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Posted: 11 years ago
Rashmi some where a bit on right track...
he he
thanks
ye meri gandi aadat hai
I usually jump on the conclusion and I can get some hints about the fictions..and you canm ask from other writers too..Specially Jeevana
\you know I have a bad habit to read end of any novel before starting it
If I like the end I read that If not I don't read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear...I am an active reader of all ur stories , but due to civil exams that will be on 3rd aug , I was

busy from 17th to 26th july...hope u will understand...Now I am free again as my preparations

finished...I have just finished reading ur pending updates & commented...it was beautiful dear...by the way if u

are planning to update within 1st week of aug, I want u to know that I am planning to format my laptop , so may

be for 1-2 days my laptop will be not with me...sorry.
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Posted: 10 years ago
i tot Maan was ryt!
guess som prob wit Geet's mom... mayb she hd spoiled her n Geet wld hv unknowlingly harmed Maan!
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Posted: 10 years ago

hie sonia.

actually me wanted to say few more things about geet character in tanha, hope u don' mind.

u know i read all parts about 5-6 times, and i m more confused.

specially regarding part 1 and part 5.

in part 1 where geet requests dadi ma to go n rest as shez tired, i don' think geet is rude, bcoz it is clear she loves n respects maan's dadi.
And when maan entered the room in drunken state, geet was shocked. So here it is clear that she does not have any addictions. Usko kuch nasha vi nai hai. Most of her lifestyle n habits are quite normal. It seems that whatever maan did wid geet on the wedding night and first morning, was because he was reminded of the painful past on the wedding night itself, and all of that came out naturally.

That way he poured out all the poison that time itself. Tabhi to mohinder se bata karte he was tearful as the pain was visible in his words and behavior.

when geet noticed the servants helping her in parts 3,4 n 5 she thanked them and is careful about their safety too, she wants to save them from maan's wrath.

wo nai chati ki uski waja se unki jobs chale jaye.

aisi larki jo apni papa ki, dadi and staffs ki itni care karti ho, kya sachi buri ho sakti hai?

aisi kya galti ki geet ne ki pyaar se samjane par samaj nai payegi?

before wedding maan was tanha for some 3 1/2 yrs, then geet must be teenager, kya wo itni badi crime sach mei kar sakti thi ki maan itna tanha ban gaya? Don' u suppose it is possible that geet se kuch anjane mei galti hui ho, par kisine usko fasaya ho?

But mohinder said to maan ki beta mafi to maine mangni chahiye, means that he must've been responsible for geet's mistake. Aur aisi baat hai to phir geet ke sath ye tit for tat kyu?
One thing is clear that geet fell in love with maan the day she saw him at a function. So, if she has done him some damage without knowing that he is maan singh khurana with whom she fell in love, then I don' think she deserves this rudeness and an aloof status under the same roof. Pls at least now she needs to be away from that loneliness, because maan won't be able to survive for long if he behaves according to the plan. He needs his love and deserves happiness like geet does.

and mohinder ne plan to bana liya maan ko sath lekar, but later on, kya geet ki sari khushiya, maaneet ka pyaar bhara rishta sab sach ho payega?

aisa na ho ki geet is chakkar mei hamesha ke liya apno se door chali jaye. Aur maan bi apna pyar kho ke akela reh jaye. Plan ke chakkar mei agar maaneet ki happy life nai bani to plan kis kaam ka? Mohinder thinks that plan will help to get rid of all the unpleasant things, but right now he is not completely aware of the kids' turmoil. What if mohinder is left feeling guilty for life if maaneet are not united in their love.

kya maan ke liye sach mei geet ko pyar dena, mohinder ke liye geet ko shanti se samjana itna mushqil hai ki unko ye cruel way se jana pade?

Ho sakta hai ab maan aur uski papa ke pyar jatane se geet ko jaldi hi apni galti yaad aa jaye. It is possible that she herself will make everything right. I think only geet can wipe out the tanhai from their life. She is brainy enough to do that.

waise one more thing. U know yesterday maine king thrushbeard ki story padhi.us mei jo princess thi na usko vi tanha wali geet jaise hi rude samaj te hai.

then uski king papa uski shadi forcibly ek poor artist se kar dete hai, usko punish karne ke liye.

then us beggar ki ghar mei wo princess sab kaam karti hai, phir crockery sell karti hai, then dusri king ki palace mei usko maid ki job vi karni padti hai, jaha usko apni sab galti ka bahot bura lagta hai. Phir she learns kindness.

phir wo sudar jati hai n usko pata chalta hai ki beggar actually prince thrushbeard hai jo usko lesson sikhane ke liye uski papa ki sath natak mei shamil ho gaya tha. In order to cure her from the haughty nature.

I just wonder if u ever read this story, ye grims tale hai.

tanha ki concept ki shuruat muje iski thori similar lagi so i asked yu.

waise is pm ko answer nai karo to no probs, bas ek man ki baat kehni thi is ke liye pm beji maine.

pls ek baat batao kya king thrushbeard ki hi story tum ko tumari mama ne boli thi?

me finished my say, now wait for u.

pls jaldi aao tanha and mpm season ko lekar.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: turbulence

hie sonia.

actually me wanted to say few more things about geet character in tanha, hope u don' mind.

u know i read all parts about 5-6 times, and i m more confused.

specially regarding part 1 and part 5.

in part 1 where geet requests dadi ma to go n rest as shez tired, i don' think geet is rude, bcoz it is clear she loves n respects maan's dadi.
And when maan entered the room in drunken state, geet was shocked. So here it is clear that she does not have any addictions. Usko kuch nasha vi nai hai. Most of her lifestyle n habits are quite normal. It seems that whatever maan did wid geet on the wedding night and first morning, was because he was reminded of the painful past on the wedding night itself, and all of that came out naturally.

That way he poured out all the poison that time itself. Tabhi to mohinder se bata karte he was tearful as the pain was visible in his words and behavior.

when geet noticed the servants helping her in parts 3,4 n 5 she thanked them and is careful about their safety too, she wants to save them from maan's wrath.

wo nai chati ki uski waja se unki jobs chale jaye.

aisi larki jo apni papa ki, dadi and staffs ki itni care karti ho, kya sachi buri ho sakti hai?

aisi kya galti ki geet ne ki pyaar se samjane par samaj nai payegi?

before wedding maan was tanha for some 3 1/2 yrs, then geet must be teenager, kya wo itni badi crime sach mei kar sakti thi ki maan itna tanha ban gaya? Don' u suppose it is possible that geet se kuch anjane mei galti hui ho, par kisine usko fasaya ho?

But mohinder said to maan ki beta mafi to maine mangni chahiye, means that he must've been responsible for geet's mistake. Aur aisi baat hai to phir geet ke sath ye tit for tat kyu?
One thing is clear that geet fell in love with maan the day she saw him at a function. So, if she has done him some damage without knowing that he is maan singh khurana with whom she fell in love, then I don' think she deserves this rudeness and an aloof status under the same roof. Pls at least now she needs to be away from that loneliness, because maan won't be able to survive for long if he behaves according to the plan. He needs his love and deserves happiness like geet does.

and mohinder ne plan to bana liya maan ko sath lekar, but later on, kya geet ki sari khushiya, maaneet ka pyaar bhara rishta sab sach ho payega?

aisa na ho ki geet is chakkar mei hamesha ke liya apno se door chali jaye. Aur maan bi apna pyar kho ke akela reh jaye. Plan ke chakkar mei agar maaneet ki happy life nai bani to plan kis kaam ka? Mohinder thinks that plan will help to get rid of all the unpleasant things, but right now he is not completely aware of the kids' turmoil. What if mohinder is left feeling guilty for life if maaneet are not united in their love.

kya maan ke liye sach mei geet ko pyar dena, mohinder ke liye geet ko shanti se samjana itna mushqil hai ki unko ye cruel way se jana pade?

Ho sakta hai ab maan aur uski papa ke pyar jatane se geet ko jaldi hi apni galti yaad aa jaye. It is possible that she herself will make everything right. I think only geet can wipe out the tanhai from their life. She is brainy enough to do that.

waise one more thing. U know yesterday maine king thrushbeard ki story padhi.us mei jo princess thi na usko vi tanha wali geet jaise hi rude samaj te hai.

then uski king papa uski shadi forcibly ek poor artist se kar dete hai, usko punish karne ke liye.

then us beggar ki ghar mei wo princess sab kaam karti hai, phir crockery sell karti hai, then dusri king ki palace mei usko maid ki job vi karni padti hai, jaha usko apni sab galti ka bahot bura lagta hai. Phir she learns kindness.

phir wo sudar jati hai n usko pata chalta hai ki beggar actually prince thrushbeard hai jo usko lesson sikhane ke liye uski papa ki sath natak mei shamil ho gaya tha. In order to cure her from the haughty nature.

I just wonder if u ever read this story, ye grims tale hai.

tanha ki concept ki shuruat muje iski thori similar lagi so i asked yu.

waise is pm ko answer nai karo to no probs, bas ek man ki baat kehni thi is ke liye pm beji maine.

pls ek baat batao kya king thrushbeard ki hi story tum ko tumari mama ne boli thi?

me finished my say, now wait for u.

pls jaldi aao tanha and mpm season ko lekar.



Why r u repeating same n same first in pm and even here on reply box of Tanha...I haven't read any story like this even my mom never read...I use my own brain...and the biggest example is as I m not getting what to write next...story is pending at the point...I have lots of ideas...I choose themes from my real life and try to modify in story...have less time thes days...but trying to give as much as I can...so plz don try to give ur own logics...Even if from some where I take idea ...I always give source of that ...mujhe idea churaane ki jarrorat nahi...I hve so many ideas that I have no time to put those in words...

Edited by Sonia.KN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
just happened to read ur reply.
pls don' be annoyed yaar. Me din' mean to irritate you.

Just dat i like ur works very much, and tanha is my most favorite.

Actually, my slight fault, can't contain my curiosity sometimes.

About the story, just thought that u might've read, never intend to match or put in my own logics. maine kavi nai bolna chaha ki aap ne koi idea churayi. Fiction ye wali aisi hai ki meri dil ko chu gayi. Bas bhulayi nai jati hai. Pls gussa mat karo. Keep me in ur buddy list. I will really love to read all ur stories for ever and ever.

Once again sorry if i hurt u in any way. Dil pe mat lena.


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