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Rukh

@RukhluvMaan

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

OMG ... That was so funny z. And oohhh hahahah maans dialogue were hilarious .. That too from our fvrt engagement scene ... Awesome one..

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
Hoops..this was so funny ! Specially Adi playing Lydo and Maan's romanticism with satellites !
From "Obsession" one would never know you had such a funny bone. This is one of the best comedy stories I have ever read on IF !😃

I love to write comedy most..even my first work on IF was a comic piece on punarvivah forum...😊Thank you so much for the appreciation...😊

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RaDMG25

@RaDMG25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

girl loving your writing absolutely loved the OS hilarious man!

sooo different and light from your other stories i will very amused with this especially maan enacting 'shaan' 😆

i want more please 😛

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

That ws so Amazing Os
Loved very much
thankx for pm

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

oh my god... please save from the stomach pain 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣

adi playing ludo ...
maan what a romantic dialogue
by the way his Gk is very good
thaniks dear for a wonderful romantic update
i just loved it

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

thank god i read this alone...other wise i have no idea what my family will be thinking probably doubting my sanity... i was just laughing through out... the story from the beginning to end was just like a laughter roller coaster for me!

if to mention any special scene would be so difficult here... whether it was about the research for heroes or adis ludo and his wonderful dialogues or maans wonderful knowledge for moon and its usage especially the saturn waala or his sneezing capacity ...everything was so hilarious that even its thought is enough to make me laugh

after reading ur colors and obsession this os from u is a surprise for me... this shows how versatile and wonderful writer u r... just keep going dear ...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

omg lmao.. i sooo wanna see auditions like this.. loll

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fantesy

@fantesy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

🤣 it was sooo hilarious m realy laughing lik maniac...eye locks,clumsy heroines,dupatta n specially maan n adi 's audition evrythn was awsuuum and in d end geet's entry wid bang...loved it...