Maaneet OS ~ Kismat (Last Part ~ Pg63) 18/09

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#381

awesome os

loved it so much

ending was sad, u made me cry allot😭

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birdy2011

@birdy2011

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

i dont know what to say ...beautifully written ...you protrayed their feelings very well ...nice os😊

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runisha

@runisha

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

U made me cry nd laugh at once.words wl b less to express hw good it was.kya os lekha apne di.just cdn't hold my tears.

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rashi_jain

@rashi_jain

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

a really really beautiful story!!!

different concept
very emotional
luvd ur writing style

keep writing!!!!
👏👏👏

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

never expected such an ending..
but watevr it ws superb..
loved it alot..
really emotional one..

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Jayeeta Paul

@Jayeeta_06

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

beautiful ff...😃loved it...❤️

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kanika

@kank_dah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

loved it.really touching nd emotional update

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AAINAPATEL

@AAINAPATEL

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#388

Superb ss... And very much emotional too... Geet was so selfless... Lvd maansi and aarav too... And the charcter of amar nd jai was also fab. Wndrful ss... Thnx 4 shrng.

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fariya20

@fariya20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#389

awsum os dear just love it
geet selfless love
maan guilty their marige n son geet journey of an army officer superb
love each part n lines but last one made sad geet is no more she lived with maan only 6 year 6 year sepration bhi tha just awsum