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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

OMG, I didn't see this coming.

It's like her obsession finally took away her life.

I really feel bad for Maan, that must be so hard for him, he really loved her a lot, that must be so painful for him to watch the love of his life in a pool of blood, one who will never come back to her.

Thanks for the pm.

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awesomepooja

@awesomepooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#282

Amazing update dear..
U write fabulous.

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#283

oh no...pari ne kab uss poem ko padi...pata nehi...koi aisa bhi hota hai kya...abb maan kya karega...

excellent n fabulous update...

loved it to d core...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#284

OH MY GOD...Pari killed herself...

she can't fight with her obsession...

but there is one question in my mind after reading update...

how ENTROPY knows that Pari is pregnant ---I know i am killing two lives...

when memory of pain and fear in your eyes covers my conscience....how this ENTROPY knows that Maan is in pain because of this Pari's obsession...

this is a very big suspense...

either somebody was playing with Pari's mind intentionally and he/she is very near to Pari...whom pari confide every happenning in her life...may be her mother or MAY BE GEET HERSELF...

or may be this writer of poems is Pari herself...her split personality...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: awesomepooja
Amazing update dear..
U write fabulous.

thanks,,,😊

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vandana73

@vandana73

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#286

omg what an end to pari's life but it was waiting to happen

u r one amazing writer!!

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palindrome

@palindrome

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: love2_soma
oh no...pari ne kab uss poem ko padi...pata nehi...koi aisa bhi hota hai kya{mujhe bhi nai pata sach me aisa hota hai ki nahi but stories are one place where i can do whatever i want whether it is making someone obsessed with poems😊}...abb maan kya karega...

excellent n fabulous update...

loved it to d core...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...