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Diva7

@Diva7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

is she dead?????😲

aftr reading dat poem i feel lyk pari herself is entropy... is she????????

it was a dhamakedar update bt i dnt wnt u to kill anyone whether its pari😔...i dnt know y bt feel lyk she doesn't luv maan d way he does...coz d step of marrying him was also taken by her in trance of poem she was into d poem at dat time who wants a die hard luver n maan did exactly d same by cutting his wrist n proved dat he was d luver she was finding so d "girl who lives in d poem" finds her madness or so called luv in maan bt wat abt d real pari????... i dnt think so... so its maan's right to know d real fact...idk if m making sense here😆

fantastic update n thnx fr pm dear

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#292

what was that? i really didnt expected this particularly at this point ... u gave me a real shock dear...

though just a line by maan ,"Do not read any poem,please" but it was so painful... his fear his helplessness everything can be understood from that...

again after reading that poem i really think it would be pari only who wrote that poem... par tumhara koi bharosa nahi hai... even in this short journey of ur ff u have given me so much shocks and surprised me that i dont trust my view😆😉

though the line for maaneet is clear now but still am sad for pari and may be more for maan... bcoz its true that maan truly loved pari and losing her along with his child is just so traumatic even to think...

eager to know how u will shape this story now as now centre of obsession pari is no more... continue soon

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

everybody would say OMG

After reading this update

can't believe it

ur story will make me really obsessed

i also started checking for ur updates

Ha ha ha

i wonder the way we look for maan and geet stories in this forum are we all obsessed by them

but i think our obsession for maan and geet leaves us with lots and lots of love and care

so i don't fear this obsession

oh my god again

now what next

and who is entropy entropy

what abt maan now

and abt geet now

oh so many questions

will really have to keep checking my inbox for ur updates

eagerly waiting for next

update sooon

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Dei_Gratia

@Dei_Gratia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

juz read all prts in one go
Awesome stry
Really loved it...
Vry diff concept
Though i hted d fact dat maan is married to pari n loves hr alott
Bt hope tum maaneet ko juda nhi karogi...
Nyc updt
Do pm me...

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

ab maan jis haalat me he i hope geet usko sambhaal le wo kuch na kare apne saath

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

pari died!!!!

she read the poem or she write the poem???!!!!!

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Why is everyone asking if Pari read the poem? Am I getting this wrong? As far as I understand, Entropy Entropy is actually Pari, right?

She used to write the poems and this was her last poem before/while killing herself...

I must say I felt very sad at the news. Maybe Pari was not strong enough to fight her weaknesses, but she should have - for them and their love. I feel sad for Maan too - he was deeply in love with her and didnt want to lose either her or the child.

One more point - while Geet is an important part of the story, but somehow I feel Maan and Pari in this story have overshadowed her character. Not that I mind. Just saying.

A very nice one. Really unique !

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

first time an ff where maan and geet are not together still everybody loved the story

all credit goes to u the writer

amazing

and everyone felt bad for pari too

wow

excellent work

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rsusmita

@rsusmita

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#299

read all the parts in one go, nice concept loved it please pm me

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#300

though expected but still tragic...her obsession was dangerous...it was very clear and this was a disaster to happen because sooner or later something like this would have been written...

but the specific words...reference to two lives...it just fit so perfectly that you wonder if Pari was entrpy...they were not mere poems but her own thoughts which spilled on the paper as poem...

i dare not say it but is it even remotely possible that Maan had a hand in having that last poem posted...could he be entropy with Geet as his obsession...I am scared to even think on those lines...

but this update left me with a feeling that the person who posted the poems knew Pari very well...