THE X EFFECT : thread 2 FINAL PART : page33

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Thank U all for your love and support....😊


X factor,isn't this word a star anywhere in the 21st century? If we find something boring we bluntly say that "it doesn't have the X factor"

why do we say so?
Well,i will xplain my pov,
human species comprise of the XXs and XYs. The thing that binds both of them is X!!
😆😆
Enough of my pj 🤔.Coming to the main point here starts second thread of my ff: THE X EFFECT based on malayalam movie Chocolate,another one in the category of battle of sexes after THE CUPID WAR!!
The story is all about wat happens when a young handsome guy joins a WOMEN'S COLLEGE😳😳
THE X EFFECT

Poster courtesyharshdb(my dear Deepa 😊)

Thread 1

Part 24 : page 1

PART 25 : page 8

PART 26 : page 14

Part 27 : page 19

Part 28 : page 28

FINAL PART : page 33






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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you all for your constant support and patience...😳

My di is engaged and getting married soon. So I m pretty busy. Still tryin hard to cope up.

Will try to make faster updates.

PART 24

The next few days went quite well for Maan and Geet. They never acknowledged their love for each other but they just cant stay away from each other at any cost. Even during their busy schedules of semester xams they found time for each other.

And then came the vacations. They had planned for a trip and camping but Maan had some important projects lined up. He had to leave Delhi. Thanks to gtalk n wassup. Or else hw would they take each others 'khabar'!!

Days passed and the college reopened for the next sem. Geet was so excited all again to meet him. She had particularly selected a pure white salwar suit just for him. She got ready and checked herself in the mirror.

Geet : hmm..not bad..huh?? Itney me to wo dushtdanav lattu ho jayega.

Just then her phone rang... Geet shook her head and received the call.

Maan : Gud mrng chutki..

Geet : gud mrng DD..

Maan : wat r u doin?

Geet : taiayar ho rhe hu.

Maan : wen did u started doin that??

Geet : wat? Cant i get ready??

Maan : to usme itni badi baat kya he? Tumhe to koi phati purani jeans aur t-shirt hi to pehna he.

Geet : why? Cant i wear something else??

Maan : O cmon Geet u dnt have that much girly instincts..

Geet : really? And wat if i say i m now wearing a white suit..

Maan gulped. He could almost imagine her curvaceous body in a white suit..

Geet : hello..

Maan : umm...that would be the joke of the year..

Geet : fine!! Why am i even askin U??

She hung up.

She checked herself in the mirror again. Dusht danav...joke of the year!! huh..

She threw away her ear rings and changed her clothes. Still she lukd ravishing in an olive green shirt and denim jeans.

Maan was talkin to some of his classmates when a cool breeze brought her elegant fragrance. He lukd around and saw her after so many days. All he wanted was to take her in his arms. His legs moved as if they had a mind of their own. He reached near her and was about to hug her when she stopped him. He was taken back and lukd at her puzzled.

Geet : aise kya dekh rhe ho? Joke of the year??

He shut his eyes. How silly, she took it so seriously.

Maan : wats wrong with you Geet?

Geet : with me? I dnt knw wats wrong with U?

Pinky and Mira saw them fighting from a distance and lukd at each other.

Mira went up to them, " Maan, Juliet mam wants to meet u asap."

Maan : hmm.. I gotta go..

Mira : tum bhi chalo Geet. She wants to meet the whole student council.

He went to the principal's room. Geet followed Mira and Pinky. But Maaneet didn't forget to pass angry glares at each other.

Juliet : Gud mrng students. As you all know we have our inter-collegiate fest lined up. We always win some prizes but we never got the championship trophy. Thats why i have called you all. We feel that if we increase our participation in some more competitions we will definitely win this.

Mira : but mam dancing, singing and elocation. We already participate in all these.

Juliet : I know, thats why we have decided to participate in drama competition also. And Maan i am giving this responsibility to you. All our hopes r on you. Lets show the world that a single boy is enough for MIT to march to victory.

Maan : my pleasure mam. We will definitely get the championship. Leave it to me.

The professors had some more discussions regarding the event with the student council. It was evident that Geet and Maan were knowingly contradicting each others opinion. However others preferred to ignore as their fight was a routine.

Later they all left the room.

Pinky : arey Geet next meeting kab hogi??

Geet : kyu tujhe us dusht danav ke baashan itney bhaa gaye?

Pinky : arey nhe yaar, wo muffins kitney yummy the...

Mira : uffo Pinky..forget muffins and ye socho ki drama ke liye hume kya karna chahiye.

It was Maan who replied to this from the opposite direction,"Drama ke liye aur kya chahiye.. We have our drama queen(lukin at Geet) here.

Geet turned her head away. She was so frustrated with this guy. Here she was trying hard to make him propose but every time they end up in a war.

Maan : well, dont worry. Meet me after classes today. I have arranged every thing.

Mira : in such a short span of time?

Maan : this is Maan Singh Khurana madam..

Geet : i am gettin late for the class.

And she stomped away.

Mira : Maan, why do u always tease her?

Maan : wat to do, tumhari friend he hi nakchadi

Mira : Maan..

Maan : hey make sure she is there in the meeting at evening. After all she is the drama queen...i mean heroine..aur ha thoda mood theek kara do yaar...otherwise i would be in hell

Mira smiled as Maan made a baby face.

In the evening, Mira and Pinky entered the auditorium.

Mira almost shouted, " ye! Yeha??"

Maan : ummhmm dont worry. He is the director of our drama.

Mira : ye dramebaaz?

Yash : for ur kind information, i have a diploma in theatre.

Mira rolled her eyes.

Maan : dnt worry. He wont utter a word about his fashion shows during rehearsals. Thats a deal.

Mira : gud for him!

Maan : by the way where is Geet?

Mira : she said she will be here in a few minutes.

Yash : Lets discuss the plot then. I have the script ready. We will start the rehearsal today itself.

Mira : isn't that too fast??

Yash: yes, but thats how it should be. And wats there to discuss when the great Yash is here to direct you..i mean the drama...the epic love story "Devdas"

Pinky : Devdas?? Ewww... How typical?

Mira : yeah! Geet wanted us to do Caesar and Cleopatra.

Maan : I am the chairperson and its MY decision that we will do Devdas.

Yash : kyu na rehearsal start kare? Geet ke aney tak i will xplain the scene.The situation is, when Devdas returns to haweli he meets Paro. And they tell each other how much they missed their togetherness. It should be passionate expressing their longing...

Pinky: arey lo.. Geet bhi aa gayi.

Yash : to rehearsals start kare

Geet : wat? Aur waise bhi ye dukhiyari story ke alawa aur kuch nhe mila?

Yash : no. Tragedy is the only emotion that can deeply affect the audience. U know wat, i have won 5 awards for this drama.

Geet : oscar to nhe tha na (Mira and Geet hi-fived) in other words this is the only drama that you know.

Maan : agar tum logo ko itna hi pata he to pehle kyu nhe leke aye prizes? I had checked MIT always got 1st in drama...but in descending order.

Geet : oh plzzz... If we got this much funds and support, we would have definitely won. Ye to ab..

Mira : ummm...guys can we start now.

Yash : yeah, Mira is rite. we should start now.

Geet : yeah but before that i need to talk to Maan..in private

Yash : ofcourse!!...ofcourse..

Yash's super-excited state came to a halt as Maan glared at him. Maaneet went outside to talk.

For about 2 mins there was absolute silence between them. A weird excitement filled their soul as each of them was expecting the other to propose.

Geet : umm...Maan i had been thinking for a while...you know...i wanted to..ask you something...

Maan : Cmon..Chutki...u dont have to be so formal with me.

Geet : hmm..let me come to the point. Wat were you thinking you were doin at Aman's house. U met his father!!! I mean wat was goin through your mind?? U told him that i wont marry Aman?

Maan : ha to? Ab kya?

Geet : ab kya? Ye to acha hua that i already turned down that proposal. Nhe to...wat would have happened? But one thing i dont understand...why did you do all these? Boliye na Maan? Why did you do that?

Maan : Yes!! I told him that i love U!!!!

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PRECAP : twist!!! 😲

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb!!
loved der nok-jhok!!
n ultimately geet did manage to make maan express his feelings!!
bt twist??
wil b waiting for it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread

Nice update
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For the new Thread
Waiting for frequent


wohooo... im the third person in line...

welcome back...thanks a lot for this long awaited update...hoping for frequent updates from you from now on...

loved der nok-jhok!!
n ultimately geet did manage to make maan express his feelings!!
bt twist??
wil b waiting for it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats! For the new thread!
Luvd maans teasing nd geet ka gussa. Geet drama queen...nd her dushat danav.
Maan very casually said- i luv u!
Wat is the twist now?

Cont.soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice prt...
love their tom & jerry fight...
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congrats on the new thread
loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ye lo devdas to propose kar liya abb paro ki bari hain...
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congo for d new thread...
loved d upd.

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