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Ratna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Thanks for explaining the concept...was a little confused before 😳...but now it is clear 👍🏼

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

yaar main tumpar kyun joota fenkungi aisa main kabhi nahin kar sakti...itni badi baat mat kaho...

wahi to main bhi keh rahi hoon ki until I don't know the reason I can't support women harassment...and sabse badi baat kisi ko harass karne ka kisi ko haq nahin hai...if anyone is at fault handover him or her to Law...

and agar nahin kar sakte to usko uske haal par chod do...why it was necessary for Maan to marry her if she is responsible for his situation...

chahe koi kuch bhi kahe Maan shouldn't have married her...and if he married her then he doesn't have any right to torture her...

yahan kitne saari stories hain where Maan first was womanizer, drunkard, illtreat Geet and torture her without any fault but Geet was always shown rote dhote hue sab kuch sehne waali and then when Maan start changing she will easily forgive like a sati-savitri naari... why can't that be shown with Maan...if Geet also did something that have made him lonely then he as a good husband can bring her back on track by his love...why it was necessary to have revenge by men if girl does something wrong...

yahi to hum society mein dekhte hain...boys can illtreat any girl... .tease any girl but if that girl oppose then he will gang-rape her with his friends because girl is believed to be a weaker sex...

this revenge thing by men on women is wrong very very wrong...

agar Maan khud bhi public transport use kar raha hai then it is his own choice not forced...we can easily do what we want to do but if somebody force us to do something then it irritates a person...Maan knows where is his farm house whereas Geet didn't knew where it is...we can easily hire any vehicle if we know where we have to go but if we don't know the route then we will be frightened...

if she have done such a blunder with Maan that he has got all rights to torture her then why doesn't she herself know this...if she have done anything unknowingly or she has some memory loss then she is not faulty...anjaane mein ki gayi galti gunaah nahin hoti and jisse bhool gaye uska badla lene ka kya fayda...

maar-peet karna hi torture nahin hota...emotional torture is also called torture...he is giving physical torture to her by making her hold salt with the hand which is burnt...by not letting her sleep properly...forcing her to do household work when he has so many servants in his house...

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

yaar main tumpar kyun joota fenkungi aisa main kabhi nahin kar sakti...itni badi baat mat kaho...

wahi to main bhi keh rahi hoon ki until I don't know the reason I can't support women harassment...and sabse badi baat kisi ko harass karne ka kisi ko haq nahin hai...if anyone is at fault handover him or her to Law...
and agar nahin kar sakte to usko uske haal par chod do...why it was necessary for Maan to marry her if she is responsible for his situation...
chahe koi kuch bhi kahe Maan shouldn't have married her...and if he married her then he doesn't have any right to torture her...

yahan kitne saari stories hain where Maan first was womanizer, drunkard, illtreat Geet and torture her without any fault but Geet was always shown rote dhote hue sab kuch sehne waali and then when Maan start changing she will easily forgive like a sati-savitri naari... why can't that be shown with Maan...if Geet also did something that have made him lonely then he as a good husband can bring her back on track by his love...why it was necessary to have revenge by men if girl does something wrong...

yahi to hum society mein dekhte hain...boys can illtreat any girl... .tease any girl but if that girl oppose then he will gang-rape her with his friends because girl is believed to be a weaker sex...

this revenge thing by men on women is wrong very very wrong...
agar Maan khud bhi public transport use kar raha hai then it is his own choice not forced...we can easily do what we want to do but if somebody force us to do something then it irritates a person...Maan knows where is his farm house whereas Geet didn't knew where it is...we can easily hire any vehicle if we know where we have to go but if we don't know the route then we will be frightened...

if she have done such a blunder with Maan that he has got all rights to torture her then why doesn't she herself know this...if she have done anything unknowingly or she has some memory loss then she is not faulty...anjaane mein ki gayi galti gunaah nahin hoti and jisse bhool gaye uska badla lene ka kya fayda...

maar-peet karna hi torture nahin hota...emotional torture is also called torture...he is giving physical torture to her by making her hold salt with the hand which is burnt...by not letting her sleep properly...forcing her to do household work when he has so many servants in his house...

Di you are 100% right and this is modified version of Lagan I think some where u have read that parts of my that left over FF as I changed that to this ...But while writing next parts I really really update on basis what u explained to me...as my concept of this ff was different I changed it to serious one...But yeh bahut seniors ho gaya...I think I should adopt my original track from where I started Lagan...

Edited by Sonia.KN - 11 years ago

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fariya20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

thanks for the concept justification

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minelove24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

what is in mohinder's mind? Why did he made go rano to abroad?and geet using bus..poor girl..waiting 4 next..awsme update

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minelove24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

thanx yar..i think dad moh.is culpril behind it

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Krupa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

why she didnt remembr what happen in past ?plus her dad suporting maan?strange isn't it?per as maan said dusro ko ...jab khud pe atta hai...?there is suspense and geet dont know that sounds like mysterious story.

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aditimaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

I knew it sumthing related to past thats why Maan doing these.nd why to blame Maan when he is using public transport,he is making sure of Geet's safety

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turbulence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#359

helo, sonu.

actually me commenting second time, kya bolu samaj mei nai ata hai.

par baat aisi hai ki bina bole nai reh sakti.

kiran di ke comment ne sochne ko majbur kar diya hai.

geet ki man ki haal dekh aise lagta hai ki usko jo ho raha hai uski reason ka andaza nai hai.

i mean, geet ko itni badi galti yaad nai, aise kaise ho sakta hai?

aur agar wo sach mei itni buri hoti, to is situation mei usko naukar aur staff ki help, unki support ka kuch kadar nai hoti. Lekin wo nakul deepak aur mili ko har choti baat mei thnx bol rai hai, matlab abi uska ghamand khatam hone laga hai.

Us ke andar abhi se changes dikh rai hain.

Agar aise nai hota to phir wo apne bure aur pride filled form se hi rehti.

And in chap 3 jab maan usko bola ki handa resort ki collaboration mei problem aa jayegi, that time, she was worried for her papa and then wo suicide attempt ki baat, it shows that she loves her family very much.

And 4 saalo mei mohinder ne geet ko kuch kyu nai bataya?

did handa pop get to know about all this at a later stage?

maan was crying in chap 4 dat geet is his life, to phir its clear ki uski koi past love life nai thi.

If mohinder or rano are guilty, then saza geet ko mile, phir bhi mind mei confusion hai.

Also, in chapter 4 the doctor while bandaging geet's hands told maan ki usko some days extra care ki need hai, phir bhi usko bus travel ki sakhti, uske pehle maan ki constant taunts, kya isko extra care karna bolte hai?

Aise mehsus ho raha hai ki geet ko ek to shock treatment mil rahi hai, ya phir uski tough survival test ki ja rai hai.

Being high-headed is one thing, par kya ghamand todne ke liye itna stone hearted pretend karna zaruri hai?

Aur geet ko itna physical and emotional torture karne se kya hoga ki bas khauf hi hoga. Uski jo galti hai wo yaad aane ki chances kitne hai?

Aur jab sare natak ki truth geet ki samne ayegi to kya wo maan n apne dad pe bharosa kar payegi dobara?

Kya uski dil mei unki wo jagah banegi phir se?

Kya sach mei wo maan ki sath khush reh payegi?

After reading chapter 4 maine socha maan though won't be that close to geet, will simply ignore her and continue being lil bit rude.

But wo night ki neend bhi barbad kar raha hai, bichari larki ko itna dar ho gaya hai ki raat mei so vi nai pa rahi thik se.

Then uska pura din bhi bas akele mei hi spend hota hoga, right?

Saza bhi do galati ki, thik hai sabak sikhana zaruri hai hi, par geet ko koi psychological ya mental problem ho gayi, wo depression mei chali gayi to?

Baat gehri hai, wo to samaj aa gaya,concept justification se mere kuch doubts bhi solve ho gaye, lekin geet ki condition dekhi nai jaa rahi hai.

Kya usko insaniyat ke nate thodi softness nai mil sakti?

And sonia u yurself said that is ff mei seriousnes ki level control ki bahar chali gayi hai.

Kya ab geet ko thori relief ki saans nai milegi, kuch din ke liye sahi?

Is stage pe i think party ka plan shud be less cruel and the last one for the phase which is ongoing.

Abi party ki baad interval le lo.

If my comment is rude, disturbing or kind of judgemental in any way, pls maaf karna. Me don't mean to hurt or insult anyone. Bas dimag ki dahi jam rai hai soch soch ke. Maine mere dad ko bhi pucha, to even he said ki ek taraf jaha geet ki safety dekhi jaa rai hai, dusri taraf wahi par uski haalat bhi bigad sakti hai. Bas isiliye aur upar se she isn't used to travelling by bus and auto. Usi ka dar lag raha hai.

Pls usko safe rakho. Bas thik se farmhouse pahuch jaye. Kuch bura na ho uski sath.

Aur kuch bolne jau par mera dimag chal nai raha. So bas itna hi ab ke liye.

Me waiting for update like everyone else. Pls jaldi se do.

And ya, itni achi story ke liye bahot thanks.

Edited by turbulence - 11 years ago

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

Di you are 100% right and this is modified version of Lagan I think some where u have read that parts of my that left over FF as I changed that to this ...But while writing next parts I really really update on basis what u explained to me...as my concept of this ff was different I changed it to serious one...But yeh bahut seniors ho gaya...I think I should adopt my original track from where I started Lagan...

thanx for understanding my POV Sonia...yes I also feel ki bahut serious ho gaya...I feel ki Maan Geet ko sahi tareeke se sahi raah par laane ki bajai usse jaroorat se jyada torture kar raha hai...

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