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Nitya

@ChanandlerBong

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

😆Actually it tooo hillaripous 🤣

I fell off from my chair that my mom thought that i have lost my last few nuts 😆

Just loved Adi's sport - LUDO 🤣

And maan's Romantic dialogue was 🤣

Lovely OS

ur works are awesome man

I just love ur style of writing

Waiting for the next one

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: palindrome

hello..yes i am home...😊

So, finally u write maaneet "romance"...haan, thoda funny tha...thoda weird tha...unromanticaly romantic tha...🤣...kabab me that haddi "pari" thi...but jururi thi, warna usko payback kaise milta...🤣...haina!
Good job! 🤣

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

oh god i was literally clutching my stomach reading this! amazingly hilarious!!! great going :D

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

I JUST DIED LAUGHING WHILE READING

MAAN WAS HILARIOUS

BUT IT WAS TOO GOOD

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

are ya kidding me
first ludo with adi🤣
then maan talking about moon in the most unromantic lines
then him being allergic to her shampoo
but the best bit was when geet strode to pari and said maan is her bf and to prove it she kissed him infront of all those ppl
they finally nailed it right
cheers for pm

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: palindrome

SUPERLIKE😊

thanks...for 'superlike'.
Ab comment ka 'reply' bhi dedo...jaise hum 'like' k sath coment dete hai...🤣

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Dei_Gratia

@Dei_Gratia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

awesome os
Really loved it yr...
Adi n ludo cnt stop laughin n maan k romantic dialouge hehe
Gr8

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Shonameet
So, finally u write maaneet "romance"...haan, thoda funny tha...thoda weird tha...unromanticaly romantic tha...🤣...kabab me that haddi "pari" thi...but jururi thi, warna usko payback kaise milta...🤣...haina!
Good job! 🤣

I think,what happened with pari in this os was my payback for all the romantic moments i had written for maan-pari in obsession...😆😉

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

this is most hilarious os i ever read. god ! cannot just stop laughing ! adi playing ludo with the bg was damn cute ! throwing dice and shouting ? god ! where did you get that idea ? and maan ! oh man ! his dialogues were out of the world sorry on the moon . pari couldnot control herself even when he is sneezing ! desperate to get him role ! awesome writing. some more please...

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: palindrome

I think,what happened with pari in this os was my payback for all the romantic moments i had written for maan-pari in obsession...😆😉

"same pinch"...🤣
i wanted to say the same...but fir socha, agar tumhe bura lag gaya toh...u like that pari so much na!

But seriously, pari k liye ek dum perfect payback...🤣

maan didnt even feel anything for her...ulta uske muh pe sneez kar diya...🤣

Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago