Maaneet OS ~ Kismat (Last Part ~ Pg63) 18/09

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juhi92

@juhi92

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#361

is a beautiful story.
wonderful full of loveee

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#362

just can't stop my tears

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#363

oh gosh I still have tears, it was a wonderful OS Dia, i know did not expect that geet would die, but atleast she could realize maan's love was only for her...

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Beautiful Story ...but that was unexpected twist

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#365

oh she died but gave such beautiful memories to cherish . loved it .

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Pooja Verma

@impoojaverma

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#366

jusz came across to dis OS of urs

di u make me cry

i will not say u dat y u killed geet in d end

it was d perfect end to dis OS

geet's pain her misery make me cry

loved it to d core

wonderful job by u di

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Hi dear..thanks 4 da sad intense n heart breaking update! Beautifully written! Vicky teasing Geet! Dadi sciold hin n Aarav tells abt Pari! Annie taeses him! Maan n Geet happy bt Maan decides to consummate their relationship on their anniversary! Maan gifts her a saree n takes her to Farmhouse ! Their is a pooja n Maan pust sindoor n Mangalsutra! Maaneet finally one ! Maan keeps Geet happy! Geet pregnant n Maan fulfills all her wishes! Geet has a baby girl! Aarav happy! Geet dies serving her country! Maan n teh family shattered! Dadi diesa yr later n Vasundhara depressed! Aarav brave n stands by Maan n takes care of Maansi! Geet died happily! Aarave proud of his mom! Loved this Os! Thanks 4 da fantabulous OS! 👏Very touching! U r a brilliant writer! ⭐️sorry 4 late likes n comments! Pls update Mitwa wen u have tym! Thanks 😛

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Eza_analyst

@Eza_analyst

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#368

God wht you did...
Whole ff ws painful but ths one is mggg simplyyy god man u killled her...
I swear its 3.30 am here im readibg os wd hope dat it is gonna sonethibg owesome ending nd here u jilled our prinxesss

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miss_dreamy

@miss_dreamy

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#369

geet shouldnt have died😡😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭💔👎🏼😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#370

Tooo emotional.
Just read the whole OS. It was beautifully written.
Geet is a real fighter and angel.
Maan fell in love with her.
I feel very bad about geet's death. But still the story was beautiful.
Veryyy well written. Loved it.