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Part 28

Contains some violence so please do consider once before proceeding to read it.

There was chaos in Khuranna Mansion as well as Handa Haveli. Everyone was tensed with the sudden announcement made by Maan Singh Khuranna and Prem Handa. The wedding which was supposed to be taken place after two week was pre poned and now it was just two days left for them as the third day the wedding would take place. None knew why and wat happened but they were just informed tat the wedding was in three days time. Raj was highly angry on Maan but he kept quite knowing tat there was no way to stop all this and on top of it Annie who was all angry on this happily agreed. Geet was strictly advised by Maan tat she would not come out of her room nor would she do any work that had made Geet more angry.

Geet: Maa.. please tell him na..

Rano: Beta.. you na know tat we cant do anything…. and your wounds are still fresh and Maan wont allow you to do anything.

Geet: Maan wont allow you to do anything. Haan aap sab tho unhse darr the ho na..

Rano: Haan woh tho hain.. so now keep quite and have this soup and later you need to take medicines.

Geet: yuck… medicines.. no.. nahi leni mujhe… Jaaye aap yaha se..

Maan: Choti Maa.. leave it there..

Rano turned while Geet looked up to see none other than the Devil himself standing right at the door with his eyes right on Geet.

Rano: Maan.. please.. just make her understand. She is just like you stubborn.

Maan: Ya I know..

Rano left the two while Maan locked the door from inside and Geet as usual gulped down with fear.

Maan: hmmm.. so my Jaan wants to have fun.. chalo.. koi baat nahi.. lets have some fun.

Geet raised her eyes and she could see a strange naughtiness in his eyes. she knew wat he meant and by now Maan was next to bed and before she could even say a word she was sitting on his lap and he on the bed.

Maan: hmmm so lets start.. ohh no.. first let me make you to finish this soup and medicines phir kuch…

Geet: phir kuch.. means..

Maan: Jaan.. are you really so innocent or you pretend to be..

Geet: hawww.. dekheye….

Maan: show me afterwards Jaan.. but right now soup.

Maan made her have the soup and medicines while Geet just kept staring at him.

Maan: chaloo.. now show me wat you want to show.

His hands slowly slips inside her loose kurti which she was wearing while Geet eyes's widens

Maan: wat happened you said na you want to have fun so now…

Geet : Nahi.. aisa fun nahi…

Maan: than which type..

Geet: woh.. I mean Prem Bhaiya and Annie di.. wedding.. please Na.. let me enjoy.. see.. m fine now..

Maan: show me where are you fine Jaan..

Geet: please Na Maan…

Maan: Jaan.. you know na… you are hurt.. your wounds are still fresh.. and if you stress yourself than.. it will hurt more.

Geet makes a puppy face making Maan to smile.

Geet: I promise, I will take care, I wont dance, I wont do work.. nothing… but please na.. let me.. enjoy this.. meri Di ki shadi hain na.

Maan: ok if I say.. wat will I get.

Geet: wat you ask.. but please na.,.

Maan: I want you.. right now..

Geet: meee..

Maan: hmmm.. I want my Jaan right now..

Maan nuzzled his face into her nape while his hands stroke her bare skin inside her kurti. His touches were creating havoc inside her. his simple touches were making her weak. She hugs him tight while pushing herself more into him and this simple move from her made Maan to loose his senses and he pulled her into her wild aggressive kiss. His lips were creating a passion within her while her hands threaded his hair behind. Maan sucked her lips making them to swell but still he was no where to stop. geet moaned into his mouth which gave him the needed entry tasting her secrets. His hands were busy with her waist.

Maan: Jaan.. I really need you..

Geet: wedding..

Maan: Kya…

Geet: me.. enjoy wedding..

Maan: Haan..

Geet: Sachiii..

Maan: hmmm..

Geet parted herself and kissed his whole face showing her happiness while Maan just gaped at her with a smile. She hugged him tight with all her strength while he crushed her into his arms..

Geet:hmmm

Maan: kya..

Geet: My wedding dress.

Maan: its ready..

Geet: really…

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The Khuranna Mansion was filled with guest and why not it was the grand wedding of Khuranna's Daughter with none other than Prem Handa, the sole owner of Handa Companies. There were people coming and going from all the backgrounds. The Raichands were too invited for the wedding though there was a rift between them but due to the professional level, they had to be present. Dev was highly pissed with the way the things were going on. Since his last attempt Geet was not allowed outside and he knew tat today was a big chance for him. he knew tat everyone were busy with the marriage and he had the best opportunity for his next plan. He had closely examined everything and he was sure tat they was no security inside the Mansion but it was only Khan Saab who was allowed to be inside. On the other side the bride was all getting ready and Geet was hell bent on teasing her Di uff her Bhabi..

Geet: Di.. sorry.. I mean bhabi.. hey babaji. Yeh kya hain.. wat should I call her now..

Di..

Annie: ohhh my little princess is so confused. Acha batao.. whom I to you.

Geet: My di.. nahi nahi.. my bhabi.. chi… Di.. I wont call you bhabi.. its so strange na..

Annie: Tats my sweetheart… you are my darling Princess Geet.. and I don't want us to change our relation. You were my sweet little sister and u are so no bhabi.. only Di.

Geet: but Maa.. said na.. tat u are my bhabi now..

Annie: Sweetheart.. I don't want you to call me Bhabi.. see if you call me bhabi than I know my princess will not tell me anything secret so no bhabi only Di..

Geet: Haan Di.. after all.. I need you na.. woh.. Hitler ki chugli karni hain na..

Annie smiled seeing her laughing. She knew tat though their princess was well matured but she was just innocent and nave for everything. How someone could would be so cruel for hurting her.

Soon Priya, Rano and Dadima came inside to take Annie down for the rituals while Geet was finally happy tat her Prem Bhaiya would get his love.

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The bride and groom were busy with the rituals while Maan busy in nirofying his Jaan. He could not take his eyes off her while another one was planning his next move to scare the hell out of Geet and Maan. Geet was so lost in the wedding tat she did not even realize tat Maan was right now standing close to her. She felt someone hands on her waist that was all visible due to her lehanga specially designed as per Maan Singh Khuranna. Maan slowly stroked her skin while making Geet to close her eyes with the sensation tat he was creating. She looked up at him who in turned gave he his famous smile letting her know tat he was nowhere to leave her now. she pleaded with her eyes.

Geet: please.. na.. Maan… anyone will see..

Maan: don't you even move a inch.. you have been making me crazy since I have seen you in this.

Geet: Dekho…. Koi dekh lega.. See Vicky is coming here..

Maan: I said na don't move.. no one will know where my hand is…

Geet: please…

Maan: Jaan…. I wont.. I want to feel your skin now..

Geet knew tat when he is in mood he will never leave her but the two love birds were unknown tat there was someone who was burning in anger seeing his hand on her waist. Dev who had seen Maan moving closer to Geet was right now standing behind them and had heard everything while his eyes were on her bare waist that was visible through her churni. He wanted to rip her right now and kill tat Maan for touching her.

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Geet: Babaji.. bacha lena.. this Badi Maa.. always she forgets one thing or the other. Now she.. its Di's and Bhaiya's wedding and she forgot to take the Kalash from the store room. She knows tat this Kalash is very important for the bidai as Di will be taking this along with her as per some Khuranna's ritual par nahi Badi Maa sab bhool jathi hain. and now. m here…. All stuck in this bhoot store. Pata nahi kya ajeeb ghar hain mere Maan ka.. thank god tat I wont be staying here after marriage.. nahi tho Badi Maa mujhe har din yaha kuch dhoondhne bhej deti.

Geet was all cribbing to her babaji about her would be MIL and her Maan and walking towards the store room which was quite far away from the place where the ceremony was taking place. Priya and forgotten about their Khandani kalash which they were supposed to give Annie and than she would return back when she would come for pagphere. All were busy and Priya could not find any servants so she asked Geet to get it and here though Geet was bit scared she could not say no to Priya.

Geet: babaji.. bacha lena… yaha koi.. bhoot vhoot nahi hain na..

Geet opened the door of the storeroom. The moment she entered the room she was scared with the darkness surrounding it but she composed herself saying tat she was inside the house. She tried searching for the switchboard and finally she could manage getting it. she started to search for the kalash in all the boxes unknown to the danger who was near by to her. she was so lost in her world of searching the kalash tat she did not even hear the door closing behind her and someone was very near to her.

Dev had been following Geet everywhere and the moment he heard tat she was supposed to go to the storeroom he made sure tat none could see him following her. Maan was all-unaware as he even was busying in the marriage being the brother but his mind was all on Geet but the only mistake he did was he was unknown tat the danger was all inside the house now.

Geet shivered the moment she realized tat there was no light source in the room and she dropped wat ever was in her hand. She tried to move but was finding it difficult to move with the lehanga and the darkness but Dev was not. He exactly knew where she was and before she could make another move, he held her by her waist tight while Geet screamed.

Geet: chodo.. chodo.. mujhe… bhoot.. bhoot… chodo… leave me.. leave.. me..

Dev closed her mouth with his one hand and with another puts a blindfold on her eyes. Geet struggled to get out of his grip. She hit him with her small fist that had no effect on Dev. He holds her hand after blindfolding her and kisses her hands shivering the hell out of her.

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Here Maan was restless on not seeing Geet anywhere. He searched her everywhere but she was nowhere to be seen. Every passing moment was making him angry. he did not know but for the first time he was having a strange feeling tat he was wrong this time.

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Geet : leave me.. please leave me.. I don't have anything with me.. Please leave me.. Please……

Dev was busying enjoying her body close to him. he slowly slides his hand on her waist tat she tried to jerk but he hold her tighter much tighter digging his nails into her soft skin. Her hands were all trying to remove his hands and next she felt her hands tied behind her and she was thrown down on the floor with a force.

Geet: Maan…… Bhaiyaa… please… save me.. Maan… Vicky… Di……

Dev puts on the lights and speaks up in a hoarse voice so tat she does not recognize him.

Dev: Chillao.. scream.. but no one will hear you out.. come on Darling scream.. scream. Call him.. Maan Singh Khuranna.. call that b*****.

Geet could sense him near her so she dragged herself behind hurting her whole body. The more she backed off the more Dev moved closer. Geet hit herself behind a wall flinching in pain. She tried to stable herself but soon she felt herself being pulled by her leg and completely laying on the floor.

Geet: please.. leave.. wat did .. I do…. wat did I do.. please..

Dev pulled her by her leg but his hand was still on them. He slowly lifted her lehanga to reveal her soft slender legs to his eyes. Geet was throwing her legs up and down to hit him but he was too strong with his hold.

Dev: don't.. don't.. try to do tat or it will be painful for you..

Geet : please leave me.. Maan… please… Maan…

The moment when he heard Maan's name he pulled her harshly to him while his force revealed her skin more to him taking her lehanga on top. He holds her by her hair making her to scream in pain..

Dev: Scream.. scream as much as possible.. but no one will come.. not even your Maan.. he will not be able to save you from me…

Geet: pl… ease… le.. ve.. me.. Ma..an.. Maaannn..

Dev pulls her lips with his fingers making them to bleed as his pierced her soft lips. She cried while her tears soaked her whole face which was once glowing with her beauty.

Dev: this lips are meant.. to take my name…. the more you take his name.. the more painful it wil be for you..

Dev pulled her dupatta away from her body revealing her beautiful curves that were held at place with her choli. He roamed his hands over them but the moment his eyes laid on her waist he remembered Maan touching her. he squeezed it so harsh tat she screamed.

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Maan and Vicky both started to search and soon Khan Saab was joined. They searched her everywhere but there was no sign of Geet when suddenly Maan heard Priya saying to Rano tat she had sent her to the storeroom to get the Kalash

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Dev: this is the very place where he touched you na.. you enjoy his touch na.. now I will make sure tat he does not.. I will burn the very place where he laid his hands.. had warned you stay away from Vicky… but no.. you did not.. you did not.. and see…wat I did.. I had to kill him.. but he did not.. he did not… but tat wont be now.. Your Maan will die.. he will die…..

Dev squeezed her waist and pushed her down once again hitting her head hard to the tiled floor. She screamed but her screamed turned into a sob the moment she felt heat on her bare waist. She tried to hold his hand but he pinned her hands with one hand while her legs with his legs. He lighted the lighter and brought in near her waist burning her skin where Maan and touched her.

Dev: this is wat you will get.. I will burn the very place where he touched you. I will burn him into ashes.. I will rip you under me all naked.. I will make him see you nude under me.. f****** you..

Geet: Maaannn

Maan stopped in his track the moment he heard her scream. The scream tat confirmed him tat his Jaan was in danger and next again all three heard the same scream.

Geet: Maaannn.. please save me……Maaannn……..

Dev: scream.. scream. No one will hear you downstairs. no one.. will.. chillao aur chillaoo..

Geet was burning and the pain was unbearable to her. she screamed again and tats when she heard Maan calling her.

Maan: geet… are you in… geet..

Geet: Maan.. he will. Kill… me.. Maan.. Maan….. Maan…

Maan: Jaan……

Geet: Maan… Maann……..

Dev panicked hearing his voice..

Dev: damit.. how did he reach here…

Geet: Maannn…
Dev saw tat the door was being broken. He knew tat he had to hide himself….he looked all over the storeroom and at one lone corner he saw a window. He reached and broke the glass as it was very difficult to open it but before he could flew away, the door was broken and he saw Maan rushing inside. Maan's eyes fell on injured Geet who was hardly covered but he did not have time to go near her as his eyes saw the figure jumping out of the window. He did not wait any longer and rushed behind him while Vicky wrapped Geet with her dupatta and Khan Saab ran behind Maan.

The moment Vicky covered Geet she flinched in pain and tats when he saw her waist skin almost burnt very badly. He slowly carried her out of the room. He did not know wat to do, as he could not even call his parents, as it would create a further mess with the media around.

Precap: Will Maan see Dev…….

I know you all are angry for this update but I had to give to make sure tat the Dangerous love exists here. To show wat extent Dev can go and wat will Maan do.. so please do not get angry as Geet is safe and is only hurt. Ab tho yeh Dangerous Maan aur bhi pagal ho jayenga.

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Posted: 12 years ago
I want to kill dev seriously
pathetic cheap man
bas***d
want to hit him where it hurt thw most
feeling sooo bad for geet
geet deserves happiness
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope Maan sees Dev and thrashes him..
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Posted: 12 years ago
so much violence dear
how come dev burnt geet dear
i will kill him
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, brilliant part
maaneet r lost in their love
but unaware that danger is lurking near to them
hate dev he is B****** @@@###$$%%%%%
he should rot in hell
feel sad for geet
m really scared for her
wish maan rip dev apart
continue soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my god

ur updates only make me speechless

again no words

cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved maaneet moments
arggghhh hated that DEV😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
This was biggest nightmare i have ever seen...I want Dev gets unimaginable and worse death...
Kaminey ko jitni bhi galiya do wo bhi kaam hogi...

Sorry dear i don't have any words to describe my hatress towards Dev...

but I have to say this thing you are excellent super fantabulous writer and i think all words are very small to describe your magical writing...

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