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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm not going to quote any lines from the chapter this time as I so often do with your updates because for me, in this one chapter, there're a lot of things that I don't feel I can comment on.

In relationships, in a marriage, the time often comes when priority given to things over the partner. We feel that we're being taken for granted, we feel that forgot all promises, they have drifted away, or they don't care for us or love us anymore. But if we look at it all in retrospect, this isn't the case very often. It's not that work is being given priority over the partner's wishes - or perhaps it is - but for whom? It's for the partner, for the family, for the mutual dreams that one often ends up neglecting the very things they're working for...

What happened with Maan and Geet in the past, I feel compassion for Geet but I feel sympathy for Maan too. I feel neither of them was wrong, it wasn't either of their fault. Some things are just destined to happen and so they suffered. He hadn't known that she's been planning and preparing door their anniversary for the past month. Has known, I'm sure he would've given priority to her, he would've settled his meetings and work accordingly. It was only when their respective egos became too big, did they stand at fault, it was only when they stopped making efforts to bridge the gap, did they become wrong for me.

Up until now, I hadn't felt anything for Heer. Neither did I like her, nor dislike her. As a friend, I think she is great, who came for help and nursed her friend. But I think she shouldn't have taken Geet away that night. I feel she should have let the two solve their problems and not become the bridge between them. Well.. A bridge that didn't join paths.

But after every night comes a day. After every failure, an ant tries again. And after every storm, comes a colourful rainbow. To know that Maan made the effort of looking for her and coming after her, to know that he's still trying and he still cares, I'm sure they'll soon be on their path to mending their broken relationship.

Very well-written Zarin! Waiting to know how they're going to manage together, when they're forced to communicate. 😊
Edited by mayyo13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
is that really maan!!!!
like is not working...
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Posted: 12 years ago

So the I's have come in the way of "Us"

There are times in a marraige when it happens but as it kept happening to them more and more, it was perhaps for the best... this separation...
Like words from that beautiful song...
Woh afsana jisse anjaam tak
lana na ho mumkin
usse ek khoobsoorat mod de kar
chodna accha
Chalo ek baar phir se
ajnabi ban jaaye hum dono...
While it may be the right thing to do, it does not mean that it will be painless.. The hurt of not succeeding at something always rankles and pains. In a world of couples and love in movies, music, tv, news everywhere, the constant stab in the heart of having been wrenched from it also tears up a person.
As much as i loved Heer through out I did not like her here. Specifically the part where she took her away I did not like that... I know she did the right thing as a friend but that was stepping into a relationship and there is a boundary she crossed there. I guess my boundaries are firmer..
Lovely chapter Zarin. She made it back and now it seems so has he... Waiting to see what avenues they explore in understanding each other's gehraiyan.
Thanks for updating...
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wo what shud I say???

My heart jst kept on whimpering with the preparations of Geet for d anniversary coz i knew her heart was to be broken and broken badly.

I jst happened to remember these lines-
"Kabhi kabhi dil nahi jaage,

Pichhe pichhe sapno ke bhaage,

Kabhi kabhi dil nahi jaage,

Pichhe pichhe sapno ke bhaage

Ek din sapno ka rahi...

Chala jaaye sapno se aage kahaan..."

We work so hard to secure our dreams and our future and d end we find ourselves alone without anybody to share d success.And in the process we hurt the imp. persons of our life,ultimately losing them and then we are not even left with the option to regret.


I dont know how Geet wud react to see Maan there but wat happenned with her was defo hurting.


Really Really great part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated chapar chapar right after the update. Smug smile about the first position of course😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just a few things from the last chapter...

The title 'Famous Last Words' was chosen because of the line "Nobody would ever know" because they are pretty much the last words anyone has to say before things go completely crazy. Sort of like saying the words 'what could possibly go wrong?' or as Sheesh said, 'I will be back' 😆. Also, the line just happened to be the last words of the chapter itself!

A lot of speculation and reservations about Gopal Kaka. I wanted to share a little something about him. He is named after Gopal Bhar, a character in Bengali tales known for his wit and wisdom. Usually, his stories are told to kids to make them laugh. I find the punch lines pretty hilarious, which some people use to call my sense of humour into question 😆 This is the story mentioned in Wikipedia:

In one story Gopal Bhar visits a sweet shop, being manned by the Halwai's son and starts eating the sweets. The child protests and asks his name, to which Gopal replies, "Your father knows me; my name is Machi (Housefly)." The Halwai inquires who it is from inside the house, to which his son replies it is housefly eating the sweets. The Halwai replies that houseflies eats sweets daily so he should not worry. Gopal eats all the sweets and then leaves.


And now you know almost as much about Gopal Kaka as I do ;)

- Zarin
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Maggie.

I see someone online😆



Hope you're not expecting another one! 😆 Wondering whether to pick apart your reply or leave it for the masses.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I want what you feel about my views of course. For many reasons.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Many reasons? Intrigue... 😆 Then today's the day you're spoilt rotten. I'm trying to add a link to Heer's picture as we speak.

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