DEMON'S DESIRE-SS-UPDATED PT 03 PG 10 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Sounds Interesting !! 😃 !!

Nice Update !! 😊 !!

Cont Soon !! 😃 !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
interesting n thrilling concept n starting...

why geet is always target fr nt...n dev is also related to geet...dekhte hai age kya hota hai...
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loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely ss n also fr d pm...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
interesting concept n part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
starting mein thoda confused thi but its really different & unique.Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15



before commenting about the story or update...I want to say one thing...style of writing is very confusing...where one dialogue ends and where other person dialogue starts...I don't understand...and this sms language please I don't understand...

this SS is interesting...concept it is not clear really...

please don't feel bad...make the story some clear so that readers can understand...this is my request...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Cngo on new ss
nice cncept!
Ye kutti kameeni nt wants geetu wat she wants to do with that poor girl and ye dev kya lagtha hai geet ko
cnt sn
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
congo on nw stry
Nyc pro n prt1
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
It seems interestng

but

really confused reading it.

Dont knw why bt i didnt get half of d things which happnd fr d 1st time wid me.
One request can u plz avoid using too many shortcuts.

Will read it again n mayb then will b able to grab wat u want state
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
congrats on the new ss
interesting update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
congrats...

prologue
nice...

part 1
so Naintara is targeting Geet...
Geet and Dev?
cont soon dear...

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