a bookmark and 2 res later here i am finally reviewing ur story... sorry! *kaan pakad ke*
okay i started reading this one and to be honest i was like... hmm so this one is another childhood love story but it was the usual with a sweet tinge to it!
Chapter1
i have always wondered can men be as sensitive as they claim to be... well we do, at least in your stories... 😳 his eagerness to see if at least today his dreams would come true when geet came to stand near her window and the thought process of him wanting to hata her tendrills... awww 😳
anyways back to the story... a series of flashback clearly revealed maaneet relation... poor girl is in total fear! i think he is born with akdoo-ness but bechara has fallen in love... 😳 mr. maan a bit of free titbit... pyaar se darr nahi lagta.. thappad se 🤣 so go and tell her your love!
Chapter2
a masquerade ball it is... a perfect setting for the hero and heroine to meet aur sab kuch happily ever after 😳 magar this one is alag che geet darling seriously wake up! that poem can only be written by him for you... anyways masquerade ball shuru kiye jaye...😉
the awkward start and the convos between maaneet was shoo sweet magar i wanted to strangle them both... yahaan pyaar ka savaal hai and geet is blabbing and maan being mum! i wonder how come geet didnt realize it was maan until later... 😕 i guess the distance between the two *scratching my head*
okay i need to confess i lost hopes in SRK after OSO... only chak de the was last i liked. but i lurvee main agar kahoon maaneet version 😳 so i loved u included it in here 😃
Chapter3
a view of the whole ball from maan's point... well khotta de puttar there is no use using anonymity... did u realize the failure in not signing that card... ab jao and let her know it was u!
oh wait plan backfired! maan speaking his heart out has only gotten her more scared... aawww i felt so bad... the way he said he wouldnt show his face ever... and the final breakdown and realization... heart wreching! reading it i literally wanted to come and personally strangle u for creating such circumstances 😡😆 anyways beautiful portrayal of pain and sorrow 😃
Chapter 4
some maybe happily ever afters and some major realizations... finally the most awaited showdown! geet saying those lines back while maan's emotions for each of those lines was AMAZING! great going gal 😃... finally ab thappad se darr nahi lagta 😉
Closure:
well i must say this was a surprise package... i did expect them to have their own happily ever after magar u penning it down was icing on the cake! i wonder whom you had it mind for the two of them... first i began imagining kunwar amarjeet because of the mention of Rey (NO I DONT WATCH THE SHOW... came across the guy n ended up in wiki page of his show... hehe) and then i couldnt imagine anyone for ihina (unique name btw :D) n then ur avatar got me thinking why not gautam n that gal... its from teri meri love stories right? i mean she does seem to have chicken-like legs 😆 so anyways, then i thought u have that bushy haired boy u used in little late to love... oh wait i just realized u took away that one too 😡 maatladaku naatho 😭 i am never forgiving u now 😒
since i promised to review it i am finishing it up with epi review.. magar remember with a heavy heart... and u know why 😡
Epi:
amazing lines that geet had written for maan for that fateful day... but poor gal kya se kya hogaya... 😆
perfect ending with maan's counter poem... recounting old incidents while confessing his love... SWEET as a butterscotch cake! with a top of cherry on it 😉
but wait the circus maan mentioned was true kya.. it had me scratching my head when he replied with his own poem... so he read it alright and knew it was her 😕
but i am in awe of palin for creating such beautiful lines 👏
and the cute banter between maaneet was a league of its own... 😳
so if it wasnt for me scurrying around the forum trying to search for good stories... i wouldnt have ended up over the top amazing ones 😃
aur i am STILL mad at u 😡
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