[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89] - Page 53

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Posted: 12 years ago
Didu...
This is so real, not too mushy, not too romantic...
The perfect blend of all emotions...
So many of the things said actually makes sense to me now...
They feel real you know...
Loved it Didu...
Love you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
so beautiful everything...really a fairy tale...the poems were just so lovely n perfect ... omg aftr tht they r wtng fr 2 loong years fr their engagement...really maan has so patience...is it th end of epilogue...doesnt seem tht...i mean want more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg... This is fantabulous... I am completely speechless...
The whole update gave me the feel of walking through a dream... a fairytale shall i say...
Mujhe bhi Maan chahiye...
It was such a splendid and amazing piece of work... The best thing I have come across in months...
And the poems were the soul of the update. I am short at words to describe the beauty of the poems... Simply fabulous
What love is!!! sigh!!! Why do men like Maan only exist in fairytales!!!
This was the perfect for the most beautiful love story... Thank you...
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Posted: 12 years ago
if it weren't for this story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
very beautiful ending
awesome one
thanx for the pm dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome epilogue.something unique in itself. poems were beautiful. loved it to da core.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

Just came across this today...

What a wonderful story...
In the throes of love with Maan were we, when we wrote this? (That's a tricky question which I can never answer🤣 )
Unrequited love and Maan, have to say a very interesting concept; given the soft hearted creatures that we tend to be...
(Oh yeah That is there. You can never see Unrequited love from guy's side...may be not even from girl's side😆)
Loved it a lot Shika. Very touching story. Cute friendship... Can I say I liked Rehan..First Vicky now Rehan... I am liking the second leads too much... something is wrong with me..
(I love Rehan too and I love VIcky too. So nothing is wrong with you. If it is, I am in with you. Count me in😆)
Epilogue coming up?
I guess I found it at the right time...
😊
Glad to have you here Avi🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: had2bu

Beautiful...

A fairytale come true ending..
Loved both the poems Palin... we have a poet in our midst here.
I won't even go into characterization or anything right now as I feel like a toasted marshmallow right about now.
How do you write in a manner that melts me everytime... superb Shikha.
I am glad you continued with the epilogue...
Truly fitting end to a beautiful story...



Now that's a compliment coming from someone who does that to me with her writing. Palin is the only reason I have written the epilogue. She was the one who asked me and made me write the epilogue with her poems. If there were no poems of hers, the epilogue never would have materialized :)
Btw I am grinning to have you as a toasted marshmallow. Now just praying that Jeeju would watch you in this state ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: TheBrat



Now that's a compliment coming from someone who does that to me with her writing. Palin is the only reason I have written the epilogue. She was the one who asked me and made me write the epilogue with her poems. If there were no poems of hers, the epilogue never would have materialized :)
Btw I am grinning to have you as a toasted marshmallow. Now just praying that Jeeju would watch you in this state ;)

The poems were icing on the cake but the cake was totally melt in the mouth too.
I am going to look and find your author page so I can catch up on all your stories..
I have to say that swing scene is so perfect. We have a swing in the backyard and that's where we usually end up after the day so like Sheesh you are stalking me too. I loved that scene.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi dear...finally en epilogue! lol! Thanks 4 da pm n beautiful update! Superbly written! U r an amazing writer! Loved it. The Poems were wonderful

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