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Sonia KN

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ru-ba-ru hai tu magar

hai yeh yahaan

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 13 years ago

Daddi Maa : 'Maan betay u hav made ur mind to get married this is biggest happiness of my life '

Maan :' Yes Daddi Maa aap he kehti thi I should get married...I m ready '

Daddi Maa : 'U can't imagine how much happy I m...apki zindgi ka ..is ghar ka akelapan khtam ho jaaega..'

Maan : 'Daddi Maa akela to main kabhi tha he nahi never ever...my business..u never let me alone...per ha Tanha hamesha tha aur hamesha rahunga'

Daddi : What u want to say son ?

Maan : 'An alone (Akela) man means who has no dear one around him due to any reason can liv life with pleasant memories he may hav...even if he sees a stranger with smile on face that smile can bring smile on his face too.

he continuous

But Dadi Maa ek Tanha insaan matlab wo insaan jo sabke beech ho kar bhi akela hai andar se...wo kaise jiye...jab insaan ki aatma he khaali hai to khushiya kya matlab rakhti hai...main sabke beech ho kar bhi akela hu aur iss akelay pan ne mujhe Tanha kar diya hai...kab se mujhe nahi pata aur kab tak yeh main nahi jaanta (But Daddi Maa a lonely man who is alone in between crowd from inside..how he can liv...when person has emptiness at soul then what happiness means to him...I was alone in between crowd and ll remain...this made me lonely from when I don know and to what time I don know...)

Daddi : Son try to move ahead in life ...kab takk aap is tanhai main rahogay

Maan : Tanha rehna aab meri aadat ban gayi hai ...aur aadat jaati nahi...ha per jo tanhai na chah kar milli wo bardashat nahi hoti (to be lonely is my habit now but the loneliness which is due to unwanted reason that is unbearable )

Daddi : Koshish aap ko karni hai

Maan : Ji mujhe he karni hai koshish.jab koi samjhe ga mere is Tanha hone ka dard...tab he koi manzil mile shayad (ya I hav to but when some one will realize my lonliness only then I ll get what I want) Maan says looking at Daddi Maa with wet eyes and leaves.

Daddi : Sabh kush kar sakte hai apke liye beta per shayad Tanha hona is ghar k har member ki reality ban gayi hai (she sighs and also leaves from place)

Hop u ll find this new concept interesting.This is new attempt by me and my friend Bulbul .U ll lik this passionate story.Plz giv ur response.

Waiting for u

Sonia

New reader plz add us if want updates

Jass.KN plz use to send pm request

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Concept Justification Page 70

Edited by Sonia.KN - 11 years ago

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maanluver

@maanluver

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

prologue is interesting

cont soon

waiting eagerly

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

Congrats on the new FF...

nice prologue...

continue soon,,...

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shalinisaran89

@shalinisaran89

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

seems different...

maan tanhai is des deeply...

cont soon

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Jass and Bulbul 🤗...thank u for starting a new Maaneet FF...really appreciate the effort...awesome prologue 👍🏼...plz continue 😊

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

interesting n nice concept...

loved it very much...

thank u sooo much fr d lovely ff n also fr d pm...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow dearies that was an amazing cncept i say..
Jass dear it's cmpletely diff frm ur other works..
Aww maan tanha hai for unknwn reasn..may be geet can fil it..
Maaneet ke bina aur tera update ke bina hum tanha hai
isliye jaldi updte kar
and ha pehle pehle shadi ki baat agayi dulhan toh geet hai na?
Cnt sn dearies

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hii jass and mohita, congrats on the new FF dearies..
coming to the prologue its awesome..
beautifully written...
maan is ready for marriage but he is alone and no one understands him.. so sad..
continue soon dearies...