near her.
G:Maan'.sorry if I have hurt you as Madhubala.
M:No Geet.
She saw Dev and Naintara.She went near them.
G:Thanks a lot for saving my life.
D:Hey Geet'you were our cupid.That time you helped us.We helped you back.Not a big deal.
NT:Yes Geet.
Geet smiled.
Maan and Geet packed their bags to go back.Everyone became upset.
Rano:Why are you both going back so soon?
Mohindar:You both were supposed to stay here for one month.
Sahil:One month is not over.
Ganga:Why do you guys want to leave so early?Enjoy the vacation with us.
Geet:Since we came here only problems started coming.So it's better to leave.Otherwise again this palace will lose peace of mind.
Aloknath:This palace will lose it's happiness only if you both leave.Because our happiness is you Geet.
Geet became emotional.
A:What you did is right.If you had not found Maan for yourself,if you had not been adamant about marrying Maan,if you both had not come here, if you both had not unlocked that room,if you had not read that book secretly a lot of riddles would have been solved.Only because you both stayed here my dearest brother Rameshwar's innocence was proved.Otherwise that room would have continued to smell Madhubala's hatred for him and her revengeful thoughts .Now that room is not mysterious anymore.It is like any other room.Anyone can use it as it reminds of Rameshwar's and Madhubala's love.Now this Palace is also pure.I was always worried about the past.But since all the misunderstandings are cleared in Madhubala's mind I got peace of mind after many years.This would not have been possible if you both have not come here.So you both please continue to stay here till the vacation gets over.
NT:Please jeeju'please Geet'.if you both are here I will get a company.
Maan:Don't worry Naintara.We will go back only after we get you married to Dev.
Everyone was surprised.
NT:Really?
Geet looked at Maan unbelievingly:Maan!
He smiled at her nodding his head:Yes Geet.
G:You are so sweet Maan.
She became emotional.
M:I know that you heart longs to stay here.You decided to go back only for your family's happiness.But Geet...their happiness is you.So you need to be here now.And how can I snatch their happiness from them?They helped me a lot.Right?

G:Thank you Maan.
She rested her head on his shoulder.He smiled.
Everyone became happy.

The end

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
update geet unconscious dev ok alok telling everything



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Posted: 12 years ago
its superb!!!
maan won his geet back!!!!
beautiful ending!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
at last everything is on their place
nice end
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is good
geet is out of her past life finally
and by seeing her normal all her family members are happy
mann and geet wanted to go back but her family wants them to stay there so mann who cant see geet unhappy declares that after naintara's wedding they will go back
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great ending buddy.I know it was an SS,but i wud've loved to read few more parts.

Anyways the story was fabulous to read.Thanx for d story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautful ending...maan won n got his geet back...
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Superb ending. 👏 👏 👏 Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Perfect ending for a perfect story
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely part
Geet is ok now
Finally the curse is gone n all happy
Pls do give an epilogue

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