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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.



I have slightly different opinion (like usual😆)
I might have felt his ego spoke had I overlooked this sentence.

The sight of her now stirred him until his heart shook with a strange mix of fear, temptation and that old' formality that still lay cloaked invisibly over their lives.

This said that he was somehow seeing the old Geet, Geet Handa who was lost to time. When we see your life partner as an outsider, whom you have known few years ago when you don't know them properly, you will feel awkward. And his words those first words he spoke felt to me that he was being honest so that he would not hurt her again, by rising her hopes and crushing them brutally like he did on their wedding anniversary, although unknowingly. For me his reaction made him like him a bit more. It was endearing. Yes, I am a certified loony😆

hmm...
I think,I was right in putting lots of "May be-s" while talking about Maan's words..I was pretty wrong in deducing his words..
Thanks bratty for showing me this side..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rofl. You speak as if I am Maan's monologue. I am assuming but am in my usual bossy self, rubbing my assumptions on others' head😆

My dearest Smiley, this🤗 is for you for tolerating my bullying😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Rofl. You speak as if I am Maan's monologue. I am assuming but am in my usual bossy self, rubbing my assumptions on others' head😆

My dearest Smiley, this🤗 is for you for tolerating my bullying😆

This is your way of bullying others..???😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

Ah uh sort of 🤔😆

You are a shame on word "bully"...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just realized I suck at even bullying!! Kyu babaji kyu, why can't I be good at at least one thing?😒🥺
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

I just realized I suck at even bullying!! Kyu babaji kyu, why can't I be good at at least one thing?😒🥺

You are good at many things,bratty except bullying...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Zarin:
So he didn't come for her?????...I guess it would be too cliched if he did. The optimist in me still says he said" I didn't come here for you...", but maybe he came for "himself" (widens eyes and moves brows expectantly!!! ). Ahhh...What the heck...the realist in me says it was just a coincidence. But hey in that case the universe is framing them to be together. I guess I am an eternal optimist😆. Will wait for the update to see what happens next.
I loved the carefree soul that is Geet coming out, I guess that is who Maan fell for as well. As always Zarin you describe the entire scene with such vividness and delicacy that I see it all unfolding in front of me...thanx for the update!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you for the comments on the chapter. I'm seeing split views on Maan and the situation, which is surprisingly exciting for me.

It's officially my birthday as of an hour ago - I just needed an excuse to throw that in there 😉. Haha, no there is a reason for me saying that and that is to share a bit of background info on the story. It was nine/ten months ago that I first conceptualised Gehraiyan and I had it in mind to have it wrapped up or at least a large part of it written by my birthday. That has clearly not happened and I've done some reflecting/soul-searching/yadda yadda yadda and come to one conclusion: busy or not, I need to make time for this story.

I request you all to nag, moan and harp at me to update until I do. The chapters may be shorter (if that's even possible ;) ) but will be more frequent. I hope you'll all continue to support me :) Thanks.

Zarin
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Posted: 12 years ago
Happy birthday Zarin


🥳

Wish you every happiness always!
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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