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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: Dilsay
After a long time I could see my gurl is back ...👏
thanks dear
throughly enjoyed reading back to back updates so the story is near to end ..
I loved to see this Geet and this egoistic Maan ...
will wait eagerly for 2morrow

:D
how r u firstly... yes.. back maybe little.. but there are not enough reder.. me getting all upset... however..
i am looking for some strong storyline.. i will finish this quick.. letting u alll know that i am bc.. and with animosity and heartbeat... than hopefully i get good reader for my new one...
lol
what do u think..
i dont now.. do u even like this story?
x

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: J.Rahman
superb update.

finally maaneet is one body one soul.
it was super hot and passionate part.
wow MSK is all ready to take over khurana's
I am loving it.

i am glad u enjoying it ;)

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet
Wow temperature arises...
Bt all readers r happy :D
am i right?
Want more such parts...

Maan gonna takeover KC... Wow!
Bt is he confusing geet or is geet unable to understnd him?

Conti soon.
N plzzz conti "Resemble" too.plz

i will let me finish this then i sure will ;)

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theresa

@tintinu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

wow! 4 back to back update me me im so so glad to read ur update dear ,they r awesome

immm so maan is back where he belong to ,happy for geet atlast she got wat she dreamt n waited for

but never image she will 😳give in to maan so easily lol

still maan is an enigma ,wat the khurana's big secret

really missed ur ff dear happy ur now updating regularly

hope now ur ff 's r not copied 😆

Edited by tintinu - 13 years ago

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Delicious

@Delicious

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Owo 4 parts, this is truly breathtaking

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

wow...awesome n beautiful update...

loved it tooo much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...