[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89]

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#551

Its an Awesum and lovely update. It was indeed a fairytale. I Loved a blushing Geet and romantic Maan.

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

awesome parts and the poem was tooo goood...👏

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

Awesome one..Liked it.. Nice epilogue... Yeah love poem is nice..

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#554

😡

Why does Mari get an SBV n i do NOT get an NPM

😭

*phhot phoot ke roing*

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516645

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

What's this SBV? 😕 Trust me I am going to pull my hair out and become ganja someday trying to figure out these shortforms. See i made him wear vest for you. Now he couldn't have gone to her room in his NPM avatar haina?

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: TheBrat
What's this SBV? 😕 Trust me I am going to pull my hair out and become ganja someday trying to figure out these shortforms. See i made him wear vest for you. Now he couldn't have gone to her room in his NPM avatar haina?

Wohi to hai😆

Sexy Black Vest😉😉😉

And dont u know?😲 Mari has a not-so-secret obsessive-fetish for SBV😉

Self confessed😳

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516645

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Rofl our Mariam? That's something. I had been of the opinion that our shy Mayyo would probably fantasizing him in complete clothes. Interesting. Aashu gussa math ho na. I promised you a NPM Os na u'd get it pakka.

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: TheBrat
Rofl our Mariam? That's something. I had been of the opinion that our shy Mayyo would probably fantasizing him in complete clothes. Interesting. Aashu gussa math ho na. I promised you a NPM Os na u'd get it pakka.

Yes our bholi-bhali chalak lomdi Mari😳

Bacchi poori nikli haath se *shakes head in disaporavl*

ANd u know what?😲

RTM SBV is her Fav😉

I will wait for ma NPM😳

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mishty_shona

@mishty_shona

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#559

awesome!!! i have no words to descibe this pice of work!! i mean itz simply brilliant dear, one of the finest works i hve ever read, of yours. And not to mention the poems, it truly did breath life into the story, kudos palindrome. U definitely did a wonderful joB!! what a perfect end to this perfect story!!
loved it!! muaaah!

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#560

spellbound shikha
will b cherishing for very long tym
valentine day will definetly bring the memories of most beautiful epilogue . simply wow .

palin's words made the confession so so so so beautiful 🤗👍🏼it can b described and wished can"t i hold the place where geet was 😳