Maaneet OS ~ Kismat (Last Part ~ Pg63) 18/09

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

niice part

having tears in eyes mi can only say geet doesnt deserve to die .this end was shocking one .hope u will write another one for us but happy one plz

its request

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Mayamaan

@Mayamaan

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

Its beautyfull no doubts

But...End broke my heart...

sahi kaha di

angels have to return to their home sooner

whenever I read it I cry...

this tym also Me crying...

So touching

yet real story of life...

Loved it whole heartly

Thank you for this beautyfull gift.

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

😭u made me cry again...😭

this is 1 story in which i cried reading every part...😭😭

really i din expect this ending in my worst dream...

aisa kyu hua...😭

u r right god has punished maan by taking her away...😭

evn m proud ki geet died for her countary...

😭 😭😭

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

part 5
last part
OMG Dia u killed Geet...
twas so painful...
she got happiness in the 6 years but Maan...
sigh nice one dear and i demand a happy OS at least...

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

loved it...so beautiful...

brought tears to my eyes

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Didn't expected this type of ending.
i just guessed in the starting of the update itself..so i didn't read whole update.
chaye wo meri favorite writer hi ho, ya meri sabse favorite story hi ho, i can't read sad ending stories.
starting mey itna sad tha so i thought it will be happy ending . but you just made it all sad. and i will not encourage any sad ending parts
sorry. you are my fav writer.

real life mey tragedy har ek insaan ke life mey hoti hey, so i expect FF OS to be a happy ending one. and i am not angry at you. because i liked your writing . just that i really wanted to say this things. hope that you don't mind.

ps: lappy nahi hey, mobile sey first time post kar rahi hun, don't no hey post hogi bi ya nahi, actually seeing the part i just wanted to first comment to lighten my heart.

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

You made me cry Dia...what started as a passionate and happy last part turned into an emotional and beautiful epilogue...

Her life was too short but you finally did justice to her sincerity towards her country...I loved every bit of it. More so because I can't give too many details but also because I have a very dear friend who under some personal circumstance, chose to leave marriage and joined Indian Army. Your story was very close to my heart and I loved it.