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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing :):)
Superb update :)
Loved it a lotzzz😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
lovely
congrats for new thread
continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Congrats on the new thread..
awesome update..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
loved it... Both waiting for other to confess
awesome... Please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread

Nice update 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Waiting 4 d draMA.I luV d drama part in chocolate.dying 2 no how u r going 2 prsent it in a bollywood style.Maan admitted that he told that he loves Geet.Whats d new twist?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnk U all for your patience and love...😊

Happy diwali folks...



PART 25

Geet : Ye to acha hua that i already turned down that proposal. Nhe to...wat would have happened? But one thing i dont understand...why did you do all these? Boliye na Maan? Why did you do that?

Maan : Yes!! I told him that i love you!! I told him coz...(Geet waited with anticipation...) i didn't hav ny other option. Hw can i say that his son is nt worth enough for u..oh sorry correction..this tom girl dnt deserve your son!!

Geet : really, mere life ke decisions lete time atleast i should know about it. Why would you decide..

Maan : so? U broke ut engagement..its clear u dnt like the guy..

Geet : did i tell you? Nhe na..kya pata mera mind change ho jaye kal..

The color of his face went off as she finished. He shot an angry glare at her. Geet was just frustrated with this guy. He just ruined all her efforts. She just stomped away. Maan smirked as she left. Meanwhile Yash was hearing all their conversation from a corner.

Yash : arey yaar Maan...she wanted you to confess..

Maan : oh! Really..i didn't know. (he rolled his eyes) She is MY girl and i know wat she wants from her eyes.

Yash : then y r u doin this to her?

Maan : now that you wont understand..its between me and her.

And they were back to their rehearsals. Geet was goin through the script when Maan suddenly marched into the hall.

Maan : Yash! Lets start the rehearsals.

Geet : start? Lekin abhi mene dialogues to yaad kiye hi nhe..

Maan snatched the script from her.

Maan : uski koi zarurat nhe he Ms. Handa.

Yash : wat do u mean? Paro ke bina kaise rehearsals honge?

Maan : kaun kambakt kehta he ki paro nhe hogi?

He extended his hand to Mira standing right next to Geet while his eyes boring into hers... The intensity of his luk made her inner soul shiver..Yet she glared at him understanding wat he was upto..

Meanwhile Yash was in deep worry...his one and only lady love at the hands of a hottie..

Mira and Maan moved to the stage. Geet sat on a chair next to Pinky staring at him with attitude. Maan bored his eyes on Geet and held Mira by waist. ( Yash seriuosly worried)

Maan : Paro.. tumse dur rehkar bhi har pal har lamha...me tumhare barey sochta ho...har bheed me tumhara chehra dikta he...mere tanha dil tumhare chahat me tadap rha tha...

Mira : mene ek pal bhi tumhari kami mehsus nahi ki Dev..tum to meri har saans me base ho...

Geet : dekha Pinky...ye to pakka Kapur sahab ki beti he...dekh kaise romance kar rhe he..

Pinky : Geet lagta he koi jal rha he..

Geet : jal rha he? me kyu jalu, huh?

Pinky : to mene kab kaha ki tum jal rhe ho? Hume to pehle se pata tha Geet ki ye jagda finally aise hi twist lega...

Geet : bas Pinky, kuch bhi bole ja rhe he. Remember, I'm Geet Handa...

Meanwhile Maan saw that Geet was pretending to be unaffected. He delibrately brought Mira closer to him and continued the rehearsals. Geet was fuming with anger. She took her mobile and started filming their rehearsals. She was clicking random pics.

Pinky : wat r u doin Geet??

Geet : kyu na Kapur sahab ko ye bhej de, huh???

Pinky was shocked. Geet laughed in her musical tone. At last Maaneet had to cease fire as Juliet mam and other faculty visited the rehearsal spot.

Juliet: hello students, hws ur practice goin?

Mira : fine mam.

Nandita: and Geet hw r u doin? hv u gone through ur dialogues??

Geet : I dnt think thats needed mam. Mira is replacing me.

Mira : hold on..nothing like that mam. Maan and Geet r fighting again. I m just a substitute.

Juliet : Maan, Geet...u both sort out watevr problems with each other and complete this. Our college is the main venue for the fest. So this hall wont be availiable. We have to do some rennovation.

Maan : Dnt worry mam. I have arranged my farmhouse for the rehearsals. We will keep all our props there.

Juliet : thats great. well u guys carry on..

Maan and Yash were returning back to home after setting everything in the farmhouse. Maan's jeep was blocked by a group of cars. Mr. Kapur stepped out of one of the cars.

Maan : congrts Yash tumhare future sasurji..

Yash : is waqt?

Maan : shayad apni beti ka haath dene.

Yash : Maan saal me ek baar joke marta he wo bhi kaise time me.

Kapur : I had warned you Maan lekin tum baaz nhe aye...

Maan : Wat r u talkin about??? me samjha nhe.

Kapur: this...(he threw a numbr of pics of Maan and Mira clickd during rehearsals..)

Both Yash and Maan were shockd..

Yash : sir i can xplain..ye actually..

Kapur : tum hote kaun ho xplain karnewale. ab mere admi xplain karenge..

Around 6 goons came charging towards Maan and Yash. Maan removed his radon and kept it on the jeep.

Yash : careful Maan..dnt make their case critical buddy.

Maan smirked. He defended every guy who tried to attack them. Yash also knocked a few men. They were almost done when a guy hit on Maan's forehead. He was bleeding yet he managed to knock that guy.

Yash : u need a doc man!

Maan : cmon i'm fine.

Yash : Maaa...n...open ur eyes...

PRECAP : 🥺 😈


Okk I know after reading this you would kick me out of this forum...an upate after a month or two..and then the precap...but sorry😳. Just wanted some dhamaka on diwali...

Vl update the nxt part soon...

NEXT : PART 26 : page 14


Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
yeh maan bi na my poor cute geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...
geet didnt want this much 2 happen...

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