My lost identity part 12 page 91

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My lost identity
Have no time to update but still. had this idea in my head needed to put this on paper Prologue
Maan Came back to Mumbai after 5 years. Oh some much had changed since that time. He couldn' t wait to meet his fiance. His Geet after 5 years. He was ready to tell her how much he loved her. Gosh he was feeling excited like a kid. He looked around when he bumped into a girl. G:Sorry Hottie M:Excuse what did you His words got stuck in his troath when he looked up to find Geet standing. His happeniss knew no bounds whitout thinking he hugged her tight.Geet dazed backwards.She was shocked at first, but the she tried to free herself.
G:Maan calm down
He let her go. He looked at her. Wait a minute What the hell was she wearing. She was wearing a short white dress till her knees.
M:Geet what are you wearing it' s totally diff from what you used to wear
G:Haina Maan I changed my style. I look sexy na
M:sexy
G:Haan Mr.Khurana you have become even more hotter over the years
M:Thanks I guess But Geet
Before he could finish Geet' s phone rang
G:One min Maan
She picked up.
G:Hi hun. Haan I know darling, I will see you at night. Bye
M:geet with whom where you talking
G:Yash why
M:A guy
G:No he is a girl
M:Oh Thank God
Geet gave him a weird look
G:Maan don' t you even understand sarcasm of course he is a guy. Gosh you to much
M:Geet you have changed a lot
G:Haan I know. I have changed for the better. That reminds me where Sam
M:She went straight to her place from the airport but Geet how can you talk to a guy like that you know na we are engaged
G:So Maan when am I saying I want to marry Yash uff your to much. Why didn' t you go to home. What are you doing here at the mall.
M:I wanted to buy a teddy for someone special
Geet' s phone buzzed while messaging her friends she replied to Maan.
G:For whom I mean everyone has grown up so teddy
M:There is someone who might be a grown up girl but is a kid at heart
G:Whom
M:You know her
G:OMG don' t tell me Sam gosh how tacky
M:What no I was talking about you
Geet laughed.
G:Please Maan gosh I am not a two year old that I will like teddy's come let' s go home
She walked towards the car.
G:Maan are you coming
M:Huh yeah let's go
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me FIRST!!

After literally ages!! he he!!!

Gosh Geet is so different in this one???

Is she like trying to make Maan J???

Or is it like she couldn't bear to see Maan with Sameera…

She understood something wrong and is doing something like Tit for Tat???

Me very very curious!!

But still admits all this me loving this sweet Maan….

Awww he wanted to get a teddy for her…

But Geet's quite strange and seems pretty rude too!!

Loving it as usual sweets!!

Still cursing my stupid net!! Grrr!!

Love you shona!!!
Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc pro...
Geet changed???
Bt kyu???
Kaise???
Bechra maan...
Usse kitna bura lag ra hoga
Bt vo aisa bhave kari???
Cont soon
Hw r u sissy???
Abhi bhi head ache hai???
Luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i like it i like it...mujhe yeh acha laga...
pls do continue this one...
wow geet is damn raw in this...loved her attitude...n maan is sounding too cute...
n they r engaged😳...me thinking how will they manage together now...one is south n other north...interesting...
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Originally posted by: ruchs

Me FIRST!! congo angel


After literally ages!! he he!!!

Gosh Geet is so different in this one???

Is she like trying to make Maan J???you know my answer patha nahi

Or is it like she couldn't bear to see Maan with Sameera'hmmm I think you should ask her that😆

She understood something wrong and is doing something like Tit for Tat???😆don't think to much

Me very very curious!!

But still admits all this me loving this sweet Maan'.

Awww he wanted to get a teddy for her'

But Geet's quite strange and seems pretty rude too!!

Loving it as usual sweets!!

Still cursing my stupid net!! Grrr!!uff yeah net bhi na koi sameera se kam nahi so not trust worthy 😆

Love you shona!!! mwuaaah love ya too

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: gargi12

nyc pro...
Geet changed???
Bt kyu???
Kaise???
Bechra maan...
Usse kitna bura lag ra hoga
Bt vo aisa bhave kari???
Cont soon
Hw r u sissy???
Abhi bhi head ache hai???
Luv u

I am fines sweets no pain anymore
love you too sissy
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahimaneet

i like it i like it...mujhe yeh acha laga...

pls do continue this one...
wow geet is damn raw in this...loved her attitude...n maan is sounding too cute...
n they r engaged😳...me thinking how will they manage together now...one is south n other north...interesting...

awww thanks only when I get atleast 100 likes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very intresting...can't wait to see why geet changed so much continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Geet's joking right !?
she's not really like that !

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