DEMON'S DESIRE-SS-UPDATED PT 03 PG 10

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Gurmeet Choudhary in Jhalak Dikhhla Jaa 3



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"U cant hv my soul," said Geet
"Dat u can kep.Soul xtraction is 2 different,"said Maan.Geet gasped.Amusement crossed his features.
"Breathe Geet."
"How do u know my name????"
"Its on d box along with d address.At least,I assume deyre urs.Any other stipulations????"Maan asked."Aside fr ur sould???"
"Do u hv sum sort of contract fr consulting services???"Geet said."I'll r
emember."The resolution in his tone made her uneasy.She searched his gaze."U r nt joking,r u????"
"No."
"U really can fix this???"Geet asked,waving her hand at d box.
"S."
"Wat do u charge for such a thing?????"Geet asked and braced herself for sum she couldnt pay.
"Y dont i tel u when d tym comes????"Maan offered in a tone too casual for her comfort."Dat way if i fail,it doesnt matter."
Geet responded,"I wd feel more comfortable knowing up front."
"U." said Maan.
Geet' hands jerked fm their place in her lap,knocking her tea cup on its side...




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Is this like fantasy / black magic like ???
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Gurmeet Choudhary in Jhalak Dikhhla Jaa 3




PART 01


Naintara flew thru d restored victorian a crumpld shopping bag clutched to hr chest.She hurried thru d kitchen & to d door of d basement.She opend it hr elatd thots sliding into unease at d unnatural glow emanatng fm 1 wal of d basement.she descended a few steps & pausd.D scent of sulfur made hr nose wrinkle & heat rendered d basement hot compard to d rest of d drafty old hou
se.1 of hr ghostly slaves movd fm its place in d poorly lit basement & she jumpd in surprise,"Nt now!" she barkd at d shadow demon.Naintara set d bag on d wooden desk & clapped hr hands in del8 at d s8 of d decomposd finger.a man's voice askd,"U hv been out al day,must hv been imp to leave my bed so early." she dint answer him while he saw d contnts of d bag & said,"Am being replacd by a dead man,where's d rest of him?"Naintara said,"Am trying to figure dat out.He's my soulmate,am meant to find him.""And i'm...?""Just a warm body.""U obsessed bitch,u know hell wil demand ur soul fr helping u." "I hv promisd it a soul.Doesnt hv to b mine.Leave me alone Vicky.Naintara said,"Soon my love u wil b back with me forever,just 1 more thing & i'll recall u fm d dead,slave!"D slave came nd Naintara instructed him showng a pic to find d person.Dat girl ws none other than Geet Shergil.D ghost vanishd into thin air while Naintara said to hrslf,"My sweet Dev.I hv waitd 2 yrs fr dis,am almost ready fr u bitch.u wont run fm me dis tym,Geet & Dev wil stay with me forever." DO COMMENT GUYS
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Priya2000.

Is this like fantasy / black magic like ???




Black magic type dear...😊
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Interesting . So NT's target is Geet ...
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wow new ss
its loveny amazing n interesting lvd it
prologue👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
lv the pic



first part



nt gosh ye gadhi na hmesha meri geet ke pechey😡
bt wt is the realation between geet n dev
hope they n bro n sis.. nothing more..😆😆😆
waiting 4 next part eagerlyyy



😡

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Originally posted by: tiakashyap


wow new ss
its loveny amazing n interesting lvd it
prologue👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
lv the pic



first part



nt gosh ye gadhi na hmesha meri geet ke pechey😡
bt wt is the realation between geet n dev
hope they n bro n sis.. nothing more..😆😆😆
waiting 4 next part eagerlyyy



😡




Tia...geet and dev bro and sis...😆...tum bhi na..and lovely long comment...aur yeh kya end pe angry expression kis liye?????😊 and lovely u for long comment🤗
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Wow lovely start kutty..very interesting kutty.were u get such ideas.
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interesting start
update soon

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