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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: mel420

haan teri sharafat meine dehki hai in your ff' s😛


Chup Bilkul Chup😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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we are almost there sweets still 2 more likes to go
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars


Chup Bilkul Chup😆
Mere FFs mai jo bhi hota hai khulke hota hai😉
tere FFs mai toh sab chipakar karte hain😆
matlab soch kaise rough or wild cheeze karte honge🤣 zyaada xxx rated karte honge issiliye toh tu type nahi kar pati 😛

shareefo ko asisi baathe suit nahi karthiTongueKamini
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting...
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Originally posted by: mel420

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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: payalpari

hi anu dear how r u ?

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This update is dedicated to my angel Ruchs.
Part 1
G:Please Maan gosh I am not a two year old that I will like teddy's come let' s go home
She walked towards the car.
G:Maan are you coming
M:Huh yeah let's go
Maneet sat in geet' s car.Geet put on her bluetooth cause her phone kept buzzing.
G:Haan I will be there. How late acha. It' s now 6 so I will reach there at 8. Okay bye sweetheart.
M:Geet where are you going
G:I am going out with my friends
M:Aach I mean I just came back
G:Haan toh. It's Yashu b-day
M:hmmm
Maneet reached home.Maan was greated warmly by everyone.
Mohinder:Beta so how was London
M:Great dad I started a company there.Called KC. It has reached hights I could never believe it would. I am ready to oprate the company from India.
Mohinder:We accepted nothing less from you son
Just then geet was moving towards the door.
Mohinder:Geet where are you going
G:I am going out dad
M:What but maan just came back
G:So
Maan:It's okay dad. You might if I join you Geet
Mohinder:You must be tired Maan
M:No dad I am okay
Maan stood up and went with Geet.Maan seated himself again in the car.
M:So where is Yash' s party Jaan
G:Jaan yucky how tacky don't call me that. His party is in the disc
M:What but you hate discs
G:Wrong I hated such places not anymore
M:You have changed a lot Geet
G:How boring Maan you have already told me that, don' t repeat
M:Kya karoon Geet yakeen hi nahi hota.That this girl sitting next to me the Geet of 5 years ago
G:Yeah I can understand that geet was so tacky haina
M:No she was amazing. So sweet so
Suddenly Maan heard a door open. Oh the car had stopped and geet was getting out. He was shocked seemed like she wasn't interested in his talks.Maan followed geet into the disc. He was shocked seeing Geet hugging Yash.
G:Happy b-day yashu
She kissed Yash on his cheeks.Maan grabbed Geet by her arm Geet
M: yeh kya kari ho
G:I should ask you that question
She freed herself from Maan' s grip
Y:Hi how are you dude
M:I am Maan, Geet' s fiance
Y:Geet you didn' t tell me you are engaged
G:There was nothing to tell Yashu are parents fixed our marriage. Boring right
Y:In thise time arragened mariage. Poor you
G:Forget that Let' s dance
She grabbed Yash hand and pulled him to to dancefloor,leaving a shocked Maan behind. He couldn' t believe his eyes. Why was geet behaving like that, was she really changed that much but how and most importantly why. Maan's thought got disturbed when he saw geet dancing.
Khwab De Ke Jhoote Moote,
Batiya Banaye Kaise
Sajna Anari Baiman
Geet had pushed yash and was now dancing alone on the dance floor while everyone was whistling.Geet had walked over to Maan now.She danced around him.
Hey Mista
You Say You Want Me As Your Lova
But Tell Me Now
Are You A Player
Say What Ah
Chika Chika
Maan was to shocked to react. He became completly numb. Yash grabbed her hand and danced with her.
Jabhi Dekhe Tujhko Nazar
Baby Ghayal Ho Jaye Jigar
O O O Ho Hoho
Hai Mere Hai Sason Ka
Asar Baby Tujhko Manu Hamsafar


Teri Har Ada Ne Mujh Pe
Yeh Kaisa Jadoo Kiya Re
Love's The Game I Wanna Play
I Am Craving For Your Body Now
Maan was feeling disgust by all this. he couldn' t take it anymore he left the party.He entered KM feeling low and lost.
Mohinder:Beta your back where is Geet, we where just heading home will take her with me
M:She is still at the party. dad why has Geet changed so much
Mohinder:You noticed isn' t great. Now your what do you call it haan class matches more, right beta
M:No this is all wrong
Mohinder:matlab
D:Beta I think Maan is just tired
Mohinder:theek hai Ma, will meet you tomorrow
When Mohinder left dadima went to Maan.Maan was sitting on his bed all lost.
D:Kya huwa Maan
M:Dadi Geet
D:Your shocked, why
M:She wasn't like this
D:Haan I know but aren' t you happy she is changed. Isn't this something you always wanted.
Dadi left leaving Maan behind to think. Geet entered her home late at night. She went straight to her room, closed her door and she started rubbing her arms that where touched by Yash and her lips. Yuck she gave him a kiss on his cheek. She rubbed her lips that harsh that they started bleeding. Her body was full with brushes. She went to the washroom and sat under the cold water for hours, but the disgusting feeling didn't leave her body.It was here to stay forever.She cried out loud hoping the pain will leave but it didn't, it never went away how hard she tried.After a couple of hours when her tears where dried down, she left the washroom and lay on her bed hoping sleep will find his way to her body but it didn' t, it never did.
Precap:Past
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Edited by mel420 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
nd me first time first on ur update
nai ooye
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: PariNain

nd me first time first on ur update
nai ooye

😆 welcome ji
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
ohhh...u updated ok now i am off ot read...will comment after reading...
edited...
oh toh hamne jo socha woh sahi tha...
maan ne kuch toh kaha geet ko jiski wajah se woh aise behave kar rahi hain...
eww usne disc main dance kiya unsab ke saath...bechari ghar aake bahut royi bhi..so sad...😭
ab toh jaldi se update kar so that we will get to know about the past...
waiting dear...
Edited by keerthi90 - 12 years ago

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